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Chapter one

~{!.~}Who is Rahul?, could it be his husband, her child, whoever it is , it was not good news~{!/~} Angad thought, as he jogged in the park at early morning. He fell in love with her at ~{!.~}first sight~{!/~}! People would laugh at him and make of him especially with Angad, who would expect Angad to fall in love when he himself is play boy in front of everyone where as Angad just shows it to everyone that he too is a guy and specially not gay when some soldier were thinking of him. Angad decided to prove them to flirt with girls in front and spend time in club.~{!/~} Stupid waste of time~{!/~} he thought. To everyone, Angad can never fall in love because he never treated them seriously but her, ~{!.~}Kripa~{!/~} he thought was special. He sighed, as he stopped and sat in bench and drank the water from his bottle. On the other hand Rahul can Kripa~{!/~}s sibling, yes he thought, that could be. There was no way Rahul could be her son or her husband, she is way too young besides she looked like in her twenties.

~{!.~}Only if I get to see her again, only~{!-~}. Then he~{!/~}ll have her~{!/~} he thought, ~{!.~}just one chance~{!/~}

**

~{!.~}Where is Kripa?~{!/~} a woman called to one of the maids.

The woman sat comfortably on sofa reading a magazine.

~{!.~}Ma~{!/~}am, she is sleeping?~{!/~}

The woman suddenly looked up from her magazine and glared at the maid but then suddenly changes her expression into calm. ~{!.~}Have you tried waking up her?~{!/~}

~{!.~}No Ma~{!/~}am, she looked tired and ill from yesterday~{!/~}s work, so I let her go.~{!/~} The maid replied in nervous.

~{!.~}What?~{!/~} the woman yelled at her. The maid was frightened and nervous. The lady expression changed into calm as a thought occurred to her. She smiled mischievously.

~{!.~}You may go now~{!/~}

The lady walked up stairs to the third floor and stopped at one door. She had a thick wooden stick in her hand. She slowly opened the door and tiptoed inside. She stopped beside the bed, where a person was laying underneath the duvet. She raised the stick and hit the lady where she predicted was her stomach, hardly.

~{!.~}Ooow~{!/~} the other person cried.

The lady pulls away the blanket and was about to hit the stick again, when suddenly the person stood on her feet. The silent tears rolled from her, as she hugged her stomach.

~{!.~}I am sorry~{!/~} the person wept.

~{!.~}You should be~{!/~} the lady said sternly. She is Nitya.

Nitya raised the stick and hit her again on her arms then on her back. The other screamed in pain.

~{!.~}What are you standing here for? Go and wash all the dishes and clothes. I want everything cleaned with in few minutes, now go~{!/~} she screamed at her.

The other person, frightened quickly turned to go to the bathroom. She stood in front of the mirror and cried. She looked at her shoulder, there were red bruises all over, she looked at her stomach, and there were bruises there as well. This was her life, kripa~{!/~}s life. Why was she born to suffer all the pain, she hadn~{!/~}t done anything wrong. She is only here because of Rahul. This was her life, doing all work and wake up with pain in the morning when you are ill.

She quickly changed into full sleeves chooridar to hide her bruises. And she left for downstairs to suffer her daily life tortes.

~{!.~}Where is Eijaz?~{!/~}

~{!.~}He left yesterday for some important work~{!/~} she replied

~{!.~}For howl long?~{!/~}

~{!.~}For two days~{!/~}

Nitya smiled at herself.

~{!.~}Mooooooom~{!/~} a young voice called at her. Kripa looked towards the door; saw a boy about the age of seven standing at the door, smiling at her. Suddenly all her pain went vanished away as she saw the boy. A big smile spread on her face. She bent down on her knees and opens her arms. The boy came running to her and hugs her. Kripa slowly puts her around the little boys and hugs him back tightly. She cups his tiny face on her palms and kisses him everywhere.

~{!.~}Mom~{!-~} why are your crying?~{!/~}

Kripa smiled at her son. It gave her the reason to live today; she was everything because of him, Rahul. Her own son, her blood.

~{!.~}I am not crying~{!/~} she replied wiping her own tears.

