ARHI FF: Master Class: Thread 3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Naina

I love the story so far - like the independent, fiesty Khushi.

Really nicely done

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

I am loving the PACE and the PROGRESS!! Its the REAL FEEL in this relationship that ensnares us...so don't change the story strictly for the Rabba Ve moments. Remember...real and true rabba ve's are very profound and life defining for this couple, so they should not be trivialized.

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Arshi86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Awww, he is there to celebrate with her.

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

I think these two are past the eyelocks Rabba ve's

This was a great update, a little bit of everything including Aman's thoughts. How often do we get that? Very real pace.

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sunshine99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Another wonderful update naina... U have beautifully maintained the pace of the story.the relationship is progressing with a touch of realism and tht's the beauty of it...rabba ve is a sweet breather now and then but the situations evolving their relationship is much more interesting...

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Aparna Mohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

I knew he would come now,especialy its late night & she's alone at the office 😉 but I honestly didnt expect to give us a cliffhanger on that Naina?! 😔
Now I can't wait to know what will happen next

Arnav gets turned on when she's angry?! 😃
Amazing update Naina,especialy when you summarised our Arshi's 2weeks & their relationship status on a few weeks. .nicely written

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

superb update...

thanks 4 d pm

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S003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Naina,

I'm only going to say this one... YOU ARE THE AUTHOR and we are tuning in to read your version of the story... the build up is just as important...

can I just say I can't believe you have me tuned in for 33 parts desperately awaiting the celebration in part 34😉

oh and loved it...

Love

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abayance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

liking growth in both the characters :D

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christmas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

sigh. lovely update. i really do like the relationship dynamic that you are showing. as you mentioned in your note. it is two different world. and different world or not beginning stages are always full of so many emotions and things. i like that your khushi is not losing sight of herself and if she seems like she might that the asr is there to remind her.

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