New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD - Page 19

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

<font color="#009999">Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!</font>

<font color="#009999">I absolutely love the way you write.</font>

<font color="#009999">The conversation between Ashar, Asmara and Khushi was brilliantly written.</font>

<font color="#009999">Awww...Arnav and Ashar don't want Asmara to leave. She is their little angel and it's definitely tough to let her go. I can understand their feelings.</font>

<font color="#009999">Please update soon and thanks a ton for the PM.</font>

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<font color="#009999">Manal <3</font>

Thanks Manal!! 😳 So glad to know you're enjoying this SS so far and hope I live up to your expectations in the future parts too 😛

Originally posted by: Aliya_hzsn

It was ages since i read one of these..!!!

Thanks Fari!!! This was AWESOME!!!!

Ashar and asmara share such a beautiful bro sis bond!!!!

And arnav being stubborn as usual!!!! The story was just soo CUTE!!!!!

Ohhh yesss! I'm seeing you after ages too!! Where have you been?! 😛 I'm sooo glad you enjoyed reading this SS 😳 Welcome back 😉

Originally posted by: -kitzdoll-

oh wow the second part was sooo cute and emotional...arnav is really very sad but khushi just hides it better than everybody...awww so emtoional...lved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

Thanks kriti! Pleased to know you enjoyed reading it 😳 yes I tried to show some light on their relations 😉 Glad to know you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: farheen75

Oh my god it was so sweet and emotional and u make me cry as well as I am a mother of 3 girls and start thinking abt their marriage and my husaband will be like arnav as wel l although my eldest is 11 only but my hubby keep increasing her wedding age everytime we talks abt future, currently he is at 26 but I am sure when the time actually comes he will reach 30 like arnav and we will be having a Asmara like situation at our hands also.

Arnav is such a sweet dad and Khushi as a mother so strong yet vulnerable and her rock now is her son and I loved the way she said that arnav won't give her a chance to cry on rukhsati since he will be busy crying rivers himself and I couldn't control my laughter at that... Can't wait for the next part.

Awww if you're a mother of 3 girls then you must have found it very touching! 😳 the problem is, girls always are very close of their family and they are the ones who have to leave! It sucks 😔 😆

Awww I find it so cute when you mention how possessive your hubby is about your daughters too 😳 Its hard for fathers as they are the closest to their daughters 😛 Anyways glad you enjoyed it 😳

Originally posted by: Charmz_58

obviously yaar u know bio(sci)its killing me im thinking how u handle college when i cant even handle 9th grade urghhh seriously want an ASR😆n ur stories r sooo cute just cant resist them

Awww thanks yaar! Its so sweet of you to say so 😳 I'm actually in uni doing my bachelors but I've a habit of saying college 🤣 So wait till you reach uni and then you'll know how annoying and pain in the neck studies can be! Buhahaha *evil laugh* 😆

Originally posted by: luvbarunsanaya6

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#9900CC">loved it
now u too are becoming like ZEHRA
first u told this is a TS
now this has become a SS
she too is doing things like that these days
any ways concentrate on your studies and then continue this when u r free
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Hehehe!! Yes Zehra is a very bad influence isn't she?? 😆 and yep! I need to concentrate on my studies *sulking expression* 😉 Thanks for commenting 😳

Originally posted by: Samaira32

Mahn that was awesome... Loved the bonding. Mwaaahhh
Now I want a brother LIKE ashar... Not ashar.. (;
Awesome... Made my day... Hav my internals coming up in like 2 days and see wat em doing...,
But it lovely and mast update... The bro sis bond the father daughter bonding - ayee hayeee marjawa...
Faro Pari love ua updates... Dey always tend to make my day...
I am planning to read all of dem again as soon as em done wid the stupid exams... U know to get over em...
Good distraction till my marks are displayed...:P
Neways love u soo much n thank u...
Now fari please post the next part before 5... Please pretty please wid a cherry on top.. *makinn puppy dog eyes*
Okii I know they are not cute but u can write na... (;
And a big THANK YOU TO V323.. (sorry If I got the name wrong... Only arnav and ashar are in my mind... (: )
Done wid my blabbering - bye
Oh All the best for ua assignments n tests...

Hahaha! A brother like Ashar but NOT Ashar, huh? 🤣

OMG!! You're internals are in 2 days and you spent day on IF yesterday?! What are you girl? 😆 I know you're thinking 'Look whose talking?' 😆

Ummm... A part of this before 5... Hmmm that will be a little difficult! But I'll see what I can do 😉 Maybe I can give you an update of Ashar's diary if I can cos thats shorter 😳 Anyways, All the best for your exams and studyyy!! Insha'Allah I know you'll do great!! 🤗

Originally posted by: simi58

hey did u just hear the scream i make saying yeee she updated??
Awww too swt... At first the arshi scenes were too swt .. as always ashar and asmi is just too adorable.. luved the way arnav remembered all the swt moments between him and asmi to khushi.. :)

Ohhh! It was you!!! Thought I heard a scream but didn't recognize the voice 😉 *wink wink*

I'm so glad you enjoyed all scenes hun! Sure hope you like the next update too 😳 Thanks for commenting 🤗

Originally posted by: sarra0

Beautifully written, loved the father- daughter moments, and how Khushi talked to ASR, was his support and not to upset him further went to Asher wit her worries, Brother-sister bonding lovely as usual.