~{!.~}You can~{!/~}t lie to me mom. I know everything. Rahul replied in his sweet child voice, ~{!.~}You promised me not to cry~{!/~}

~{!.~}See I am not crying. O.k. Tell me how did you come here?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Surprise!~{!/~}

~{!.~}It is indeed~{!/~} she said laughing.

**

Angad sat in the conference room thinking about her.

~{!.~}Angad~{!/~}

No reply.

~{!.~}Who is she? Why would she want to write a letter and throw is a sea. This is different, very. Furthermore what did she say about her life is hell? Suddenly his expressions changes into angry, who would want to hurt an innocent girl like, and she is not a girl. She is an angel, only his angel. The only angel who has a right on him, it is only her.

~{!.~}ANGAD~{!/~}

He suddenly came back to his senses looked embarrassed when most of the people were looking at him. He quickly stood up.

~{!.~}Sir~{!/~} he saluted to Kartik.

~{!.~}Is everything in action for today?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Yes~{!/~}

~{!.~}Knock Knock

~{!.~}Come in~{!/~}

In came another man. ~{!.~}Sir~{!/~} he saluted

~{!.~}What is the news?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Sir, we just got to know that Eijaz is out of town~{!/~}

~{!.~}What?

~{!.~}Yes.~{!/~}

~{!.~}You can go?~{!/~}

Angad looked thought full but then he spoke, ~{!.~}the Plan is still in action. Don~{!/~}t worry; we just got to know that he has w weakness that is his own son~{!/~}

~{!.~}So~{!-~}?~{!/~} Kartik continued

~{!.~}It~{!/~}s easy, we will kidnap their son. Ejaz would come looking for us because he would demand his son. We will have him and return his son back. Sir, as soon he got the new about his son, he would come running back for his son. He won~{!/~}t want the police involved with him unless he bribed then but then again we have more power over him in ways. His, son is his weaknesses.~{!/~}

~{!.~}How Old is his son?~{!/~} Kartik enquired

~{!.~}According sources, he~{!/~}s about seven or six.~{!/~}

~{!.~}That~{!/~}s too young!~{!/~}

Angad was surprised to see Kartik reacting emotional. He guessed he is sensitive when it comes to young children. Angad smiled.

~{!.~}Don~{!/~}t worry sir, we will kidnap him in front of their eyes but we won~{!/~}t harm him. We will drop him in special child care play house, where he will get all the fun.

~{!.~}Good~{!/~}

**

Kripa gave all her attention to Rahul, she kept near eye to Rahul so that he won~{!/~}t go to Nitya. Further more she does not want to Rahul to know any of her pains. He is only a kid.

**

At night.

Kripa caressed Rahul~{!/~}s hair as she watch him sleep. No matter how much she has suffered all pains, they would go instantly away. Rahul the son of Kripa and Ejaz, Rahul was not a normal born; he was made as a result of rape. Why should she hate Rahul for this, it~{!/~}s not his fault. She loved him, no matter how he was made. She was also happy even Ejaz accepted him as his own son. Kripa was afraid that he would want her to have abortion but it turned the other way out.

Kripa admitted Rahul in boarding school because she does not want Rahul to be aware of all the pains. Eventually Ejaz also agreed for the sake of his own son. Kripa was happy that Ejaz would choose his son over his mother. She knew deep down he was a good man, it was all because of his mother. Ejaz was not evil when they got to know each other. It all turned horrible after her step into the house. She saw him crying, fighting with his own emotions. She does not blame him, because she knows the real Ejaz. It~{!/~}s all because of his mother.

**

Angad and his soldier surrounded the Ejaz house. They all had the weapons ready; the soldier put the ladder that takes up to Rahul. Angad started to climb up in the ladder slowly and stayed below the window. His heart was nervous, he was trembling. ~{!.~}Why am I so shaky today~{!/~} he thought, ~{!.~}I am not always like that, it~{!/~}s only for good? Why does not it sound right?~{!/~} he thought. He felt her sense near her. ~{!.~}Not know~{!/~} he thought! ~{!.~}It~{!/~}s a mission~{!/~} he reminded himself.

