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Joseph

@Joseph_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Understand your view Nivi ! Congratulations for crossing 50 Pages of this FF.😛

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Joseph_A
Understand your view Nivi ! Congratulations for crossing 50 Pages of this FF.😛

Joseph Bhaii!! 🤗 Long time no see.. Where have you been?

I miss you lamba wala comments and frank wale criticisms in Intricate Knots. AND nobody has actually been reading that Fic.!

But glad to see your back and thanks for your wishes! 🤗

_Nivi :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Hi, my name is Vedika😊
Luv ur works!!! Keep the pms coming!!

Hey Vedika! I will surely keep the PMs coming! So how old are you?

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

I got ya.. Ur right.. Insecurities n mental instabilities do wonders..
Bt as I said.. It pinchin me bt thts how it us supposed to b n m ready to put myself in ur shoe as m in love wid dis FF.. N tm ne meta eagerness aur bdha diya by mentionin abt dat twist :p
Now toh ul hav to update it jldi jldi..

N m Palak !!

Well, certain pages complete and the Next Chapter is Updated! 😉 That's the rule! 😆

So, Palak how old are you?

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rashmi

@morning_dews

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

hmmm nivi, sorry for late comments..

it was more than an awesome update dear...

i just loved it a lottt...umm bechara swayam.. :((

thanks for the PM

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: rashmi24sya
hmmm nivi, sorry for late comments..
it was more than an awesome update dear...
i just loved it a lottt...umm bechara swayam.. :((
thanks for the PM

Thank you for taking out time and commenting! 😃 Glad you liked the update! 😳

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

<font size="2">Well, certain pages complete and the Next Chapter is Updated!😉That's the rule!😆</font>
<font size="2">So, Palak how old are you?</font>

Ouh.. Demands n All yea..!
Umm.. M 20 n u??

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Pheww I m Back here... Spam Spam Spam;-)

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#289

I have started reading this FF. Hopefully I will be upto date with current updates as soon as possible. So here is my comment on first update -

Chapter one : First of all I would say thanks for begining the FF with the plot of Swayam leaving college track. Because personally what they showed in that track in the show was something which bounced above my head. So its really awesome to read another version of that storyline.

Moving forward I have never read a multifandom FF so I was apprehensive about it. But it was quite different but still enjoyable experience for me. Although there wasn't much to do for Arnav. Moving on perfectly written chapter. Mine favourite portion was the way Sharon bursted on Swayam and said he can't leave college without her permission. It was short but sweet portion, in complete sync with Sharon's character. Rey and Kriya part was also awesomely written. An yeah nice character additions in form of Swayam's twin sis and mom. Both made there presence felt.

So Swayam seems to be suffering from some disease. Well it seems like this FF is going to be emotional roller coaster ride. Will soon comment on second chapter after reading it.

- Shishir

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

And here I am with my comment on second chapter. Well I kind of got hooked to this FF. So I guess I will be commenting lot faster :)

Chapter 2 : Now your description of Swayam's room make me feel ashame on seeing the condition of my room. I guess I will clean it tomorrow only. 😳 . Simply awesome description of the room I can literally visualise the room creating itself before me with each update. Sharon's jealous side though in just two lines but was amusingly written. But what caught my eye in this update was Kriya and Swayam's friendship. Even though it was not focused upon but still it was wonderfully established.

And finally I would say fantastically established Swayam's character. Nice changes and addition to his overall attributes. I guess ab wo bhadkne wala hai in third chapter. And BTW more new characters? I guess I have find it out sooner than I had expected.

P.S - Nice overall change in the plots and glad that you actually made a post and told about them.

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