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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: sajan_swaron
u know this FF is going freaking awesome
its amazing
the way u r explaining swayams pov is marvellous
i love reading every bit of this FF
awww the bond shared by gunjan n swayam is so cute
love the D3 gang
arnav was so emotional
n hope swayam gets well soon
keep updating soon
thanx for d pm

I am sooo glad you liked my update! 😳 I will update As Soon As Possible.! 😉

Vaise, I believe you like Samrat-Gunjan also [your username! 😆😆] , I have one MJHT Fan Fiction, do read it if you have time!

P.S: What's your name?

_Nivriti :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: beeny
hey soo emosnl updaye & full of frndsip 2nd stage he so hope yaar ye jaldi se thik ho jaye & NY ka safar achcha ho plz do next update soon
waiting for next update thanx for pm

Hi Dear! :) I am glad you liked my update.. 😳 Next update As Soon As Possible! 😃

P.S: What is your name? 😕

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

So Guys!🤗 My Job Done! 😃

Now Your Turn! 😉

And once again I would like to thank all of you for taking out time and commenting! 😳

@PRATIK - You were right, 50 pages already! 😆

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Hey Guys! 🤗

50 Pages and my First Note on this Fan Fic.! 😆

While replying back and reading all the comments I received after Chapter Five, I noticed many people mentioning this one thing!

Most of you have mentioned as to why hasn't Swayam told his Louisian Friends about his now revealed Leukemia / Blood Cancer? 😕

So, with my following words, I am trying to convince you all and also explain as to why he has done so!

I had already written this as a reply to Pihu's comment, so It's a Copy-Paste!

But I thought it is important for me to tell you all about this..

You know sometimes even if you are the bestest friends with somebody, you just don't have the courage to speak the truth to him/ her.

And that is exactly what has happened with Swayam!

I am speaking from my personal experience.. !! 🤢

I did not have the guts to tell my bestest friend in school about the problems I had but to just a GOOD Friend! 😳

It's human nature and that is what Swayam is doing.

It's just his insecurity and mental instability or as I would frame pressure which is forcing him to take such a step.. 😉

And here toh he is telling one of his very old friends, in Hindi termed as "Chuddy-Buddy"😆..

I speak from experience, that is why I am pretty confident about it.

Though when my friends caught me, they were pretty angry and blasted at me..

But It's Insecurity we speak of.

And Insecurity overpowers your thinking ability and mental stability!

So, this is not exactly "Lack of Trust" we speak of, but plain and simply Insecurity and Unsurity of your choice.

Actually I have nuanced characters in my Fan Fiction. 😳 See, you wouldn't find Swayam from New York or Shivam still friends with Sharon in the show! 😉

Understood you expected more out of Kria, Rey and Swayam but I would suggest just go with the flow, since whatever I have in my mind, you will find it nuanced from the show! 😃

It's a surprise-fulled package / Fan Fiction! And many things would be different as it is very vital for my future / forthcoming Chapters. 🤓

The story has an interesting twist ahead and also Swayam is currently on a FRAGILE state of mind.

Try to put yourself in his shoe and you would definitely understand! 😉

I did the same and this is what I could think of ! 😃

I hope you get the gist of it! 😳

I will update As Soon As Possible.. 😃

Thank you once again for liking my Chapter and I hope it is cleared out as to why Swayam did so! 😉

_Nivriti ❤️

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Hey Guys! 🤗

I Know I am pretty late for this..

But they say, "Better Late Than Never! 😉"

I want to thank all the people who have pressed the like button on my first few chapters, and I am sorry not for mentioning it before! 😳

Introduction :

The following 34 member(s) liked the above post:

sajan_swaron, ayesha1249, gitikakhatri4, crazy4ZaynMalik, guglu-baby, amruTa_SWaRon, shalini_arsha, glossyglassy, shreyasi28, kriyaanshd3,

abhiya_kapi, angelwords, LavenderCrystal, nature2, ishka_virani, rashmi24sya,

shria, dips098, idiot_box, tanukaswaron, pratik54000, additive_monaya, Aishh.,

drashsree100, gopi06, Riasa, taibaaa, maria_mahar, ABBY92, lovely7010, SheDevil, ---Priya---, MoNayaHolicPrag, romaila,

First Chapter :

