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Ratna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: geet.lover

thank you so much ratna.. glad that u r back.. i had been waiting for your lovely comment ... 😃

Monika 🤗...u are welcome dear...the least i could do...thank u for everything u do...love your care and concern...glad to have a friend like u 😊

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

loved it yaar...

when I read note on the top being inspired by GHSP and then marriage mantras then groom being Maan...my first reaction I was scared that u will show Maan as cheater like Dev of GHSP...

but later reading it I became happy...

it was so sweet and beautiful...

thanx for pm...

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hayee !!!!!!! kitna shona update tha waise epilogue milengi kya????? m just curious to knw n ofcourse would love to read it

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow it was just beautiful...you scripted the original SR night of Geet but with Maan replacing an ugly memory with a beautiful one...

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

lovely OS
loved it
is it completed or one more part is left

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: mounacuty
hayee !!!!!!! kitna shona update tha waise epilogue milengi kya????? m just curious to knw n ofcourse would love to read it

Thanks dear :)

heyy i am making mind to give next part but now its not sure...
so if i update will sure PM you .. :)

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome, beautiful os
loved it
loved the way described the feeling
so beautiful
loved it

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kkiddoopms

@kkiddoopms

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

awesome os dear will love it if u continue it as it really awesome and would love to read more parts ...😉

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

WHAT A LOVELY OS

THE TIME RIGHT AFTER MARRIAGE WHEN YOU ARE STRANGER TO EACH OTHER AND DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR HEART IS SAYING

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Sorry for late reply dear I was busy but I hav read when U pmed me it is really sweet.How Geet looks she seems a lil child to me who always search for parents.Loved ti very much .Thanz for this dear

Lov

Sonia