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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
waiting for next part
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww lovely update both on HM but wait wat sam is doing there grrr wana kill her
waiting for next update yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update is dedicated to Bloom so sweets give me a long comments. Say hi lappy, bye mobile😉.
Part 10
Geet blushed, Maan side hugged her. At the other side Hamari Sam also landed in Hawaii😆.
Her plan was all set.Maaneet entered the hotel.
G: Maan let's go to the beach
M: Geet we just arrived. Aren't you tired
G:From what sleeping in the flight. maan aap bhi na
M:Geet your imposssible let's go
Maneet reached the beach
G:Maan why is the beach empty
M:Because Mrs.Khurana. Maanu wanted to be alone with his Tia
G:Acha ji
M:haan ji
Maneet smiled.
M:Geet let's play a game
G:Okay
M:We will hide in turns and sing a song. The other one will search with close eyes there loves one
G:Oh that sounds like fun
M:Geet you start
G:Theek hai maan
Maan closed his eyes. Geet hided her self while she sung.
G:Aankhon ko yoon band karke
Dheme dheme gin gin ke
Dhoondon humein hum hain kahan
Ho bhule se fasaane hai
Zameen se begaaney hai
Dekho hue hum toh hawa
Maan followed Geet's melodious voice and found her sitting behind a rock. He went on his knees and kissed her cheek. he opened his eyes to find a blushing Geet.
M:Found ya
G:Mu turn
M:Mu turn.
Maan laughed
G:I mean mine turn now stop making fun of me and go hide.
Geet closed her eyes and Maan started singing.
M:Haan yeh zidd hai meri
Tujhko hi sochengey ab hum
Roshini yeh teri
Khwaabon mein rakhengey band hum
Haan subah kab soyi
Taare kab jaage
Hum bhule hai ki kab kya hua
Geet blushed hearing his words. She walked very slowly. She was lost in his song.Maan smiled seeing her antics. He loved having this affect on his Tia. Maan started walking while singing instead of standing in on place he walked towards a hut. He wanted to tease geet more.He wanted to make a bit diff for her to find him.
M:Le rahein the saansein
Zinda nahi the kabhi hum
Dil yeh tujhko deke
Dhadkan se vaakif huye hum
Haan tujh mein hi gum hai
Tujh mein hi khoye
Ab waise bhi jaana kahan
Geet blushed more but after a while she didn't hear his singing anymore. She opened her eyes and called for him, but no reply.She looked around she saw some shadows. She walked towards the hut. What she heard and saw shook her. Maan was hugging Sameera. He wasn't letting her go. His hand was really tight on her back. Sameera had her face hidden her face in his chest. The sight burned Geet. She was about to call them when Sam's voice silenced her.
S:Maan are you alone here
M:No with Geet
S:What I don't want her to see me like this. Please Maan don't tell her about all this please
M:Hmm as you wish
S:Thanks your the best
Maan was about to let sam go when she cluchted to him again. Geet couldn't take it anymore. She walked away from there and sat on a rock thinking about what she saw inside. In the mean while.
M:Sam I need to look for Geet. In the mean while let me give you a shawl.
Sam let go, Maan gave her a shwal.
S:Maan I am scared
M:Don't be I am here. Why don't you come with me
S:NO I don't want Geet to know I am here atleast not yet. Please Maan
M:I understand calm down
S:Maan how will I get out of here without anyone noticing me.Maan I am scared
M:I know sam. I will tell my bodyguard to take you to your hotel.
S:No please Maan.
Sam sobbed.
M:Alright Sam I won't leave you calm down.
Maan called his bodyguard.
M:Take Geet madame to the hotel tell her I will be back in a while and there is nothing to worry about.
B:yes sir
The bodyguard went to Geet.
B:Ma'am
G:Hmmm
B:Sir told me to take you to the hotel. He will be back after a while and that there is nothing to worry about
Images of Sam hugging Maan popped in her mind. Geet nodded in trance and walked towards the car. Her mind was somewhere else.
At the other side
M:Sam let's go
S:Maan I am so scared
M:Sam your safe now
Flashback
Maan was singing while walking. When he entered the hut he saw a crying and scared sam. He walked over to her.
M:Sam you okay
S:woh some goons where following me woh they
She started crying again and pointed to her back. He dress was torn for a part from behind and she was bleeding. Before Maan could react sam stood up and hide her in Maan's embrace. That's when geet saw everything.
End of flashback.
Maan took sam to her hotel. She kept sobbing. Maan looked at the clock it was 8 pm.
M:Sam I need to go geet must be waiting
S:Maan please don' t tell geet.Please Maan I
Her sobbing started again
M:I won't calm down.
After a while Maan left.Sam smirked. The first step of her plan was completed.Maan called geet when he left the room. geet didn't pick up he rushed towards the hotel to find Geet looking lost while looking out of the window. Maan put a hand on her shoulder.Geet felt Maan's touch and turned around.
G:Maan when did you come
Maan sat next to her.
M:Just now
G:Where were you
M:Forget that you tell me have you had dinner
G:No and you
M:No let me order something
Geet nodded. Maan kissed her on her forhead.Before standing up to place the order. When Maan was about to open the door.Geet;s voice stopped him.
G:Maan where and with whom where you
M:Geet let's eat first theek hai Tia
G:Answer me first
I hate lying to you Geet, but what to do I promised Sam and MSK never breaks a promise. I am sorry Jaan. Forgive me
M:Woh Geet I got a important call. I had to go to meet a client
G:In Hawaii
M:Haan
Maan said with a nervous laugh.
G:Maan I am hungry
M:haan I will order food
When maan left tears fell from Geet;s eyes and one one question ran through he mind. Why did he lie. When she heard the door she wiped her tears away. She closed her eyes and lay on her back, she acted like she was sleeping. She knew if she would talk her voice would give her pain away so she decided to act like she was sleeping and she didn;t feel to eat anything, anyway.Maan saw her sleeping. He carresed her hair.
M:Geet
Getting no reply he decided to let her sleep she must be really tired Maan didn't feel like eating without her so he also went to bed on a empty stomach. But geet was to lost to notice.
Next Upate:I want a long comment from Sara. So Lovesia, Tamana , Bloom. Tia and everyone else who wants a update you guys now what to do if you want a update😉PLEAD SARA TO COMMENT😆Have fun
War is on Sara😆aur Haan I am shivering dhamki queen
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz geet...trust ur maan...u knw na ur maan loves u more dan anything...plz dont mu him geet...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome !!!!!!!
I hate Sam !!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
uff...this sam.
Maan there is nothing hidden between husband and wify. So even if u promised it doesn't count.
Waiting for the next one.
And whoever is Sara pls do comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hate Sam SOOO much
Maan you can't keep secrets from Geet brooo
she's your other half !
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...
Sissy co mment baad mei...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sam bi... planning everything geet saw them hugging maan idiot promise ke chakkar mein geet ka trust break kar raha hai idiothope will will teach hthis bi... a good lesson



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Posted: 12 years ago
Grrr...sam...maaeet ka HM hi mila tha iss witch ko to create MU b/w them ?????? Ab who's gonna clear d clouds of MU & how ??? Biggest question,mel pls ans thru update :-)

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