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SHALINI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

I loved the way Arnav confronts Khushi's parents, and with complete honesty tells them, his intentions...
and also as you said Khushi is learning to stand up for herself from Arnav, i really liked that... First i was like, she will not own up and some excuses, but wait that was a surprise, that Khushi owned up to her relatioship with Arnav...
Totally loving this masterclass going on between Arnav and Khushi...
Amazing update as always Naina...

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

awesome update..loved it...

did arnav really do that? oh boy...looks like hell is going to break from khushi's side...

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

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ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Naina I really love your story...I don't find Arnav boring at all but a mature intelligent man with emotional issues, and your Khushi is intelligent, family orientated unlike many of the fanfics that portray khushi as an immature child.

as someone earlier said you have given us a modern love story with an Indian feel to it...I for one am a big fan and don't ever want it to stop

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

OMG who the hell said that 'this story is losing its charm', 'that its becoming 'just like any other fanfic out there', 'that 'this arnav is BORING my brains out', 'that 'how stupid is Khushi that a few kisses from Arnav and her brain stops working'...

I AM HEAD OVER HEALS IN LOVE WITH THIS TRACK...

Love the way you have portrayed Arnav and Khushi...

Well you say that... I love my story and I will keep going..

I don't ever want you to finish such a beautiful track...

but ya what I also din't expect was Arnav confronting her parents.. VOILA... how beautifully written thoughts persented by him and her... what a choice of words... AWESOME... Loved it...

Can't wait to listen to A K telephone conversation after this...

UPDATE SOON...

Love ya...mmmuuaaahh...

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Fari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Ohhh I loved how Arnav went back and asked Shashi's permission! I wasn't expecting him to do that 😳 but it was very brave and honest of him 😛 Can't wait to see how Khushi will react with Arnav after this 😛

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: warriorprincess
Last, there are plenty more challenges. For those who have emailed me to say (and I quote):

'this story is losing its charm'
that its becoming 'just like any other fanfic out there',
that 'this arnav is BORING my brains out',
and that 'how stupid is Khushi that a few kisses from Arnav and her brain stops working'...

I think is it wonderfully courageous and honest of you to put up your negative criticism in the open forum and justify it...

Now i can see where khushi gets her honesty and courage from ... :)

I can tell you that there are many people who enjoy your stories, like your writing style and are keenly waiting for updates from you...that includes me.

I am glad that you are not getting bogged down by the negativity...as you know...to each her own...and if someone doesnt like a story..they should not read it...its not like theyre being forced...

Please continue to write...its a great story and youre a talented writer...

Cheers

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