MG OS Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi last part /Pg 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
superb start. loving this innocent geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

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😃 Typing 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
waiting 4 the next part ...
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Part 3


Maaneet was to reached Delhi. Whole Khurana Mansion was ready to celebrate this new arrival of grand Bahu of Khurana Khandaan. All guests were busy in last moment touch of themselves. Children were busy in hide n seek... Young girls were busy in matching theirs makeup with dresses and ladies were matching their gold and platinum jewels with sarees. All aunties were busy in making weird faces as why maan chose that middle class girl for maary , why not thiers rich daughters... and all grannies were busy in ordering and giving lessons on traditions and rituals to a old lady , who was Grand lady of this Mansion. She was savitri Devi, lovely dadimaa of maan and his only family before marriage.

Dadima was busy in nothing but everything... she was all karta dharta of km and this marriage. She was in cloud9 cause of his stubborn and stubborn grand son became married man. Only she knew it was her mission impossible. But she did .. she was jumping here to there. She was very excited … and was waiting eagerly without giving any ear to guests …

" wo log bas pahuchne wale hai ' one shouted … everyone started giving double effort for their rest works... all wanted to be in camera as some media people was also present there to capture , the first glimpse of world Famous businessman Mr. Maan Singh Khurana and his newly wedded wife Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana.

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A pair of red colored small feet drops a vessel, filled with rice and green leaves. It took next step. Then it covered itself with red liquid and marked on floor gracefully. some ladies twist there nose looking those white , marble like feet, decorated with dark heena... some was happy " teri bahu to bahut bhag wali hai savitri... bahut pyaar paayegi apne pati se " a old lady words made geet head down.. in shy. A male pair of eyes looked her smiling..

"maan beta ab aap bahu ko hi dekhte rahenge ya aashirwaad bhi lenge " dadi found perfect time to tease her grandson... geet turned dark red … she wanted to run from here.. her smile was shaking in embarrassment.. dadi came and touched her head making her calm, understanding her condition.. geet composed herself somehow.

Maan n geet bend down to touch dadi's feet... dadi gave them Suhaag ha ashirwaad … 'not again.. geet was now again became more red...' maan eyes were on her she knew. His teasing gaze made her more n more weak... " babaji .. please unko bolo na udhar dekhne ko.. sab hume hi dekh rahe hai ' she complained her babaji. But babaji was too helpless in front of them.

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All rituals finished . It was midnight. All were hell tired. All were resting in their room excluding new couple.

Geet was resting her head on maan chest. She was looking beauty of room. It was huge room like any palace. Yes indeed it was palace and she was here's princess. His princess. Maan was caressing her open hair with one hand. on other hand, he was rested his head. Both were hell tired with all rituals and was living their peaceful moment silently.

"maan... your room is so beautiful.. ' geet said without moving

"our room geet " he corrected.

Geet raised her face and looked him smiling. She nodded. He smiled back. ' maan yaha kon kon rahta hai ?'

" dadi aur mai aur meri geet ' he said with love.

"your geet ?? '

" hmm' he hugged her ..

" my geet ' this word echoed in her everywhere. She felt very nice as he accepted her so cozily. How in one day she became his comfortably and authoritatively. She kissed his cheek in return. He smiled and both slept enjoying their newly found relation..

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A week went like dream. all guests had gone. Geet was easily adjusted there, in new life with maan and dadi. Both loved her. Dadi warm nature and geet innocent nature mixed like milk n water. Maan was very happy found his soul mate in her. She was charm of whole mansion.. She used to go sometime temple, sometimes shopping with dadi. She used to help servants in kitchen, making fav food for maan and dadi. She was good in every household. All were happy with her simple nature…

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One day dadi elder sister was to visit km. she could not come in wedding so wanted to meet new bahu. Dadi was happy and was doing all arrangement where maan was worried. He knew her bari dadi nature. She always wanted a rich bahu for maan as maan was her favourite grandson. And he was afraid what if she say something to geet. He could not bear, being sad of geet. He talked to dadi but dadi made him understand, she will talk to geet. Dadi called geet and told her everything about bari dadi. Geet smiled and assured her , she will manage everything…

Next day BD came. She was fuming as she wanted to marry maan in her relation, who was as rich as them but here maan ended up with geet, who was a simple girl from middle status. She was sitting in hall when geet came. She touched her feet. BD looked her and shocked to see a angelic face standing in front. She impressed with geet grace and charm but still did not show. She turned her face making geet hurt. But as she knew her nature .. she did not mind.

In dinner table also geet made delicious food which was Bd favourite but she again made faces. Dadi and maan was seeing everything. Maan was going to say something when geet stopped her with eyes. Maan angered and left without eating. Dadi looked geet . geet nodded saying don't worry .. I ll made him eat and went to her room.

Maan was sitting on bed doing work in laptop when geet came with dinner. Maan looked her then again resumed work. He was still fuming with BD behaviour. Geet sat next to him and put a spoon in his mouth when maan jerk her hand. By This sudden act food fell on his laptop.. he looked her with red eyes.. she scared looking what mistake she did.. " m sorry " she meekly said and run. Maan followed her when geet opened door and

'boom"

She bumped to BD…..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wowww lovu sooo lovely udate ...i love this family enviourment ...hey me just love the enw entry BD ...hmmm interesting😉...totally diff frm other concept ...something new...wowww lovuuu nyc try n i must say its gonna be awesome...😃...are mein toh dance karna bhul gayi me firsttt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Absolutely awsome loved d description of rituals nd maan's my geet BD i hope she doesnt create any riff b\w maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
lovelyyy update lovu...👏👏

i kwn geet sb thik kar dagi...wo DB ko mana lagi...humari geet hai hi aise...😊😊

maan babu apne gusse pe thora control kiya karo...😛😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPERB Update!!!!!!\
Loved it a lotzzz...
plzz update soon...can't wait to know wat gonna happen next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hayee such a lovely piece of work ..👏

i was actually smiling through the first half of the update ..
the way u narrated the whole grehpravish senario was fab ...⭐️

loved the way maan was gazing her ..😳
awww poor geet red with the blush ..😆
but then she looks too good with it ...😉

n jab MSK kisi par drool kare tou phir tou red hona natural hai ...😳

dadi is always my darling ...(mostly where ever she is a cupid😉 )
i can really well relate to this kind of family atmosphere ..
monopoly ...!!

but then maan hai na geet ke saath ..😃

i was bowled with the way he acepted it ..😳
u r surely gonna make me a diabetic patient one day ...😆

but i would love to be ...if such sweetie cutie updates are on my way ..😃

iiyooo ..Badi dadi ..😡

par geet ki simplicity ..n.. usske pyaar bhare magic ke aage i am sure ziada dair tik nahi paayi gi ..😃

haww pati dev naraaz hugaye ...😕
par yeh kya BD again here ..

not soo well
hope she doesn't act as a pure vamp ..😡

update soon ..
with lots of maaneet moments ..😉

me waiting very eagerly ..😳
loves the way u narrate the story ..⭐️

waiting ...
waiting ...

Luv Ya
Sobia ..😊

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