Originally posted by: marauder
You know D3 has its own share of plus point and so it has its own negative points too. A lot of unfinished track and abrupt begining and ending of tracks, lack of PoV's of each character, various plotholes; but what definitely is the most irksome is lack of parents of these characters. If only their parents angle have been also shown this show would have been on completely diferent plattform. Thats why even though I like D3 and absolutely love SwaRon but still my rational mind would rate it below REMIX, which used to come on Star One.
I had thought I will most probably complete this FF till the chapter which you have last added today only but apparently I was bit busy in eeping over the precap and episode. So couldn't complete it today. Now enough of my rants. Here's the comment.
Chapter 4 : So apparently its time for history lessons in this chapter. I guess it was needed with whole range of characters you have introduced, the whole equation and relation of each other was needed to be explained to fully grasp the situation and prepare ourselves for some more new characters I guess. Judging by the update looks like Swayam's dadi is also gonna be part of this FF? Overall quite a sweet update and kind of provided respite from the fear which is hidden beneath the light and funny words of this FF so far or was it the silence before the storm? It was quite pleasant to read about Swayam and Sakshi's bond and that little episode of Swayam's mom and dad also made a pleasant read.
P.S - By the way Tani is also here? I must say a lot of characters are here. Lets see how you will put them at use. I hope you justify all of them :)
Well. That is exactly what irked me all the while. Though D3 is a youth based telly-series, but sometimes parent's point of views are also important.
During the track when rumors of Taani and Rey as a couple where spreading, I had actually wished they would show parent's point of views and values as well.
Not like the typical Saas-Bahu serials where they would have stopped him / her to go to college, but normal , intellectual parents who would have helped them to handle out the situation maturely.
Because, over everything, It is a Telly-series which influences it's viewers which are basically Youth who need to be told that whatever hurdle may come parents will always be there to get you back on track!
And this is exactly why I added Swayam's parents in this FF as it is based on him mostly.
Coming back to the analysis of the Chapter, well I had the same thing in my mind that my readers needed some background story for all the provisions of new characters in this Fan Fiction! 😉
And I am glad you liked it. 😳
About Dadi-sa being a part of the Fan Fiction, I haven't really given it a thought!! 😕
So, maybe and maybe not she will be a part.
And about Taani, yeah she is here as well but maybe she will get a little side-lined with all the tracks I plan to put forward.
Even I am hoping I am able to justify all my characters! 🤔
Anyways. Thanks again for your lovely and valuable comment. Shall jump down to the next comment! 😆
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