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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Lovely update Zehra ! It felt really nice reading Khushi's POV after all she has gone through.Scars run deep and she may need time to heal and that will take time ! Thank you so much for the PM dear 🤗

Edited by -sweetgal19- - 13 years ago

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chemistry9

@chemistry9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#692

this was awsm mind blowing

loved it

heart touching

emotional

d way u wrote khushi's feelings is superb

thnx fr d pm

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

I read once, it was confusing.. I read again, it was crystal clear.. The emotion turmoil within Khushi was beautifully written. Well thought update. Applause2...
The pain Khushi went through and now the ray of hope she's getting is yet to succeed in pulling her out of the darkness she's in. The footfall keeps failing, well I guess it serves him right! I think he should fail more to feel and appreciate the success later. Hope khushi will be able to see more light than darkness after this.

Thanks for the update.

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

it felt better to understand her POV.
cos i was so unsure if she was getting affected by him or not.
so it felt so comforting. cos she knows he is helping her. 👍🏼

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soulstarspirit

@soulstarspirit

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

I am speechless after reading this.Actually have no words to describe that how a beautiful and intense writer you are 😛.As i always say..Brilliant part.Simply loved it.I actually feel like reading your stories again and again.
Thank u for pm 😃

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

this was soo beautifully written...wonderful work zehra...

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

Amazing...
Loved it..😊

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noclapsplease

@noclapsplease

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

I was waiting for Khushi's point of view ..
I was so relieved seeing that she is affected by his presence and behaviour .. Nice update ... continue soon 😃

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sairam03

@sairam03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#699

Still trying to decode ur message. Some parts are clear but some are confusing. The words light ,darkness and footfalls describe her pain...she had gone thru a lot.Hopefully she comes back to normal.