Kripa got up and kissed him on the cheeks and went for the bathroom.

Angad knocked the windows out with the gun, creating a loud sound and jumped in inside. He saw the boy awake, with eyes. He is so cute he thought, at that moment he felt disgusted of himself. Every step towards him felt heavy for him. His eyes reminded him of someone. He quickly picked up the boy and headed for the window.

Kripa came out quickly out of the bathroom, saw Rahul in stranger~{!/~}s arm, crying and calling out for her, ~{!.~}mamma.. .~{!/~} Kripa cried, ~{!.~}Rahul~{!/~} and ran for him but it was too late, the man had already jumped out of the window. Kripa ran to the window, Rahul~{!-~}, please help someone~{!/~} she cried. With out doing anything, stepped on the glasses that were pieces from broken window, she was about to jump from window when some body grabbed her hair pushed to the ground. It was Nitya, ~{!.~}Let him go, he was a pain in ass~{!/~}

~{!.~}Rahul~{!/~} Kripa cried

She fainted. Nitya looked at her and smiled. She hit fainted Kripa all on her body, letting her anger out on her. After few minutes Kripa lay in the floor, lying in the pool of blood.

**

As Angad ran towards his van carrying a boy, his heart shattered into million pieces because he broke someone~{!/~}s heart. ~{!.~}What is happening to me~{!/~} he thought. The voice he heard emphases so pain that he felt a knife stabbing his heart. May be she was his mother; he reasoned. He has met a single mother who loved his son that much. He felt like going back and gives them their son back. The voice kept ringing in his ears, causing his heart ache.

Coming up: Angad and Kripa meet. 😃

love

Sanya 😃

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omg datz sooo sad 😭 so ejaz and kripa are married? well awesum part still!!!lubed it 👏
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wow, that was a very emotional part...that definitely left an impact on me...can't wait for monday 😊
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ufffffffffff!!! mar dala ! that was sooo good!! 👏 really superb!! chalo now that u have a schedule for updating ur fanfics, i don't have to say cont. soon!! but do take care n follow ur schedule!!
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Originally posted by: Sour Skittles

omg datz sooo sad 😭 so ejaz and kripa are married? well awesum part still!!!lubed it 👏
himani

Thanks Himany. yes Ejaz and Kripa are married. Ejaz is played by Ejaz Khan.

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Originally posted by: nabz8888

ufffffffffff!!! mar dala ! that was sooo good!! 👏 really superb!! chalo now that u have a schedule for updating ur fanfics, i don't have to say cont. soon!! but do take care n follow ur schedule!!

Thanks Nabz. I am following by schedule especially the part when I said 'any day' 😆😳.

The next part will be in today or tommo.

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wow, that was a very emotional part...that definitely left an impact on me...can't wait for monday 😊

Thanks you. Monday is gone 😭 but doo u mean upcoming monday? 😉😛

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Originally posted by: blah_blah

great part! 👏 👏

Thank you.

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Chapter Two

It~{!/~}s been a week, Kripa is still in shock. Ejaz has arrived immediately after he heard news. The news left him shock and devastating. He loved Rahul more than anything. Seeing Kripa in this state hurts him too but at the same time his ego took over him.

Ejaz has the video of the whole scene and has figured out who the person is. The Khan mansion has CCTV cameras all over the rooms for security.

Ejaz sat back at his managerial chair leaning back with eyes closed. Why would the man want to kidnap his child? What has he done to them? Is it connected to Kripa, he thought. But then again Kripa stayed home all day. May be he is wrong, that woman can do anything as she has betrayed him before which shattered his soul and forced him to be strict, harsh over her. His heart somewhere didn~{!/~}t believe that she could it but why would his own mother lie to him and the proofs that were shown were true. He is confidant because he himself has consulted the Fake photographers and video company and there were no records of producing that thing. It was true.

Suddenly his cell rang, he put the cell to his ears, ~{!.~}Hi, Ejaz speaking~{!/~}

~{!.~}Yes Ejaz sir, its Doctor Karan speaking~{!/~} the voice on the other end replied.

~{!.~}Any change?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Yes, She has been responding but she seems to be calling someone called Rahul~{!/~} the doctor replied.

