New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww what an update!! Loved it!!! Can't wait to read part 3!! Thanks for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...My eyes are moist dear...but happy tears...like it veru much.Awesome update.Like the bonds (Arnav-Asmara) Dad- daughter and Mom-Son very touching...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Fari, will edit by tomorrow promise!!!😳Studies are killing me!!!😔</font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">I promised to unreserve soon and here I am!!!😃 I was so happy to see that you wrote a new OS and that too exploring the concept of Asmara getting married and Arnav sceptical about the idea!😳 Hey, I managed to be on the same page of your update 🥳, which is kinda rare when you write Oss!!!🤔 The case is different with your SS though!!!😆</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">I just love the bondings that everyone has with everyone, I mean Asmara and her parents, Ashar and his parents and Asmara and Ashar!!! It really gives the essence of the perfect family!!!😳</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Ashar loves teasing his sis na!!!😆And that bit when he told Khushi that Devi Maiyya sent Asmara for the oil stuff was hilarious!🤣 He is so like his Dad in the looks and fashion department!😉 And the Chameli oil and Akash connection reminded me of that scene in the show!!! How he kept on sneezing🤣


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Aww, even Ashar is unwillingly to let go of Asmara!!!😳 How cute!!! He is such an adorable brother!!! And this "Has it ever occured to you Asmi that maybe I don't want to live in peace! Maybe I've gotten used to your annoying presence and don't want you to go!" had me so emotional!!! So, he finally agrees to give it a try at convincing Arnav for her happiness!!I am proud of him!!!😃</font></font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Arnav is such a protective DAD!!! With a zest, no scratch that, with a whole lot of possessiveness!!!😆 But it's totally understandable!😳 And there he becomes the angry ASR to give himself a carapace!!!😳</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Lucky me!!! I have part two just in front of my eyes!!! Didn't have to wait much!!!😆</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Poor Arnav!!! The conversation both Arnav and Khushi had was so heart-touching!!! And this sentence "Well, its so stupid, damn it!! We are the ones who raised Asmara! Why should she leave us?!" is so ASRish!!!😛</font></font>


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[P]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">And this is the final blow for me to cry: </font></font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">



Tashu!! 🤗 🤗

You're here!! And on the first page too! Wowww! 😛 and have you done a PhD in writing long comments?? *peers suspiciously at Tashu and Tashu gives her a you've-gotta-be-kidding-me-girl look* 😆

I don't know how you manage to keep your promises so well when you're a uni student 🤣 When do you study girl?? You're sooo regular on IF! 😲 😆

Aww glad you liked the concept 😳 I had this in mind for a long time but never got to writing it down 😉 Glad you liked their bonding! I decided it would be good to shed some light on it 😛

And Phewww! I'm so glad ppl still love this older Ashar as well! I was so afraid that when I write about a grown Ashar, I'll somehow ruin his character and ppl won't like him that much 😛 Cos you know... his diary is very different but creating a real Ashar was some thing I was apprehensive about but glad you still love him and for that I love you 🤗 🤗

I loved it how you have highlighted the dialogues you liked 😳 and I didn't realize but this SS really does have a lot of conversations right? 😉 I like writing it... Well sometimes 😛 I hope you all like the last part too! *fingers crossed* 😳 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chandana.s

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#996699" size="3">Wonderfull OS... </font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#996699" size="3">Can understand how hard it is to Arnav as he loves his daughter very much...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#996699" size="3">Its very sweet n cute update..</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#996699" size="3">Waiting for the next part..Update soon</font>



Thanks Chandana! I'm really glad you did! And yes, Arnav is going to be one hell of a protective dad 😳 Thanks for commenting 😛

Originally posted by: SSB28

Awww ASR is adorable ... I could picture him in this scene ... Stubborn like a child who do not want to give his favourite toy to any one ... It was just adorable and lovely 👏



Hehehe! Oh my! You are sooo very right! Asmara is Arnav's favorite toy without a doubt!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Riima_Azraa



