SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

You conveyed both their emotions beautifully !! Swayam's hurt and Sharon's frustration, then guilt !! It was all so perfect !! And it was awesome to read all of Swayam's famous lines !! Can't wait for you to update the next chapter !!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Nice start. And Swayam's dialogues added charm to the SS. I really hope Sharon doesn't say the same things to Swayam in the show😳

Anyways coming to the update,beautifully described their feelings, Swayam's undaunted efforts in the beginning and Sharon's inner turmoil. Good to see that she still cares for him but Swayam looked away when he saw her. I guess he is upset or maybe he is still following her wish to stay away from her.Now its Sharon turn to get him back.

Update soon

And thanks for the PM

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hey Dips ...thanx for taking us down memory lane with all the memorable landmarks of teh SwaRon fairytale...u r mindblowing with the emotions...u hav written brilliantly and each sentiment u have expressed and everything u hav written from Sharon's POV makes us relate to her and echoes what SwaRon actually means and matters to us...right now I dont even hav the patience to wait for teh next part...pls pls update soon...

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nice SS...an emotional...most beautiful quality of swaron...this is wat i want to see...no no not the accident of swayam...i want to see swayam react or question Sharon so that she will get to know howz his condition...plzz do PM me...

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing concept
Sharon sontimes beconed quite harsh
Old dialogues flashed swaron's journey in my mind
Do continue soon

Edited by D3rockssss - 13 years ago

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Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

amazing start👏 all old dialogue takes me to beautiful flashback journey😃 sharon shouldn't have said that but she realize it & feeling guilty😭 u penned down their emotions very beautifully

poor swayam had an accident but as of now sharon is there i'm sure he will feel better😊

update soon & thanks for pm

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome start,update next part soon

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shantanu.swayam

@shantanu.swayam

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Great job!

Very well written and emotional.

Please update soon and PM me.😊

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Sameera Dhanraj

@coolsameera

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

AWESUM START . . . EAGERLY WAITING FR D NXT PART. . . NXT TYM PM ME PLZ😊

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honeyangel

@honeyangel

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

"Your wish my command" how can we forget... Always Sharon's wish is swayam's command..
back to topic... SwaRon SS was really nice... i liked it 😊 Keep updating and do Pm me 😛