FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99] - Page 37

Wooww...wonderful

Luved it..u write very well...

Originally posted by: boisecrazy

Smitzy, you should print all chapters and put them in a cover book and send it by registered mail to the CVs and the director...don't forget the copy right,,,or else they will make IPKKND 2.

Originally posted by: *mad*

So payal knows... im glad.. otherwise every1 tell all their problems to khushi and she goes through hell to figure out what to do while payal sit at home and put oil into her hair..😕
tht chilli scene...it was funny... 😆but then again cook is also right..when u say spoons, u need to specify.it reminds me of my mom..recently when i asked her to put 4 spoons of sugar to my coffee she put the smallest spoon i've seen inside the sugar container and was trying to convince me that she had put 4 spoons (more like less than half a tsp of sugar) and it was my taste buds which was at fault.😲
now im hungry after reading about all the food...sadly its 3am n i better sleep if i dnt want to fall a sleep tomo..
thanx for the pm
im good at writing paragraphs i think
btw thanx for the english version... thnx a lot...i cnt read or talk in hindi, so its wonderful to read a ff without taxing my poor brain

Originally posted by: hiahmed

its 4 a.m and i'm reading this. it is wonderful; an alternate reality. now that the dreaded maha episode is round the corner, i wish the CVs show sth similar to this.

even if they dont, u keep at it so that there is some respite for fans like us

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Okay so you update faster than most writers, but that's good for me! No waiting for long time and dreaming what will happen next So firstly, you've kept true to Arnav's character in two cases: first when he asked Mr. Das to check the papers and second when he realizes that the kheer had to be Khushi. In both, Anrav didn't show his true emotions but by writing out their thoughts you've made your readers understand him perfectly.

I also like how Payal has a bigger real sister role...she tells Khushi that she must help too and agrees to keeping it between themselves and Akash. The way you written the food even I feel like tasting Khushi's dishes😆

Good pace and keep PMing with updates dear. 😊