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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

I hope it is up to the mark and reaches your expectations.

Next update will come mostly on page 120! :)

Spammers make your way!

Hopefully the ninth chapter will be on a second thread! :D

Let's see how soon it happens! =P

I hope you all enjoyed reading it and will also enjoy in future.

Thank you for liking my part and showering your love on me!! :)

And thanks to all those who took out time and commented.

I will try to reply to each comment soon!

Thank you once again !

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Till then Take Care!

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_Nivriti

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Awesome update
Swayam changed soo much.Mature n now a professional dancer too.He didn't talk with louisans thats sad but i still want swaron n louisans to meet soon
Waiting for next part

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

WOW...lovely update dear...
loved the description u gave about swayam after 5 yrs...
he turned his dreams to reality...
WOW...love ur style of writing..u r an amazing writer

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
WOW...lovely update dear...
loved the description u gave about swayam after 5 yrs...
he turned his dreams to reality...
WOW...love ur style of writing..u r an amazing writer

Thank you! :D I am so Glad you liked it!

Cheers.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

I've been waiting for the update of this FF for a long time and Thank God, that it's finally here !! WOW, I didn't think that the story would actually move forward 5 freaking years and that Swayam had basically avoided Mumbai and his friends there this whole time. That's really sad. I'm happy that he fought his disease and is making his way in the dance scene but I really want to see him back with Sharon and not only her, but with the whole St.Louis gang !! Do update the next chapter soon !!

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

I thnk dis is d first tym i am commenting on ur work nd i m realy sory for dat coz i dont usually comment so late aftr i like wat i read bt as luck wud have it i always had sum kind of hurry while reading ur updates nd datz y nvr got to comment nd i m sincerely very sory for dat!!! Nw coming to ur FF...

Its amazing!! Evry character is penned down in a grt way nd obviously among dem swayam's is d strongest!!! Till now i realy lykd d story nd hoping u wud update sun nd it wud b grt too!!!

Edited by shreyasi28 - 12 years ago

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Eee.. An update.. Lovd it re.. I tell ur demands brings d hell out of us.. Huh
Swayam hs changed.. He hs grown much mature n finally he is out of dat bloody cancer.. Huh!!
Buh he dint contact louisans??? Ohki.. M stunned!
Poir louisans esp Sharon n Kriyaansh.. They wud neva in thr dreams hv thot tht swayam wud brk evry lil contact wid dem.. Yes.. He dint want to tl dem abt his disease bt still.. Yep he was unwell bt tht dsnt means he wud do dis.. Seriously.. Dis means he neva considered dem as thr true frns.. Though he misses dem bt still its nt justified!!

Workin under Remo.. Haayeee.. One shud hv d passion n determinance.. Evrythn follows thn !!
So his group.. All r nw professional trainers !!

Hmm.. They r thinkin to participate on some competition which is prestigious.. Dude time to face ur past tht u lft easily!! M sure.. Louisans l b thr.. N I want dem to show thr anger evn aftr knowin d whol truth coz wht he did wasnt right.. Wht abt his bst frns?? Wht ant hs love????

Wonder.. Mayank ka marriage sharon se ho rha ho toh????
Mazaa aa jayega..

Dis update was all on ur passion towards somethn n def givs a strong message..
Brilliantly written !
Js loved it <3
Cnt wait fr d dhaasu entry of d louisans..
Betta.. U update faster o elz I wont comment :)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

awesome...update res of the chapter soon...

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

OMG:-D:-D... WOWWW... FANTASTIC UPDATE:-):-):-) Loved it:-):-):-) EVERYTHING IS GREAT:-):-):-) PERFECT:-):-) But I must say I m missing the old Gang like swayam...