SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

It was roughly a little over halfway through the movie when I heard loud sobbing coming from behind me. I slowly turned my head to see who was crying and they were sitting a few seats further up, right behind me. I was surprised to see it was a guy. I couldnt see him so I turned back towards the movie.
**Swayam's POV**
I was watching the movie and couldnt help but break into girly sobs. I sat at the back of the room,by myself since all the boys had refused to accompany me because it was too 'girly'.

Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

People were starting to turn around to look at me and I couldnt afford to have any teenage girl recognize me, so I pushed back my tears. I saw the girl sitting a few rows ahead of me turn around and prayed to God she wouldnt recognize me. In the dark I could hardly see her . She looked at me and quickly turned back around. I hadnt needed to see her igreen eyes to recognize her. She was the girl from Starbucks. What are the chances of seeing her here?!? I thought.
I fnorgot about the movie, and stared at the stubborn waitress who I just couldnt seem to get out of my head.
I observed her and saw that she was sitting next to someone, and looking closer I realized it was a guy. He turned around to whisper something to her, and she laughed..

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

. She leaned towards him and placed her head on his shoulder as he wrapped anarm around her.
Suddenly it all made sense: of course she wasnt interested in me, it wasnt because I wasnt good looking enough! She was taken. I mentally slapped myself for thinking that a girl didn't want me, but her being taken just made me want her more..
I watched them for a moment longer, before getting up. I wasnt going to stick around to watch them ! I made my way to the end of the row of empty seats and headed for the doors. I quickly walked out and pulled my shades in front of my eyes and my hoodie over my hair to make sure no one recognized me.

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

I thought back to when I saw her a few minutes ago cuddling up to that guy. It annoyed the hell out of me. I don't know why but I didn't like it. And I also didn't like the feeling I got when I saw her with the guy. I had to get rid of this all dis as soon as possible and the only way was to get her and forget about her like every other normal girl.
But something in my head told me it wasn't going to be easy because she wasn't just like every other girl.

so guys,how was it?
do hit the like tab and leave ur precious comments😊
NOTE:my xams are coming up,so gonna be inactive from 15oct till december
.This is the last update ,next update wil be only in december..
SO,till then bye.
Regards
Nisha..

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

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Superb update nish!!Im so glad that I was the first one to comment!and that too for an update like this!!very well written...loved the way you have penned down both Sharon and Swayam's points of view...Sharon does not like Swayam and yet to some extent she sympathized with him and then contradicted herself by saying that she felt no pity for him. She is getting affected by Swayam, she is thinking about him. On the other hand, Swayam is paradox personified...i just love his character...he is a typical bad boy and yet somewhere deep down he is a marshmallow..come on, he sheds tears over emotional movies!!aww...that is so very cute!he is happy to know that the girl rejected him just because she was taken and yet is jealous to see her with another guy...i am so falling in love with Swayam here!!Nish kudos to you for creating such a new Swayam!!love you for that!!I am looking forward to quite intense scenes in this ff...the characters are so well etched out that i am beginning to expect a lot from this ff!!

Edited by idiot_box - 12 years ago

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

WOW...awesome work sweetheart ...u r making me fall in love with both the characters ...loved the way you designed their characters...loving this FF 👏👏👏

She can't stop thinking about him...awww... so sweet ...she didn't like him...still he affected her...

"it seemed like he never wanted to leave my thoughts - which was quite annoying since he wasn't exactly my favorite person . He thought he could do anything just because he was famous, leave that: He thought he could get any girl just because he was famous."

She is feeling bad for him ...sympathizing with him for his thought process...but still hating him...contradicting her own opinion...

For a moment I felt kind of bad for him: What kind of people must he be surrounded with to think that way?

Casanova crying over an emotional movie...interesting angle to his character ...he recognized her even in dark cinema hall...majnu boy soul in casanova body i guess😆😆

I hadnt needed to see her green eyes to recognize her. She was the girl from Starbucks.

He didn't like her getting close to some other guy...but her being with someone else made him want her more ...interesting character ...

Suddenly it all made sense: of course she wasnt interested in me, it wasnt because I wasnt good looking enough! She was taken. I mentally slapped myself for thinking that a girl didn't want me, but her being taken just made me want her more..

He is jealous...seeing her with someone else...he wants to get her to forget her forever...and he know she won't be easy girl to get...

But something in my head told me it wasn't going to be easy because she wasn't just like every other girl.

Loved loved loved this update swthrt...m loving SWARON in new colors...I know u won't update till December...i am going to miss u like hell 😭😭 ...all the very best for ur exams baby.👍🏼...do welll...love u ...❤️

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Nice one nish...ur a great writer!!!

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reet_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Great update and thanks for pm

All the best for your exams

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Yogini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

SSDC . . . . Nyce . . . . Dancers are celebs & they all are in the group 😉
sharon is thinking abt swayam . . . . Dats a gud sign 😃
sam . . . . . 1st chappy me mujhe laga tha ki simmi hogi uski best frnd . . . . . But yahan to pura game hi palat gya 😆
swayam flirt karta rah gya aur sharon ne to already sam ko dhundh liya
awww . . . . . . He's sobbing . . . . He's emotional . . . . . 1st time I feel like hugging him in this ff 😃
ahan . . . . Jealous . . . . . The gal is taken . . . . Ouch dil pe lag gyi 😈
ab kya karega . . . . . Breakup karwayega 🤣

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

nyc part nisha...👏👏

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