~{!.~}Oh~{!/~}

~{!.~}Her condition is very critical at the moment if we don~{!/~}t get the person; she will fall back to coma~{!/~}

~{!.~}WHAT~{!/~} Ejaz replied shocked?

~{!.~}I am sorry sir but we need you now~{!/~}

~{!.~}O.K, I am coming.~{!/~}

Ejaz reached the hospital and went straight to Karan~{!/~}s cabin.

~{!.~}Doctor~{!/~} he breathed

~{!.~}Mr. Khan~{!/~}

~{!.~}Yes~{!/~}

~{!.~}Please have a seat.~{!/~} He took a sit and look at the doctor worriedly.

~{!.~}Is everything all right?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Well, the incident that took last week is the evident that the kidnappers have not touched Mrs. Khan but we see some bruises on her body!~{!/~}

Ejaz looked at the doctor confused and then his expression changed into serious, ~{!.~}What do you mean?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Do you know anyone who could be harming her and by this I mean violently~{!/~} the doctor replied.

Ejaz eyes widened. ~{!.~}No~{!/~}

~{!.~}I am sorry sir but it is required to know, this matter can be plainly serious and can require police as well~{!/~}

~{!.~}Are you trying to say that someone physically harms her?~{!/~} he asked

~{!.~}Yes, indeed, but the medical reports say that these bruises are permanent which means that she~{!/~}s been beaten daily? Do you know anyone who is after her?~{!/~}

Ejaz looked at the doctor worried. This is not Kripa, she has always been cheerful in front of him and he has never taken any violent action towards her. Who could it be? There are only maids and mother at his house.

~{!.~}No, can I see her~{!/~} he asked weakly?

The doctor nodded.

**

She laid there on the bed like a dead body. Her forehead and arms were bandaged and her legs. Her face seemed as pale with dried tears.

He looked at her from the window and tears of guilt formed in his eyes. This was not Kripa; she was always cheerful and bubbly. What had happened to them? They were happily married and even before marriage they were happy. Is it his entire fault?

~{!.~}No~{!/~} his mind reasoned. She betrayed him several times? It was her fault from the start.

He still felt sorry for her, with Rahul gone, they both were helpless. He has to be her with at this time and now on, people must be forgiven.

He went up to her and touched her face with his trembling weak fingers. Tears rolled down his cheeks and fell on her face.

She opened her eyes weakly and looks up to see blue eyed men standing before her, ~{!.~}Rahul?~{!/~}

He hugged her and cried. She cried as well.

~{!.~}Rahul~{!/~} she asked again

~{!.~}Ssssh~{!/~} Ejaz placed his fingers on her lips, ~{!.~}We will find Rahul soon but at this time I need you~{!/~}

Tears once again rolled down her cheeks. No matter how many problems they have faced in their marriage, Ejaz was soft from his heart but then again his mother would take over him. Only if his mother wasn~{!/~}t there for them, they would be living happily by now. She knows that she can~{!/~}t blame him.

Angad sat in the office with Kartik.

~{!.~}Sir, any signs of Ejaz?~{!/~} Angad asked.

~{!.~}No but they have not even involved police in it?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Very different? When I left with the boy, I heard the woman calling after Rahul and perhaps it could be his mother. Anyway she looked very sad, I could sense the pain, sadness in her voice.

Kartik leaned at the back of the chair and the looked at the very different Angad. He has known Angad from the start, when his training began. Although being his coach, and now major, they shared a very different relationship. This was not Angad he knew, Angad was very different. Angad a boy rather known as a famous playboy who the girls drool over him but he never took them seriously. And now he is talking about the woman who he hasn~{!/~}t seen, can sense feelings in her voice?

Angad looked up to see Kartik, looking at him with a question in his eyes. ~{!.~}Are you sure I am talking to Angad khanna?~{!/~} he asked

~{!.~}Excuse me~{!/~} he asked confused...

~{!.~}Are you the Angad Khanna I have known?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Yes!~{!/~}

He smiled. ~{!.~}You have changed my boy?~{!/~}

Now Angad looked at him with a question in his eyes.

