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Posted: 13 years ago
When I read it the first time I already loved it! I had figured the footsteps to be Arnav, but the other things I just assumed to be the pain, fear, abuse and all.

But then at the end you gave your symbolism. And so I read it again and I loved it even more! 😊

I finally got Khushi's point of view and it was definitely not what I expected!

From start to finish, I saw how Khushi had just been immersed into some unknown darkness. She didn't even understanding all the things that were happening to her or why they were.

Now I know she knew what was being done to and with her to some extent but what I mean I that as we all cried for the pain and fear she just have been feeling was not even justified because she had been wretched from the bright world and thrown into darkness she had never seen. We can hardly imagine how that must have felt.

This was a brilliant part as always! I'm becoming sad as your nearing the end... 😔

As a side note hopefull as my gibberish above made some sense 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Khushi, beautifully written...
Thanks for the PM! Please update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully written...

i think who ever has been a part of this story from the beggining will understand what you are trying to potray...and you failing as a writer is really hard!!!

i am really happy that you gave insight into khushi's pov...i wanted it for quite sometime now and what a beautiful way to present it!!!

love the story!!! plz don't make us wait for long!!!!

the only doubt i have is that we all know that shyam and anjali are a part of arna's life here also but are the other family members also there.???

and waht exactly is arnav's relationship with lavanya???
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Zehra
this is awesome
khushi's pain is so palpable like you can feel it with your heart
you can see it infront of your eyes
brilliantly written
beautifully depicted emotions
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this chapter from Khushi's pov.
beautifully written
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Posted: 13 years ago

That was so painful,,poor khushi😭
brilliant writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...loved the way it was written by u...thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 13 years ago
nicely part khusi's past and present stat...
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Posted: 13 years ago
What can I say Zehra... You have written Kushi's emotions very well... wow... Aw, poor girl.. I really feel so sad for her... I want her to be alright soon... waiting for the next part... Thank u for the beautiful update Zehra...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful To Read Khushis Thoughts & Seems She Loves Her Baby & It Will Be Her Reason For Living :) 😳

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