The following 46 member(s) liked the above post:

anjanasaini1912, sirani07, 1stluvshantanu, mrash, sharuKR, doll_sg, arjuhiswaron007,

tanvipareek, bhanumathi, beeny, swaronilicious, shreyasi28, tanzz15, amruTa_SWaRon,

d3lover90, crazy4ZaynMalik, meerubzara, Pihu.k11, dips098, nature2, sadiyaswaron,

ishka_virani, kriyaanshd3, angelwords, idiot_box, rashmi24sya, meevee, surbhimathur,

tanukaswaron, drashsree100, gopi06, abhilasha_dream, additive_monaya, pratik54000,

Riasa, maria_mahar, lovely7010, ABBY92, Sudha-SK, Born2Dance, spn-abhay, taibaaa, Suku_SwaRon, romaila, MoNayaHolicPrag, ---Priya---,

Second Chapter :

The following 31 member(s) liked the above post:

anjanasaini1912, sirani07, sharuKR, sweetcherry95, pooja123456, doll_sg,

arjuhiswaron007, beeny, rosamale, d3lover90, shreyasi28, tanzz15, Pihu.k11,

swaronamit, meerubzara, nature2, sadiyaswaron, idiot_box, additive_monaya,

pratik54000, --Rose--, drashsree100, abhilasha_dream, gopi06, Riasa, ABBY92, Sudha-SK, lovely7010, spn-abhay, abhiya_pkyek, MoNayaHolicPrag,

Thanks to all new and old readers for liking/commenting/reading my Fan Fiction.

Also, for Dil Dosti Dance Fans, I have started a new One Shot GALLERY where I will try my best to post OS on all the couples in the show! 😳

D3 OS Gallery

Do Have A Look.. It is Named "My Imagination Hinterland!"

Love, Nivriti :)

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Yeah, I got wat u mean by insecurity and unsurity. Or sometimes u dont want to see them hurt...

But wen it comes to REYAM or KRIYAM bonding... we expect too much.

Don't mind, just my thoughts. Keep on writing the way u are... it's just awesome.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: mrash
Yeah, I got wat u mean by insecurity and unsurity. Or sometimes u dont want to see them hurt...

But wen it comes to REYAM or KRIYAM bonding... we expect too much.

Don't mind, just my thoughts. Keep on writing the way u are... it's just awesome.

Actually I have nuanced characters in my Fan Fiction. 😳 See, you wouldn't find Swayam from New York or Shivam still friends with Sharon in the show! 😉

Understood you expected more out of Kria, Rey and Swayam but I would suggest just go with the flow, since whatever I have in my mind, you will find it nuanced from the show! 😃

It's a surprise-fulled package / Fan Fiction! And many things would be different as it is very vital for my future / forthcoming Chapters. 🤓

The story has an interesting twist ahead and also Swayam is currently on a FRAGILE state of mind.

Try to put yourself in his shoe and you would definitely understand! 😉

I did the same and this is what I could think of ! 😃

P.S : What's your name?

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

thanks for clarification nivi

uptd soon

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Thank you so much! Next update is going to be As Soon As Possible.

P.S: What is your name? 😳

Hi, my name is Vedika😊

Luv ur works!!! Keep the pms coming!!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Reading your comment! First Reaction..😲

The first time I received such a long comment from anybody on this FF!😳


I am really glad I can actually capture your attention with my writing / chapter. Believe me, you are the first to say so!


And you know sometimes even if you are the bestest friends with somebody, you just don't have the courage to speak the truth to him/ her.And that is exactly what has happened with Swayam!


I am speaking from my personal experience.. !!🤢I did not have the guts to tell my bestest friend in school about the problems I had but to just a GOOD Friend!😳


It's human nature and that is what Swayam is doing. It's just his insecurity and mental instability or as I would frame pressure which is forcing him to take such a step..😉And here toh he is telling one of his very old friends, in Hindi termed as "Chuddy-Buddy"😆..


I speak from experience, that is why I am pretty confident about it. Though when my friends caught me, they were pretty angry and blasted at me.. But It's Insecurity we speak of. And Insecurity overpowers your thinking ability and mental stability!


I hope you get the gist of it!😳


I will update As Soon As Possible..😃Thank you once again for liking my Chapter and I hope it is cleared out as to why Swayam did so!😉


_Nivriti :)


P.S: Is your name Pihu? [Guessing from your username!😳]

I got ya.. Ur right.. Insecurities n mental instabilities do wonders..
Bt as I said.. It pinchin me bt thts how its supposed to b n m ready to put myself in ur shoe as m in love wid dis FF.. N tm ne mers eagerness aur bdha diya by mentionin abt dat twist :p
Now toh ul hav to update it jldi jldi..

N m Palak !!

Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago

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