I know, its been too long hun!! Missed you bears 🤗



I missed you moreee!! Sooo happy to see you back!! Ecstatic I tell you 😆 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dimple288

omg... what a heart touching story.. brilliant work.👍🏼

ashar and asmara conversation.. wow..u made me cry...😭😭(khushi ki aansoo hai).. i just walked back in the memory lane... the old days with my brother...
arnav's fear to let his daughter move awy from him... aww adorable. and the title its hard to let u go...loved it..
u r such an amazing writer.. this is for u .🤗 love u..❤️



Awww Love youuu too hun ❤️ *hugs back tightly* 🤗 I'm so glad you're enjoying reading this SS and that it brought back old memories 😳 Yes, well its hard for Arnav to let go of his princess especially since he's so close to her 😛 Hope you like the last part too 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

<font color="#990033" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">IT IS BEAUTIFUL😛...I JUST LOVED D LAAD GOVERNER DUO !!! Fari,Im missing Ashum so much...</font>



Happy to hear you did Di!! 😳 and yes I miss Ashum too!! 😔 She's left IF permanently I think 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavandkhushi1



I'm not on your buddy list, actually. I would love to receive PMs from you. Your writing never falls below the expectations. It's weird because when I'm on India forums, you post a new OS or update!

You deserve those comments! PLEASE keep writing!!!!!!!

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Awww so happy you're always on time to catch up on my updates and yes from now forth I'll PM you my works! Thank you for your lovely comments! They always brighten up my mood 😛 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1

Yaaayyy Fariii! Finally something from youuu! I was missing you and Ashar and Asmara and the Arnav Khushi you give us!


This wasss sooo heart warming, really! Reallyyy verryyy lovelyyy!😃Loved the brother-sister bond Asmara and Ashar share! Its just too cute! Loved how Ashar is just like his dad, not giving into his emotions. But finally does so when pushed!😃And he agreed to be on her side and agreed for the sake of his sisters happines, what a cutie <3

Asmara is such a lucky girl to have such a loving brother! I dont have a brother, this makes me wish i had one😆It was very lovely!!!😃

Poor Arnav. He doesnt want to let go of his baby 😔 i can totally imagine Arnav being like this. Its so natural for all the daddys! Loved how he was so stubborn! But deep down even he knows he has to let go of her one day! *sniff*, makes me emotional and im just 17!😆

Farrii i just love this really. Really was missing reading your writings. Now cant wait for part 2 of this TS! Im sure its going to be even better if thats even possible😆

Continue sooonnn😃

Oh oh i would love to read an OS on Ashar and Sarah! And how he gets his way😆
And it just clicked to me that Sarah is Lavanya's daughter on whom he has been crushing on since he was a day old!! HAAHAHAHAHA IS THAT CUTE OR WHAT???🤣



Have I ever told you I read your comments AT LEAST twice before replying?? 🤗 They always somehow give off such a happy and encouraging feel that I just LOVE reading them!! ❤️

Awww you loved Ashar Asmara bonding so much that it made you wish for a brother! 😲 Wowww! Thats a huge compliment for a fazool writer like me 😳

And yep, Daughters are always more closer to their dads so its all the more harder for them to cope with their absense 😔 I wonder the same thing as Arnav, Why do daughters have to leave?? 😛

Anyway hope you like the ending of this SS and I live up to your expectations 😳 Love youuu ❤️
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Originally posted by: ShiningStar18

Amazing!

Can't believe you fast forwarded by so many years that she's getting married! 😆

Haha the first guy i thought of after reading the name'Ahsan' was Ahsan Khan, the actor 😉

Anyways, lovely work

Can't wait for the second part 😳



Hehehe! Thanksss! And I had this concept in my mind for a long time, so decided to finally pen it down 😉 and hahaha! I didn't had Ahsan Khan in my mind while writing this 😉 I just love the name Ahsan (and its my younger brother's name too) and it goes well with Asmara so I decided to use it 😛

Originally posted by: MashiatMimosa

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc66cc">AWWW IT'S SOOO GOOD👏asmara has grown up so much
ashar resembles arnav sooo much, asmara and ashar scene reminds me of arshi scenes 😃...your TS makes me wish that hopefully ipkknd continues for soo many years that we get to see ashar and asmara's character in the show
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<font color="#cc0033" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">ps: thanks a lot for the PM🤗</font>




Awww thank you for your extra sweet comments with such cute emoticons that they always manage to lift up my mood 🤗 Thank Youuu ❤️

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