New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

just read both parts in one go and wowww you write with such simplicity and make the simplest situations so filled with emotions <3 be it light hearted or sentimental

I loved all the scenes and i was literally laughing and "awwing" all along lmao

the scene where asmara fell asleep in Ashar's lap reminds me of my younger brother when he sleeps in my older brother's lap during our family's long drives lmao

also i loved how she told him he would need help with Sarah lol reminded me of the junior's diary updates hehe

thanks for the PM this was a delight ;)

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@LumosMaxima

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Aww it was sooo Beautiful Fari..😳

Lovely, Amzing and Awsum..You Rock Girl. 🤗

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khusharnav

@khusharnav

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Thanks for the pm. Amazing! Great to read a story on how Arnav and Kushi evolved later in life. The interaction of Asmara and Ashar is a real treat to read. Ashar is definitely an improved version of Arnav! You portrayed Arnav insecurities very well - very typical of a father! The way you wrote this story -the interactions between the family members seems so genuine! Will be looking forward to your next update! Also anxious to know how Ashar will woo Sara for marriage!

Thanks again!

👏

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Sumaiya

@Sumaiya27

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

awww it was sooo cute 😳 asmara's emotions made me realize that what will happen when i will get married one day??😭 aww poor arnav and khushi, so many years have past but they haven't changed all all

ps: thanks for the pm and i m eagerly waiting for part 3 😃

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Nice one. Thnks for the pm.

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tokyo

@tokyo

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

I love the bond between brother and sister.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

awesome updateee...

loved ittt...

loved bro -sis parttt😊

i wish i had a bro hmm

thnx 4 pm😊

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

WOW very nice story.

Arnav is possessive about his doughter.

loved brother sister convo.

the story is awesome, faboulos, superb!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it SOO MUCH 🤗

really you did a very very good job

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HansaN

@HansaN

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Loved it dear so much. Keep continuing. Thanks for the wonderful story. Loved ur stories so much

Once again thanks for writing these awesome stories and entertaining us.