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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome mindblowing update ...little painful coz in this update maan got to know about dia is his daughter...feeling pain for geet ...maan should b repent for those cheap n hurtful words .. how can he think low about geet ..geet should not forgive him so easily.. THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA hote hue bhi sahi baat jaane ka try nahi kiya aur 3 yrs tak uski wajah se geet ko suffer karna pada...
WAITING FOR TRUTH TO B OUT ..ABOUT MAIN CULPRIT INFRONT OF MAAN ;
HE should also know k geet k saath jab wo indifferent behave kar raha tha tab geet ne bina kuch pucvhe aaina ki help le k uski business ki prob solve ki thi...
geet n diya dono ko maan ko aasani se maaf nahi karna chahiye...
phew!!! long comment done ..kya karu i love DTP to control nahi hota.😉😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

plz update next part sooonnn

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
nice part...
poor Geet and Diya...
grrr Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan went to see Diya..Why Diya don't talk to Maan..I know she is not well but she not even look at him..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeba.Rahman

awesome update.
at least maan accept that dia is his daughter, hope his misunderstanding will get clear soon.
do continue soon.



thanksss😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

thanks dear for this update

i was eagerly waiting for this..
n my 5300th post specially for u..
loved maans family..
atleast they think they must support geet
but maan still cant believe geet
but knowing dia is his baby he is caring for her.
.i hate him for this..y cant he find geet is innocent..



thankksss diii

diii its both of them...they r at fault
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

awesome mindblowing update ...little painful coz in this update maan got to know about dia is his daughter...feeling pain for geet ...maan should b repent for those cheap n hurtful words .. how can he think low about geet ..geet should not forgive him so easily.. THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA hote hue bhi sahi baat jaane ka try nahi kiya aur 3 yrs tak uski wajah se geet ko suffer karna pada...

WAITING FOR TRUTH TO B OUT ..ABOUT MAIN CULPRIT INFRONT OF MAAN ;
HE should also know k geet k saath jab wo indifferent behave kar raha tha tab geet ne bina kuch pucvhe aaina ki help le k uski business ki prob solve ki thi...
geet n diya dono ko maan ko aasani se maaf nahi karna chahiye...
phew!!! long comment done ..kya karu i love DTP to control nahi hota.😉😳😳



thank u for itna long long wala comment...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

awesome update...good going suhana...plz clear maan's mu so that he dont blame our innocent geet loke that...precap is interesting...update soon...😛




thanksss
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 26


OMG LONG LONG COMMENTS MADE ME SOOO HAPPY

thank u pop 77, preeti, valli di, jeba,shri,rockers dhara,abinash,gill,riddhima,lovesia,uteem,deepa di for reading last update



Geet was feeding diya..when her cell ringed it was neeraj…she went..diya was eating herself… when maan started to feed her..but she she refused..she was not in her usual self…their last meeting ….their meet at her camp….came rushing to him…..now he know why she is not talking to him…he still hates geet but diya..she is his daughter..he know he has done a mistake….but he wont let that mistake to become a sin….

He tried to talk to her….

Maan: diya…

Diya turned her face…..

Maan was feeling horrible…how can he see his own daughter like this…she was not talking to him…and here diya was trying to follow what her mother said…she doesn't want her mumma to get upset…..

Diya quietly finished her breakfast….. she was looking pale and weak may be she has lost her weight he thought…..his heart was not at peace seeing her so quiet…even she was not talking to her MR.BUNNY…..

Diya went to her room and sat on her big teddy ….this was actually a teddy that diya used to sit on …she was talking to her bunny….


Diya: MR. bunny diya will not talk to stangels…mumma wil scold diya…like she did that day..you know diya was vweryy upset….diya clieddd(cried)

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It was actually a week before…

Diya was keeping not well …so geet has taken her to office with her boss…that is with neeraj's permission….she was quietly playing in her mumma's cabin….. even neeraj was engrossed with our cute angel…who can ignore her ……

Neeraj was tickling diya…..

Diya was giggling …

Diya: hehehhehehe..mamu nooo….hehe…tummy hurting mamu….

Neeraj: aww baby's tummy is hurting…..wait let me see…. He was aboutto tickle her more when geet came to discuss something with him…diya seeing the golden opportunity….slipped from there….she was cutely walking around the office making absolutely no noise…. When she went into the conference room…..

She was trying to hide….when made someone picked her up in his arms….her mouth went open…..

Diya was gaping at the person who caught her ….she smiled fully and squealed in joy…..


Diya: MR.strangel……

Maan: diya…we were friends na…do you remember …..icecream diya…..

Diya : haaa…..fliends…..shooo you came here to play with diya…..

Maan: no baby I am having a meeting with clients here…but why are you here…..

Before diya could answer geet came there searching her and was absolutely shocked seeing her daughter with her father….a joy surged through geet…this is what she wanted for diya….her daughter would get all the love she deserved from her dada..her family…..but now somewhere seeing maan and diya now..a fear was there within her what if maan now claims diya as his…what if he snatches her only life her only family from her…all these thoughts made her wild….she immediately came and snatched her precious bundle of joy from his arms…..diya was equally shocked seeing her mumma holding her roughly….

