MG OS Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi last part /Pg 24 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
haila part two bhi tha
aww bless she was having fun in the rain huh
and then he went out to play in the rain
and then in the bedroom
hehe that was sweet
you are continuing more with this huh cool
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
such a sweet story...wow...just loved it...
it is so simple and so full of love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
jahan pyar hota hai unha gussa nehi hota hai...dono ek doosre ko samajhte hai...aur maan ne bhi geet k baat ko samajh liye...yehi hote hai jeevansaathi...

excellent n fabulous update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64



Maan-Geet loved each other...

they both are happy...

and in between Geet is thinking about her life before marriage...

how her parents fix her marriage...she was reluctant to marry first but after she saw Maan she was happy...how her innocent mind was filled with all the crap about husband and their dominance...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: simrancuty


i luvddd it
luvddd it
luvddd it...
it was such a cute n romantic sa update.. hayeee like a dream...
maan was nehrifying his mishty his jaan geet... aweee... n geet is in love with his dream man maan ...
meri sharmili si geet... maan thinking n talking in thoughts...
its nyc u chnge it into a ss...
overall osmmm update..

hy can i make a request to u???
i knw its a really idiot type req.. bt...
plzzz u dont add any intimacy in this... as frstly i dont read tht.. n dont evn get tht...
its jst a req... rest is in ur hands.. as u hav to see others choice too...



heyyy dear .. thank u soo much for comment .. m glad 😃

for request .. dear u dont need to request . its your and all readers right to suggest me what they like n want ...

for intimacy .. i hv some limitation in my writing as i too dont like to show full intimacy .. m not comfortable in it ...( m quite sarmili type 😛.. and this is u see in my all ff 😉😆) ... so you dont have to be worry about it 😉

but i have one request to you dear ... please read my other stories.. you will sure like 😃





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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Mindblowing awsome hayee me loved it cont asap




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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: gururockss

lovely update monika dear

loved geet s innocence
and maan s love for geet
u r improving as a writer i must say

it was a nice update
waiting for the next update
continue soon dear



thankuuu Ana darling 😉

i got worry yesterday ...😛 thank God u r fit n fine 😃

and thank you so much for appreciation .. i will work harder
⭐️


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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
part 1 n 2
awesome updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
wowww sooo romantic n dreamy update lovu...u described each emotion of geet sooo beautifully awesome...👏
waise maan ka kam hi hai geet ko tang karna 😉...luved it❤️...jaldi se next part ki update dena...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: geet.lover



heyyy dear .. thank u soo much for comment .. m glad 😃

for request .. dear u dont need to request . its your and all readers right to suggest me what they like n want ...

for intimacy .. i hv some limitation in my writing as i too dont like to show full intimacy .. m not comfortable in it ...( m quite sarmili type 😛.. and this is u see in my all ff 😉😆) ... so you dont have to be worry about it 😉

but i have one request to you dear ... please read my other stories.. you will sure like 😃








tht really gud... m really nt comfortable in it...
i wuld luv to read all ur writings also... bt i need smtime 4 tht...
as m reading nealy more than 10 ff's n also writing my ff... '
n also busy with my study.. bt surely i promise.. i'll strt other of ur writings soonn...😛

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