FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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asr13

@asr13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Loving the direction your story is taking Hun ...by God ki kasam, Maza aa Gaya !!!! Oh and this is the ASR we all fell for hain na ? keep it coming dude, can't wait for Amanji's birthday party now lol ...super dhamaka ...

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Smitzy I'll hire you as the new CV head for IPK. This update is just so awesome. I am reading this in the dark as everyone is sleeping in this room (it's 12 here) and I had to stifle my laughter during the Aman-Arnav scene...how Arnav asserted that Aman's bday is on that day😆 N Arnav played it so well as the knight in shiny armor for KKG. Loving the pace of the story and hope something dhamaka-dar happens during the party😉

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

And I forgot to mention the way Arnav manipulated Akash to figure the problem goes to show he is a clever business man and he knows KKG very well.

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-sanika-

@-sanika-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

So I am finally back from my self imposed fasting ...
Missed me ?
Caught up on all the chapters back to back !
Good Job Gurl!

Loving this Khushi, Payal and Akash! How I wish, the CVs hadn't forgotten about them or worse misused them to kill time...humphhh!

Not sure of ur ASR though...but then again, I am an ASR phankha, so I am biased and I am used to seeing him get his way and prefer it that way. I am never satisfied when It comes to HIM 😳 But I liked the fact that he got the documents checked before signing them blindly.

I am liking your current track, but can you put in a bit more of angst? I feel that the pain both of them suffered and the rest of the family members could be shown as well. Recently a friend of mine made a post on how ASR is all alone, even among his so called loving family. You can find it here. (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3193667/why). Again, I think it is the fault of the CVs that the Raizada family has been portrayed as leeches. Maybe you can show them in a different light ?

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

loved it dear cont soon

thanx for pm

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Ahaaa, The Party Is Gonna Be ROCKING 😳

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-sanika-

@-sanika-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Sorry to sound so demanding...
I am just trying to get all my wishes fulfilled through you 😳

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: -sanika-
So I am finally back from my self imposed fasting ...
Missed me ?
Caught up on all the chapters back to back !
Good Job Gurl!

Loving this Khushi, Payal and Akash! How I wish, the CVs hadn't forgotten about them or worse misused them to kill time...humphhh!

Not sure of ur ASR though...but then again, I am an ASR phankha, so I am biased and I am used to seeing him get his way and prefer it that way. I am never satisfied when It comes to HIM 😳 But I liked the fact that he got the documents checked before signing them blindly.

I am liking your current track, but can you put in a bit more of angst? I feel that the pain both of them suffered and the rest of the family members could be shown as well. Recently a friend of mine made a post on how ASR is all alone, even among his so called loving family. You can find it here. (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3193667/why). Again, I think it is the fault of the CVs that the Raizada family has been portrayed as leeches. Maybe you can show them in a different light ?

Sanikaaa

yes yes missed you for sure.. see? had you not disappeared, my ASR wouldn't have strayed too much from his character 😛

it's funny you should mention angst almost telepathic actually, since I just finished writing the next chapter.. are you sneaking up on me 😆 I read the post by your friend.. it was awesome! I figured ASR ka redemption track is going to be sad sad, might as well have some fun for now. But ya wait for the next chapter, is all I'm going to say.

Reg. Raizada family as leeches.. Well, they will break free one after the other won't they.. ek saath sabko alag kar diya to that will also seem unnatural.. although I would love to throw anjali out ASAP!! *calm down calm down*😃

good to see you back! hopefully you'll stay for the next update too (I'm putting up a new chapter everyday)

cheers!

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Awesome . I jus finished every chapter in one go . I so wish cvs can follow some of it.

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: asr13
Loving the direction your story is taking Hun ...by God ki kasam, Maza aa Gaya !!!! Oh and this is the ASR we all fell for hain na ? keep it coming dude, can't wait for Amanji's birthday party now lol ...super dhamaka ...

By God ki Kasam, aapka comment padh ke mujhe bhi mazaa aa gaya 😉 thanks so much dear.. yeah this is the shrewd and smarty pants we all fell in love with.

I hope I can live up to your expectations for the party 😆

but ya dhamaka for sure.. jahan Arshi ho wahan dhamake to honge hi!

cheers!

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad
Amazing update...what I guessed came right...Arnav is helping her...I thank you from my heart for this updates and thanks for the PM

Thank you for your lovely words! Yeah, I figured it's not good to always keep surprising people isn't it 😉

cheers!

Originally posted by: Punkin22
Delighted with update dear. I love the conversation between sisters, they should help each other and Khushi needs to understand it is ok to ask for help from family. What will Arnav do with the information that Khushi is working again??? Interesting...

Thank you for update and pm.

I'm glad you liked it! You know, I watch some of the old scenes of last year as I write about the sisters.. they were so close back then.. the CVs totally butchered their relationship 😭

anyway, smitzy is here, have no fear! thanks for the comment dear!

cheers!

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