*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional - Page 67

Gosh I feel for Khushi all over.
Beautifully written.
The soothing presence that stayed in the background is whom? Pls clarify that part.

aww pooor khushi :( you can break down a seive, thats not too hard :P

Beautiful update

Liked it

This update describe khushi's pain and her struggle very well….it heart touching….one thing is clear after reading this that Khushi acknowledge about Arnav's effort to bring her back to her old self.

Pls cont. asap

I love it!i love it!!
totally feel khushi's emotions!
Her fear is boundless...arnav has to do soo much more to make her be alive!!
continue soon!!!

Oh at last been waiting for u... That was the reason i sent u the pm which i sent this ws so beautifully written i cant express in words... The pain the fear everything was present n i felt it... I read the full update holding my breath... Now the guess time my guess is the arms which were holding her hands were one of doc n one of Aman... N the presence which hugged her was her child n off course no guess for footsteps as it was obviously of Arnav even if u havent put the words there n yes i guess the blackwater represents her abortion which never happend and the fire represents the operation which also didnt happen ... Thanx for clearing tht part as i thought its flashback of khush's memory but now its clear... Thnx for PM do update soon... N plz m gonna send u pm today abt wht we have discussed m so sorry for delay i hope u r not angry n ur ans is still yes

that was simply beautiful update and everything was clear

Great update.loved the story from khushi's pov.

This update very needed... Khushi s Pov...

Thank u for the Pm !!!!

really loved it!!