Awww glad you did 😳 and yeah now Ashar is Khushi's rock in this situation 😳 Hope you like the next part as well 😉

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

<font color="#ff0066">You had me in tears.</font>

<font color="#ff0066">The greatest difficulty is letting go your loved one, especially a daughter.</font>

<font color="#ff0066">Asmara's connection with her father and brother is so beautiful. Their conversations make me all emotional.</font>

<font color="#ff0066">And Khushi is always going to be there to comfort and console Arnav.</font>

<font color="#ff0066">Eagerly waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM.</font>

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<font color="#ff0066">Manal <3</font>

Awww really?? This made you cry 😳 sorry that wasn't my intention at all 😆

And yes, I wanted to show some light on the relations Asmara shared with everyone. Glad you liked them! Thanks for the comment hun 😳

Originally posted by: ipkknd_hazel

omg that was amaazing!!

u have oficially been added to my fav writers list!!

i lovedd it! <3

OMG!! Really?! Thats a huge compliment for a writer as fazool as me 😉 Thanks hun 🤗

Originally posted by: Arshisarunrocks

Oh Fari di!! !I couldn't control my tears once again!! Such a sweet,cute,little family! The bonding! That's so lovely! ❤️ And now I seriously wish I had an elder brother but like Ashar!😆This made my day!!😃

But hey!! Its almost done?? Only one upate left??😭I wish I could read on and on!

And yes di so much respect because I am very very young!!😆

Heyyy Zahra!! 🤗

Awww you liked this one too! Sooo happy to know that 😳 Thats why this got longer than I intended cos I decided to throw some light on the relationship Asmara shared with her family 😳 glad I did so 😛

And yep! Only one more update to go Insha'Allah 😳 and yeah! I know you're a kiddo! 😆 14 right?? 😳

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Both the parts i just loved it...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">it was too too emotional...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">i canactually feel it because i will be in the same situation someday...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">i love my brother so so much... he is same protective and caring...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">same is the case with my parents... but one difference, mine will be an arranged marriage...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">i amafraid i will have to face thissituation...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">thanks for the update...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">it was so so awesome and touching...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">beautifully written...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">waiting for the next update...</font>

Awww I'm an only sister too amongst 3 brothers! And my brothers are very like Ashar never showing their feelings directly but doing small things that scream out loud that they care about me though they are absolutely adamant that they don't 🤣 2 of them are younger so they show it all the more less and yes, mine will be an arrange marriage too Insha'Allah 😳

Originally posted by: arnavandkhushi1

Thanks the PM!!! I just loved the second part. I strongly believe that a girl's life is te toughest of them all. A bidaii is one of the hardest things a girl could do. Your writing portrayed that beautifully.

As for the PM, No problem sweetie 😳 I'm glad you liked it and yep! Bidai is one of the most difficult thing to do esp cos girls are more closer to their family than boys 😉

Originally posted by: aaliyahassan

m speechless.. calling it beautiful might turn out to be an understatement..😳
* wiping my tears* poor all of them..
what a perfect family !!
loved it ..
thanks for the pm😃

Awww thanks Shreya!! I'm sooo glad you enjoyed it and that it made you cry 🤣 no, I'm not happy that you cried but actually happy that I managed to touch your heart 😳

Originally posted by: wonderblake

second part was awesome dear, and if i say that I love it, it would be an understatement.

It was fabulous, and good luck with your tests and practicals.

We too had the same problem when we were schooling, the thing was we did not complete it the day before, we did it on the same day of our practical classes 😉.

thanks for the PM ❤️

Ohhh Thank Youuu!! 😳 and wowww! You sound just like meee!! 😉 I'm completing it today cos I've to get it checked tmrw 😛

Oooh Fari! this one was sooo touching... everyone's upset but are consoling the other... How do you do it?? get better with every update huh??

The first scene was wow! when Arnav snapped listing every small gesture of Asmi... oh man! I have no words!

I wish Khushi had told him that what if her parents would've behaved this way??😉 how would've Arnav digested her babuji not agreeing if their marriage had happened the regular way??😛

Loved how he went to Asmi... and the entire scene.. with probably because you remind me that everyday from both their sides... Awww... adorable!

and then how she felt so home with him that she dozed off in seconds... sooo sweet...

Ashar consoling his mom... because Khushi can't cry in front of Arnav... AWWW...

I wonder how my love's coping up??? his kid sister is leaving... I hope in the next update I'll get his perspective too... Please???

though I absolutely loved his subtle hint of shifting to her place but then he couldn't because of Asmi's mushy romance😆 and then how they slept... yaar... could there be any siblings better than these???

jaldi jaldi padhai karo and jaldi jaldi update karo!