*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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Hubze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

Just one word 'Beautiful' seriously the way you have describe khushi's emotion it just beautiful. Explains a lot about how khushi left and still feeling...

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

awe some update yar ..yo describe it greatly yar:)

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MissElektra101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

This chapter is powerful! It's really sad to read about her suffering!

Can't wait to read more! Well written! LOVE THIS SS!!!!!!

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#684

i was dying to get khushi's perspective, & now that i have one my heart bleeds for this poor girl..it was simply perfect..every word, every detail touched my heart...i guess the motherly figure is the doctor...well, i may be wrong...also the note helped to clear a few doubts...anyways do you update soon...thanks for the pm.. 😊

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

I'm glad that you decided to write Khushi's POV.

It was so well written that now I'm disturbed after reading this. The enormity of Khushi's suffering can be seen in a single line - But this light hurts my eyes. I'm used to the darkness, to the pain.

Phenomenal work. Keep it up!

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

Wow...Brilliantly written...loved Khushi's POV...Her scars run deep...Arnav has a tough task ahead to make her believe in rainbows again...Thanks for the PM...You are a gifted writer.With a few words, you portrayed Khushi's feelings so well.