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Posted: 12 years ago

Fabulous update dear

Lovely

Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome and i love ur track
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh god such a painful update...ye maan to apna ego chodta hi nahi ...i hope vishaal truth find out kar k maan ki aankhe khol de aur asli culprit ko saamne le aae
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
plz cont. soon.. i want to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both updates are awsome...
Sweetu sorry for late rply
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 25


hii all me got two hours free so updating... @kiran diii some coming updates will give u all the answers diii ...
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Geet: YOU DIDN"T DESERVE HER …. I WISH YOU WERE NOT HER FATHER…….

Geet just turned her face and left from there……………………..


Today was the day three years back when she got the news that she is going to have her diya…. And now every thing is shattered….nothing seems tto be on its place….. just a report …a mere report told her that her baby will not be surviving….she will leave her ….and she…she cant do anything…..a mother can't do anything…the child she nurtured in her womb for nine months…she can't do anything to save her… geet ..she is not a perfect donor…today when her daughter needs her father most…he had again turned his face…..

Geet was completely drenched…eyes were wet with tears….



Diya was with nisha and neeraj..they were at her place….. seeing geet they were also in a fix…something was same yet different…..the things were repeated ..but now the situations were not same….three years back it was her and now her daughter…..

Nisha asked about her whereabouts…..she just denied saying she was struck….her pain..the deep grief she didn't even share with anyone…..diya was sleeping in her room….when her friends left…she went to diya…looking at her sleeping peacefully with her oft soft bunny…..her eyes were moist…. Weeping silently…

Geet gently kissed her forehead….

Geet: mumma will not let anything happen to diya….. I promise baby…I will search for the donor…..

On the other hand….

Everyone was shocked seeing geet in KM after three years…that too pleading maan to save her daughter….anger…was evident in every eyes..though the reason was different but still every single person was angry on maan for hiding this truth………..

Dadaji being the head of the family was feeling same on his grandson …. His father was not believing what his son has done…..

Daadima came to maan..and asked him again……

Daadima: maan who is diya….and why we don't know about her……

Maan was about to say something when vishal interrupted…..

Vishal: don't you say bhai that she is not child…here is the proof..these reports clearly state that diya is having anemic disorder and needs bone marrow for her treatment…..and atleast this much even I know that these type of disorder are only cured when parents are donors……

His world slipped….that means geet was telling true…..


Diya Is his daughter…..a new sensation a new wave of joy seeped through him…… but then geet….. was she also innocent…but how can he believe her…..and those evidences….. may be it was a pure coincident that diya is his daughter…and now is she fighting fo her life……

Maan without listening to anyone neither hearing anyone went to his study…..

Here all the family members were getting tensed of his behaviour…..

Dadaji: its all our mistake we should have asked him the day itself where was geet why did she left…atleast we shouldn't have face this day….at least that poor soul shouldn't have suffered …..

Maan's dad who was quite till now… he was actually made quite three years back…..

Ashutosh: enough ….. maan will do that what is in favor of the situation now…. How can he told refuse geet…… is marriage any game for them….look what they have done…. Ma…you shouldn't have stopped me that day itself……

Even savitri devi and vani was feeling guilty..till now they were completely unaware of their family member…light of their house….and now when that sourse of light need to be enlightened ….here her own parents due to their tiffs are making the poor girl suffer…..

Vishal came downstairs changing … when daadima asked….

Daadima: vishal where are you going…..and this to this time….

Vishal who was totally enraged by his brother's behaviour now blasted and said in a sarcartic manner…….

Vishal: bhai doesn't care daadi..but I do for my niece and bhabhi is all alone now…due you even realize she is having no one other than her daughter….i am going to her…may be she needs something….atleast I can give her support as a brother…..

Vani immediately asked vishal….

Vani: vishal I am too coming with you…..and I will see now how maan will deny …..

They were about to go when dadaji stop them not to go at that time as it was almost one at night….

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Next day her bell rang….diya was in geet's arms…today she has to go with geet for her her complete check up again for the treatment….. diya was keeping her head on her shoulder . ….. she was still very sleepy…..

Geet with still diya in her arms…walked towards door and when she opened…a shock was there a pleasant shock for geet ….diya smiled a little to him…but suddenly she again kept her head on her mother's shoulder…geet left the way for him to come inside…..


Geet: be seated…..

She was total formal…..

Diya still in geet's arms…

Diya: mumma ..diya..sleepy….. diya wants to sleep…

She very innocently smiled at geet…geet kissed her cheek….

Geet: shona …you can sleep after sometime…now we need to have bath…diya wants that new dress…thn her favorite breakfast….. chocolate …..

Diya: icecream…..

Geet: haa..nn..icecream….

Maan was listening to her…both mother and daughter were so engrossed in their cuty cuty talks that they actually forget that he was also there…..

Geet made diya ready she now was eager to meet her doctor…today her gums were bleeding slightly….diya was weak…. Geet was all shattered seeing her baby …but she has to be strong ….

She made diya ready and made her settle on her breakfast table..even served maan with diya…..

Geet was feeding diya..when her cell ringed it was neeraj…she went..diya was eating herself… when maan started to feed her..but she she refused..she was not in her usual self…their last meeting ….their meet at her camp….came rushing to him…..now he know why she is not talking to him…he still hates geet but diya..she is his daughter..he know he has done a mistake….but he wont let that mistake to become a sin….

He tried to talk to her….

Maan: diya…

Diya turned her face…..

Maan was feeling horrible…how can he see hi sown daughter like this…she was not talking to him…and here diya was trying to follow what her mother said…she doesn't want her mumma to get upset…..

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NEXT:

Doctor: there are only fifty percent chances of survival even if you find a donor…..

Maan and geet just can't believe what the doctor said….

Geet asked very impatiently….

Geet: is there any other treatment doctor….

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Doctor: sibling…. If diya can have a sibling…then she can be saved…there will be more chances of her life…we can transplant Umbilical cord blood to diya ……






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Posted: 12 years ago
poor diya
nd feeling sad fir geet
maan how can u do this

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATED

part 25


DO READ AND COMMENT SWEETS😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it
Feeling soo bad fir geet nd diulya
Maan deserves slap from everyone
Chii pathetic man
Diya hayeee
Not herself bubbly
Great update
Loved it
Update soon

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