FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99] - Page 35

Originally posted by: segad

Can someone please clarify for me why is it that Payal bears absolutely no responsibility for her own father while Khushi is always the one saddled with all the responsibility for her adopted parents?

Originally posted by: smitzy

Has she been portrayed that way in the serial? I'm not sure. In the scene I wrote, she wasn't aware of the situation. But she does scold K for not keeping her in the loop and tells her that they both will plan something out.

I guess, Payal having been thrown out of Shantivan n all, K wants her to have some peace of mind for now.

Thanks for your comment 😊 and please do let me know in the future too if any character seems to stray from their expected behaviour!

cheers!

Loving it smitzy ...awesome !!!!!

Okay so you update faster than most writers, but that's good for me! No waiting for long time and dreaming what will happen next So firstly, you've kept true to Arnav's character in two cases: first when he asked Mr. Das to check the papers and second when he realizes that the kheer had to be Khushi. In both, Anrav didn't show his true emotions but by writing out their thoughts you've made your readers understand him perfectly.

I also like how Payal has a bigger real sister role...she tells Khushi that she must help too and agrees to keeping it between themselves and Akash. The way you written the food even I feel like tasting Khushi's dishes😆

Good pace and keep PMing with updates dear. 😊

Khushi shouldn't forgive him tat easily! Poor thing is shattered from inside but pretending to be brave n happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😒

i think Akaash will tell Arnav by accident about the financial problems with Khushi

Fantastic..Simply FANTASTIC 😃

So payal knows... im glad.. otherwise every1 tell all their problems to khushi and she goes through hell to figure out what to do while payal sit at home and put oil into her hair..😕
tht chilli scene...it was funny... 😆but then again cook is also right..when u say spoons, u need to specify.it reminds me of my mom..recently when i asked her to put 4 spoons of sugar to my coffee she put the smallest spoon i've seen inside the sugar container and was trying to convince me that she had put 4 spoons (more like less than half a tsp of sugar) and it was my taste buds which was at fault.😲
now im hungry after reading about all the food...sadly its 3am n i better sleep if i dnt want to fall a sleep tomo..
thanx for the pm
im good at writing paragraphs i think
btw thanx for the english version... thnx a lot...i cnt read or talk in hindi, so its wonderful to read a ff without taxing my poor brain

I'm glad Payal told Akash about the operation...and the talk of Kheer makes me want to eat some...well off to the kitchen I go😛 thanks for the PM!!!