~{!.~}Now now, don~{!/~}t look at me like that? Angad I have known you for a long times. You aren~{!/~}t the same boy who used to play with girls, and never took them seriously and now look at you; you are speaking about the woman who you haven~{!/~}t seen?~{!/~}

Angad knew what he was on about. ~{!.~}I have not changed, it~{!/~}s just we are involving a small boy in our mission~{!/~}

~{!.~}Ah, now you have proven me right, you my boy never took the implications of mission seriously and you have always took the risk. And look you are worried. Seriously you are behaving like you have been in love?~{!/~}

Angad immediately blushed, his cheek turned into crimson red. He tried to hide the small but was not successful. Kartik saw this.

~{!.~}Who is she~{!/~} he asked.

~{!.~}Since when I said I am in love and what do you know about love?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Angad I am married! Even f you haven~{!/~}t told me yet I can see you blushing!~{!/~}

Three weeks has passed, still no sign of Rahul and the man. Kripa was normal now. In the last three weeks, Ejaz had shown the video of the incident to the Kripa and the men who has kidnapped Rahul, their son. Every time when Kripa pause the video, the screen would look up to Angad, every time she sees him, she has nothing but pure hatred and revenge towards him. What has the small boy done to him? In the last three weeks, they have been living like proper husband and wife and pillar for each other strength, this was due to the fact Nitya was away for holiday. They both had tried to find Rahul and the kidnapper but no hope.

They both have discussed the plans if even one of them has found the kidnapper they have to play along the game~{!-~}.

Angad parked his car in the parking centre and entered the mall. He walked along with a crown. People were pushing along their way to go their favourite shops. The sales in summer has been started and people were already carrying huge shopping bags in their hands and making their way to their next favourite shop to get their favourite things first. As he was walking, he tripped over something and held on to someone to stop his from falling. He fell hard on the floor making the other person fall on top of him.

He looked up to see, the same face, his Angel with her eyes closed as if she was afraid. His face lit up like a bulb and was continuously blushing. At first he wanted to make sure he was not dreaming, he touched her gentle face.

The girl immediately opened her at the touch. He let out a gasp; it was her, his Angel. Kripa. She was beautiful and stood out crowd. She was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. His heart started beating fast; she was actually on top of him. Her touch was over his body, he did not felt like leaving her or washing his clothes for hundred years. These clothes are lucky for him because she was over him, Angel~{!/~}s touch.

Kripa saw those familiar hazel nut eyes, she knew the man, of course the kidnapper of Rahul, her life, which he had taken away. She blinked several times as if it was the same men she has been looking for several times and yes he was. She can~{!/~}t afford to loose him now because he is the key to Rahul. She felt like killing him, her eyes portrayed the high level pure hatred and revenge to him~{!-~} And now she has to play along the game in order to punish him.

Angad was taken back when he saw the mix of hatred and revenge on her eyes. She~{!/~}s different he told himself, very indeed.

Kripa helped herself to get up and looked down to see the man still starring at her. She narrowed her eyes towards him in an evil way. Angad laughed to him at this sight, she is angel that acts like a child. He stood up.

~{!.~}I~{!-~}.I~{!-~}I~{!/~} he muttered ~{!.~}I am sorry~{!/~} he finally replied.

Kripa looked at him for few minutes; she knew she can~{!/~}t loose him. Her expressions changed into fake smile, ~{!.~}its O.K.~{!/~} she replied

~{!.~}Oh, the beauty speaks~{!/~} his heart beamed. Her voice was sweet as an angelic, only if he could record it. He felt like as if he heard the voice before but then again he brushed the thought aside because he was in front of her.

*****

Coming up: More of Angad and Kripa~{!-~}.

ATTN: Please post your comments and I don~{!/~}t want anyone saying Continue soon or same things again and again. Come on I have heard it again and again. You all know that I have a schedule so don~{!/~}t worry!

I hope you will enjoy the part. I would love to hear your view about the part and any changes I can make or improve it! Do suggest.

FINALLY~{!-~}. The actual game starts from now on.. 😈

Love

Sanya **

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That was great! I really hate Nitya. Poor Kripa. Great part! Your doing great!

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