FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

What's in a name? :P

@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Really a very interesting ss.The first and second part was seriously fantastic. Very well written. That's what i loved about this ss. Lets see how this student -teacher love story gets carved :). Thank you for the pm. Update Soon. :)

Quote

.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

fantablous lazy leave sorry honey i dnt knw ur name.

well sami u better better update next part soon i m very curious to know what happen next

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

The collab has been declareds a great success !!

I loved the second part !
Khushi ducking under the table to hide from him, but who has ever been able to run away from his eyes ? And I loved how in the end its Khushi who's responsible for showing Arnav around !

Now lets see how this "campus trip" turns out !

Quote

Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Wow...That was Awesome update...Loved it

Khushi is trying to hide herself under the bench n Arnav couldn't stop imaging there encounter...Khushi n Arnav r along again...

Waiting for next part..

Update sooon

Quote

Anusree Pradeep

@--sree--

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Read both parts.loved it.thanx for the pm

Quote

lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

I quite liked it. Thnks for the pm. Update soon.

Quote

Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

nice collaboration zehra and samiya! The second chapter was in perfect flow with the first! Good going!

Quote

SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Loved the update... Looking forward to when they are alone...

Quote

J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Omg i jus didnt like but loved it both the chapters equally they say more the hands better the work i guess its true more the minds better the output!! Lol she boozes lik theres no tomorrow and when she gets up she finds herself all naked with another naked guy lmao if that was not enough she finds the same guy but dressed in her class as her lecturer lmao and hes not less he finds the gal fully dressed but as a student n gawd when eva he needs to pause he looks at the third bench lmao seriously n look whose tellin its eww to check a professor out baby u just didnt check out but made out!! lmao!! cant wait for the 3rd part seems interestin as the name f the author changes!!

Cheers for the pm :)