SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13 - Page 4

Hey, Thnx for the PM this is awesome.

Amazing update so touching
I hope nxt part would have sone happy swaron moments

Wow so beautifully u have written. V can feel d pain dat swaron are going through. Can't see sharon in dat condition. Wat will happen next? Pls update soon. Thanx for pm

Awesome update..i loved the way you penned down both Sharon and Swayam's feelings..and i am glad that Swayam stood up for himself instead of giving way to Sharon's temper..I am glad that he is making her realize that sometimes whatever she says in her anger actually hurts the other person beyond repair!!But at the same time i really hope that he forgives her and they get back together very soon!!One thing i really like about this ss is that Sharon and Swayam seem both really human unlike the current track in the show..here Sharon finally realizes her mistake and Swayam takes a stand for himself which is great!!

Hey guys...This is the 3rd part of this SS...hope you all like it ...and thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging .. 😊😊😊

I want to dedicate this part to few of my IF friends ...

Suku_SwaRon (sukanya ) ,meevee(meera) , tejukor (tejal), Rutu , shaani2209(Roshani) ,swaron_d3(ananya) ,Sudha_SK (sudha) ,surbhimathur, marauder(shishir) ... thanx friends for those long ... sweet ...comments & feedback 😊

Hope u all like this part ...


Recap:

Sw( got up) ...u said those things because u wanted to ...that was truth ...finally it came out ...if u think I don't deserve you then be it ... I wont bother u with my presence any more ...(started leaving )

Shar: don't say that swayam ...please don't leave me ... I can't imagine my life without u ...i cant imagine my life without your love ...

Sw : u have to sharon ...I don't think I love u any more... (he left)

And he left ...he left a devastated Sharon behind him ... Crying ...hurt ... Broken ...

His last few words still echoed in her ears ..

"I don't love u any more "

Part-3

She woke up from her sleep ...Sweating...Horrified...she looked around ...she sighed ...it was a dream ...a terrible dream ...she checked the time...it was 3 AM ...

She thought ...

Arrghhh ...Enough is enough ...I cant take it any more ..i have to talk to him ...I will talk to him tomorrow ...

Morning :In college ...

She entered the college ... she was looking different from her usual self ... She was looking weak ...pale ...scared ...lost ...she didn't even try to hide her dark circles with make up caused due to lack of sleep ... Lack of sleep because of him ... She was not able to eat ,sleep ,think ...because of him ...

In class ...she took a seat near him ...he left that seat and went to sit near Rey ... simmi entered the class room and took that seat ...

I need to talk to him ...I have to talk to him ...she was in her own world of thoughts...

Simmi :Sharon...sharon ...wat are u thinking ?

Sharon (came out of thoughts) :nothing ...nothing imp ...

Simmi:why r u looking so weak ...so pale ..R u ill ?R u having fever ?

She kept her hand on her forehead ...checked if she is having fever...

Sharon smiled at her concern ...her friends were tensed for her ...but the one person whose concern and care she needed was not giving any reaction ...as if he was not even bothered about her existence...

Looking at these two girls Swayam thought ...

What is wrong with her ?...why she is looking so weak? ...unhappy ...she wanted me to leave her ... She wanted me to go out of her life ...I went ...now what is her problem?... I can't see her like this ... I don't care she feels for me or not ...but I love her too much to see her like this ...No swayam ...u can't go back to her ...she wanted u to go away ... u have to go away from her ... U have to keep distance from her ...

Class got over ...sharon went towards swayam ...He was talking to Amar ,Bharath and Rey ...

Sharon :Swayam ...i need to talk to u ...

Swayam:I don't want to talk to you ...

Sharon :Swayam ..please (she forgot that their friends are not aware about their relationship ...she was worried only about him)

Bharath :kya me sapna dekh raha hu ..sharon ne swayam ko please bola ...

Sharon(angry) :kyu koi rule he kya ... ki me swayam ko please nehi bol sakti ...

Back to swayam ...swayam please I need to talk to u ...

Swayam :I told u ..i don't want to ...(he left that place... started walking towards RH)

Sharon followed him ...

He went and sat there thinking about her ...why she is behaving like this ...she told me to leave her ...I left ...why she is testing my patience ...arrghhh ... (head down ...pulling his hair out of confusion and frustration)

Sharon stormed into RH ...closed the door from inside ...

He looked up...saw her ...

Sw:Wat are u doing here ?Wat do u want ?

Sh: I need to talk to u ...please hear me out ..plzzz ...

Sw: Enough Sharon ... I am not ur doll ...I will do whatever u want me to do...u can play with me whenever u want to and throw me away when u are bored...u told me to go away from u ...I left ...wat do u want from me now...???

Sh: I want YOU...

Sw:Wat ?

Sh:I want you in my life ...

Sw:To do wat ? Why do u want me in your life?To hurt me again ... to break my heart again ...Sorry Miss Sharon Raiprakash ...I don't want to be a part of ur life ...m done with u ...i will get over u ...soon ...

Precap:

Then she did something ...which surprised even her ...it was like she was not controlling her body ,mind ,heart anymore ...it was the her pain , guilt, hurt ,confusion ,passion, longing ... Her love for him ... all these feelings took over her heart and mind ... completely ...

hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment.. i will wait for your comments and feedback

I know.. in this part also they are fighting only ... but i have surprises for u all in next parts ...sach me 😊

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Why did you stop there ??😡

Dude tht was mind blowing...i hope they sort out their difference soon...

Thnx for pm nd update soon