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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Loved the update... It was superb.

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Maz786

@Maz786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Thanks for another GREAT update Naina. Loved it. I Love you FF so much, that I am now reading from chapter 1 again😉.

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

I love Khushi's spunk. Great update.

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Jignasha

@pal89711

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I absolutely loved this specific chapter of FF. I really liked the way captured the dynamics of two people from different worlds with different priorities trying to make the most of their professional life as well as personal. The understanding that both Arnav and Khushi have came to at this point in their relationship is tremendous. The most important element of a relationship i feel is communication and trust, because you need to be able to tell you partner about your feelings in terms of everything. Just like you said through Arnav: You want your partner to be your strength not your weakness I really like the way you have portrayed both character in this chapter. As far as the rabba ve moments, I'm looking forward to them hopefully we'll see some soon. 😊😊😊

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Hi Naina,

I have just started reading this FF, and I must say I am absolutely besotted with this couple. Not only because they are strong individual characters, but also because being in a relationship didn't do any damage to this individuality.

And the cuteness of Khushi and awkwardness of Arnav are certainly a treat to read.

I have also seen your author notes assuring readers about the desire-o-meter not going down, but if I won't be overstepping my boundaries, I will say this, as much as I have enjoyed the kissing scenes in the FF, the ones I really did adore were the ones that explored the nervousness, the excitement, the shyness of a new relationship. Keep it going! 😊

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mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Jalabee junction is a go for khushi. good to hear that she is getting somwer.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

OK, the way you have it set, I didn't feel so bad. He realized his mistake (I'll give him that - he is not used to matters of the heart and so he behaved the way he does in the business world. And I'm glad she was a spitfire!) I hope he feels her absence. He's so much in control, it feels that he has no feelings at all. I would really like to see him lose it - for her!! I mean, I know he has feelings for her (love, eventually when he is hit with the realization, I'm hoping??) but he always seems to be in control. And with the upper hand. I want to see him lose control with her doing nothing but just being there. And I want to see her being in control, for once!! Diamine! I'm sorry, please write your story your way. But I would love to see him lose control, for once!!!😃 Hehehe!

This chapter was pretty soft, nothing much happening. I hope that was him in person. Your cliffhangers will kill me one day!!!

Waiting anxiously for the next update!

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Glad to see that Khushi's idea for business is coming together!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Thank you for the PM!!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

I love the pace of your story - it has a certain 'realism' to it. Not everything has to be volatile passion; this is essentially the exploration of Khushi's road to independence which runs in parallel with her burgeoning relationship with Arnav. I really look forward to each chapter!