MG OS Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi last part /Pg 24 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...if not more parts then plzz atleast update a lonnnggg epilogue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

hey...if not more parts then plzz atleast update a lonnnggg epilogue dear




okk dearrr... apni baat hui thi naa 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii me (Monika) again with my fifth story of my dearest Maaneet.. as i started it with OS but all your love made me think to turn it into SS.. i have not decided yet , how long it would go as it will completely depend on how much love and response it gets from you..


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Part 2


Maan stirred his eyes.. feeling new and fresh.. something had changed in his life.. he was not sure what in his unconscious mind but whatever was.. it was good. His hand unkowingly went to next side of him. It was empty, he frowned his forehead thinking what he was trying to find but his heart knew .. it was something or someone important, precious. But what ?? or should I say who ?? .. his mind traveled last night and he jerked open his eyes and sat worrying where is she ?? " geet kaha hai " he said to himself and started to stood when his eyes caught a amazingly lovely sight..

he saw her long hair was, dancing with slight wind.. her wavy feature was making him arouse thinking about their last night or can say their " first night".. he shied and smiled on his own thinking.. "maan ye tu kya soch raha hai .. chup kar " he shouted his thought which was going very far when his heart did a question " ye geet kar kya rahi hai " then he noticed it was raining outside and she was playing with drizzling drops.. she was throwing drops like ball and trying to catch them like a child.. he smiled looking her game.. he bend his head to cover more area to see her face, which was not able to see as she was standing facing her back to him.. he was trying to see her face and when he saw, he forgot to breath.. she was smiling.. her face was glowing with new love, new life she had been gifted today...

"babaji.. maan ko abhi mat uthana.. mai unka saamna kase karungi " she was playing and thinking. Her first night dream was still wandering in her whole body.. she was still feeling his aroma inside her.. she was still living those moment which she always thought, would be so tough and painful but she was wrong.. it felt so good, so right and so easy.. she was being loved by her more precious wish' who was sent by her babaji.. " aur geet.. jab babaji ne unhe tere liye bheja hai to koi bhi chiz mushkil kase ho sakti hai ..hai na " she nodded her head smiling and blushed more..

She was lost in her play and thought when her hand touched by her love.. she skipped her moving moment, feeling His" touch on her shoulder, then elbow and then her palm covered by his tough arm. She closed her eyes feeling more intense.. she felt his chest touched her back and then pressed cozily. Her body replied him that she was accepting his touch.. she found his hand was helping her hand to play with drops.. both hands were playing together in rain, wetting and feeling each other skin with so much fresh emotions..

He wanted to see her face .. he was curious to see his effect on her.. she was not moving like time had stopped for her.. he turned her toward him.. her eyes were closed.. her cheek was crimson, her lips were trembling.. her curls were kissing her cheeks and forehead, challenging him.. how would he not accept their challenge.. he held her chin and removed her curls , put it behind her ears, and kissed her forehead , smiling on them.. " look I did" his mind gave a victory sigh to her naughty curls.. they smiled with this cute game and started playing more.. cold, morning wind was supporting them.. maan was enjoying , removing them from her and kissing there, showing his mark to them'

Geet was standing there.. in his arm, looking everything behind her close eyes.. she knew he was playing with her curls.. he was enjoying her valuer condition as so was she.. she was accepting his every right on her slowly.. she had no objection ,no denial with ant gesture of him.. " ye kaisa jaadu (magic) hai .. ek din me kitna kuch badal gaya " she thought when she felt .. she was moving without her know' she heard a click sound then felt something soft febric below her' her head had been rested on puffy cotton then she came to know..

" babaji' fir se" before her mind could think or guess further she found her self in his bare arm.. touching & covering her sheer body and again her soul met his soul and both went away, traveling in their magical world'.

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Geet was sleeping in each other arm.. celebrating.. having maan in life.. thinking her past ..

" maa papaji.. mujhe ye shadi nahi karni.. please maa i dont want marry.. I have to study .. maa please .. " she made several faces, tried hard to make her mother understand she wants to study more..

" geet beta pahle larke ko mil to le.. you will like him beta" rano said'

"maa per..." before she could complete, rajji & titto barged in her room...

" didi jiju has came.. he is so handsome didi" rajji said happily making geet curious to see him once.. waise she she was not ready to marry,,,,


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" geet.." she felt someone caressing her hair softly.. she opened her eyes.. saw her maan was sitting next to her.. Looking her with love.. " utho geet.. hume nikalna hai" she nodded.

she tried to sit when she realized she could not even move in her revealed condition.. maan eyes were making her more embarrass.. " maan aap jaao na mujhe ready hona hai" her eyes begged.. Cause her lips were not able to in her shy...

" why geet.. mai kyu jasu.. aur haa.. tum baate bana choro aur jaldi karo.. we have to leave fast"

Babaji' mai gin gin ke badlaa lungi inse..aaj bachalo.." she talked to her babaji' " maan please ..aap jaao na ..

" per kyu geet.. aur mai kaha jaau.. its raining outside geet.. tum jaldi ready ho"

"Maan .. aap jaao na.. mujhe sharm aa rahi hai " she finally said as maan was not in mood of leaving her '.maab saw she was being very uncomfortable..

he thought... " maan ab bas kar .. look how she is turning red.."'. " all right geet.. m going.. tum ready ho jaao" and he started leaving ..

" maan" she stopped him. He turned to her " aap gussa to nahi ho na" her heart was beating fast thinking if her denial made him angry..

Maan assured her with eyes' " no geet ..why would i be angry.. tum ready ho jaao..hmm " he left ..

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Geet was getting ready..her thought went to past'.

" dekh geet.. after marriage never say no to your husband.. no man like denial.. samjhi jhalli..." she remembered her friend nandini's words which she told before marriage'

" per maan ne toh bura nahi maana' " she smiled '. " because he cares for me ' and she left to him'..


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Hope You All Will Like This ----

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mindblowing awsome hayee me loved it cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i luvddd it
luvddd it
luvddd it...
it was such a cute n romantic sa update.. hayeee like a dream...
maan was nehrifying his mishty his jaan geet... aweee... n geet is in love with his dream man maan ...
meri sharmili si geet... maan thinking n talking in thoughts...
its nyc u chnge it into a ss...
overall osmmm update..

hy can i make a request to u???
i knw its a really idiot type req.. bt...
plzzz u dont add any intimacy in this... as frstly i dont read tht.. n dont evn get tht...
its jst a req... rest is in ur hands.. as u hav to see others choice too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
lovely update monika dear
loved geet s innocence
and maan s love for geet
u r improving as a writer i must say

it was a nice update
waiting for the next update
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
amazing update
loved it
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome update...:)
nd maan niharofying his geet was jst superb
nd da fb of geet bfore marriage ...was lolz..
making dis girl more confused nd scared ...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
part 2
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...

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