Geet: what are you doing with her…why can't you just leave us alone …..she was hurt…pain and anger was visible in her every single word…..

For maan he still didn't know why geet was making a fuss….like he was holding that belongs to her….

Maan: why do you care that I was holding diya…..

Geet: I do care Maan..i do care…because the baby you were holding…speaking giggling with is mine…she is my daughter…daughter of geet handa….

Maan was just staring at the two girls infront of him……he didn't care anything now just want to hold her and diya in his arms…she is his geet's daughter…that's were the thoughts that should have came to him…and he only knows that these feelings did strike him…but a moment of betrayal…those proofs…geet with someone in his arms….is something more than he could have imagine…he was hurt but didn't realize that the harm he is causing is something more than that he is encountering……

Maan: if I have known her …I wouldn't have even came close to her…….

Geet: that would have been much better Mr khurana after all hurting someone without a reason that's all you can do…..

Maan: HURT…..geet don't you dare to say that….both of us knows what was my fault….. my only mistake was to believe you….and what you did…you literally made me die all the days……

Geet: my mistake…yes it was all mine….that I believe you…..and you did nothing….diya was now standing between her parents…..

Geet shouted at him….today she will not be weak…….

Geet: you did it maan…you betrayed me…..maan….you left us….

Why did you…………….

Why …….(she screamed on him……)

Was it my mistake that you did this to me……….speak up……..

I am that old innocent geet now…….i have grown up now……..grown up due to your perfidy…….

Why …why you left me , am I that bad that all the people leave me……..it doesn't hurt ….when they did it but it hurted me…..my soul died on the day when you betrayed me…….you broke my trust MR KHURANA…….i trust you….i blindly believed you…..but you just broke it into pieces ……..broken pieces maan….that can never be mend now…….

I know it was my mistake not to tell you that how much I love you …, how much I longded for you…….you know I have craved for your one glimpse day and night……in these three years…….but now I realize it was not coz of love that once I had it was and is pure hatred……, disgust that I feel……

I just can't forget you ……and nor I can forgive you…….i will not

Not in this life time……


I know I am being mean because you deserve greater detestion maan……….

You deserve my baby's hatred maan……you donot even deserve to see her face…..

She is only mine…….do you understand this MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA……..i hate you and I will never let even your shadow come near my diya……just keep away from her…..just go away from our lives maan……leave us……don't even dare to come near my diya……..

Maan jerked her hand….

That was holding him….

Maan: Betrayed you……geet don't you dare to say anything more…. And if I had known that diya is your daughter I wouldn't have came near her….everything related to you I just hate…I disgust that feeling geet…..

Geet just took diya inher rams…diya who was crying now…seeing her mother shouting….

Geet even let her frustration out on diya……

Geet: diya didn't I told you to stay away from strangers than why did you went near him….. diya cried more……

Geet: just don't cry now……

Diya cried very much and even geet….she hadn't thought that this day will come…they have learnt to live with their small happiness consisting of both of them…..



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Geet came to diya's room seeing her baby playing silently……

Diya: mumma diya not talk to Mr. strangel..mumma will not scold diya na….diya gets scared….

Geet hugged her … took her close inher embrace…..

Geet: no baby mumma will not say anything…….

When diya and geet came to maan….

Maan: we have to go for her check up now…I have fixed an appointment with Dr. kapoor…he is here in india now….

Geet just nodded…..no words were required now…nothing was important than diya for both of them……

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NEXT:

Doctor: there are only fifty percent chances of survival even if you find a donor…..

Maan and geet just can't believe what the doctor said….

Geet asked very impatiently….

Geet: is there any other treatment doctor….

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Doctor: sibling…. If diya can have a sibling…then she can be saved…there will be more chances of her life…we can transplant Umbilical cord blood to diya ……

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing n heart wrenching update di
i already told u like the last tym i m speechless on this update 2
but i ll comment on it nonetheless 😊
u portrayed their emotions n turmoils beautifully di
geetz diyaz n maanz state is really heart wrenching
all r sad for sm reason or the other
n ironically the worries r related to each other
geet sad at maan's behavior
diya at geet's behavior
n maan at diya's behavior
past was so sad di
geet's outburst n insecurities was understandable
geet has only diya now whom she cn cll her's
n seeing her with maan who she thinks betrayed her
her frustration n inner turmoil is bound to come out
but maan is still not come out of this pictures he saw
n he still blames geet for everything
and dnt know y i still cnt blame him
he was always the possessive character
n geet never confessed her feelings for him too
but diya really got scared of geet's shouting
after all she must have never seen this side of her mother
n that resulted in not talking to maan
which ended up in him being hurt
but happiee to see both of them jointly doing smthing again
diya has again brought them face to face
n now i hope they fight together to bring their diya back
or else mr bunny akela hojaega na di 😭
precap is kinda scary di
update soon
waiting really eagerly as usual
luvv yaaa di
muahhh



Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago

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