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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

That was great! I really hate Nitya. Poor Kripa. Great part! Your doing great!

Thanks. Tell me about it, who doesn't hate Nitya? BTW Do u watch KA?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part plz cont soon 👏 and what mission is angad on that he has to kidnap a little boy for???? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy...this is a great story...i luved this part!! i feel sooo srry for kripa 😭 i wonder y nitya hates her soo much?!?!? and i just luv angad...i luv the way he describes kripa his angel...lol...its soo cute!! keep up the great work!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Izzy, i was right about ur twisted head 😆 !!! this story like all ur others is full of twists!! i am referring to the soft corner Ejaz has for kripa and all his beliefs regarding her disloyality towards him!! also, i have to say: bechara angad, jisse angel manna woh such much usse upar angels ke paas bhej degi!!!
All in all, a fantastic part, i love the way u have described Angad's emotions...so keep up the good work n cont. soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww that was sad. but it was good. i luved it. continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hahahaha bechara angad 😆😆only u know waht shes gonna do to him 😈 lol..awesum part like always!!!!cont sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter Three

I am sorry again~{!/~} he repeated.

~{!.~}It~{!/~}s O.k.~{!/~} she replied. With she turned around and disappeared in the crowds leaving Angad blushed after what just happened. ~{!.~}oh no I lost her again~{!/~} he thought! He quickly went around the shops and looked out for her but no sign. He sighed and went out his way. Little did he know the same girl he was looking for was having a close eye at him? After finishing his work, he went out to the parking lot and drove away. He stopped his car in front of the pay machine and he saw her.

Kripa stood purposefully out side the Parking lot pretending to wait for someone. She has followed Angad and came to conclusion that at that time he was looking for her. She immediately text Ejaz and told her about the plan. I~{!/~}ll show how it~{!/~}s like to loose someone you love, she thought bitterly. She was not same Kripa Sharma anymore, life has changed her. Being kind and nice is not always enough she learned during the hard years of life, it~{!/~}s time she speaks up and gets her right and move on with her life. They always say that if you do good and you get that in return and vice versa and what has she got?, torture, pain. It~{!/~}s not always enough!

He quickly put his ticket on the machine and it opened the way to exit. He blinked his eyes once or twice but she was there. He drove slowly like a tortoise not wanting to go past her. He watched her like as if she was precious, every time he would see her it~{!/~}d bring twinkle on his eyes, a sheer of excitement and happiness in him. He~{!/~}d forget that he is a soldier. A sudden sweet smile across his lips as an idea struck to him. He stopped the car in front of her and rolled the windows.

Kripa smiled secretly however put a surprise look on his face, ~{!.~}Aop?~{!/~}

He smiled, ~{!.~}Are you O.K, Do you want any lift?~{!/~} he asked politely.

Kripa smiled, ~{!.~}No I am O.K,~{!/~} she replied.

~{!.~}Are you waiting for someone?~{!/~} he asked

~{!.~}erm yeah~{!/~} she replied. Suddenly her cell rang; she gave a quick smile to him before she answered her phone call. Angad watched her chat with someone, he was awed, he kept looking at her wide a smile on his face. After few minutes, she put a disappointment look on her face but showed that she was O.K.

~{!.~}I think even someone want you to accept the lift!~{!/~}

~{!.~}No it~{!/~}s O.K, I~{!/~}ll manage~{!/~}

~{!.~}I insist!~{!/~}

Kripa smiled. Angad smiled and got out of from his passenger making Kripa as what he was doing? He opened the door for her and she took her seat. ~{!.~}Fool!~{!/~} she thought. Angad started his car with a big smile on his face and drove away.

~{!.~}So where do you live?~{!/~}

I can~{!/~}t let him know that I live in the same house! She thought. ~{!.~} I am staying at my friends~{!/~} she lied

~{!.~}Lead me where to go~{!/~}

Kripa directed him where to go while he drives like a proper gentle men, they weren~{!/~}t even 10 miles close to the house. Kripa was making up all the directions, she lead him to the roads he knew, she even let him drove past her house. Whilst they were driving something lead Angad to take a peep at the house, to his surprise it was normal, there was no police car or anything. Kripa watched him carefully when they drove past the house. Suddenly the car came to halt. Angad got out of the car and examined the problem. The tires were punctured as some one has thrown the nails on the road. Kripa smiled secretly. Angad was happy somewhere that he get to spend time with her.

~{!.~}I am sorry the tires are punctured, were you in a hurry?~{!/~} he asked concerned.

~{!.~} No, Besides there is a hotel near bye?~{!/~}

~{!.~}That~{!/~}s good; but how we get there?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Walk?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Walk!~{!/~} he asked surprised

Kripa nodded like a child. Angad~{!/~}s heart melted at the sight of this.

They both walked along the side of the road side by side.

~{!.~}Isn~{!/~}t it weird we have been together for twenty minutes we don~{!/~}t each other names~{!/~} Angad lied. Even though he still knew her name he wanted to hear from her mouth. He took out his hands for her, ~{!.~}Angad, Angad khanna~{!/~}

Kripa looked at him for few seconds but hesitated at first. ~{!.~}Kripa~{!/~} she shook her hands with him. Angad felt himself jumping up and down at the touch her hand. Whilst Kripa was confused to see Angad so happy, she started wondering may be he was going to kidnap or capture her? The thoughts of this made her nervous. I have to be strong, at least for Rahul, she thought.

Kripa brushed the hair aside as it was disturbing her. ~{!.~}So what do you do?~{!/~} he asked.

~{!.~}I punish criminals!~{!/~} Kripa replied as confident, straight from her heart, looking straight at him. Angad felt some doubt about her answer that surprised him. ~{!.~}What about you?~{!/~}

Angad can~{!/~}t let out his identity, he felt guilty for not telling her straight but there was a truth in it. ~{!.~}same job as you!~{!/~}

~{!.~}Are you trying to say you also punish criminals?~{!/~} she asked with a sarcasm dripping from her voice.

~{!.~}Yes, any doubt~{!/~} he replied. Kripa let out a bitter laugh that again surprised Angad.

~{!.~}How do you know that you are punishing criminals, how do you know they are criminals?~{!/~} she asked

~{!.~}Well, we look at their previous records~{!/~} he replied suddenly concerned why she is asking for that.

~{!.~}You got that wrong mister~{!/~} she mumbled. Angad heard and now was full aware she was trying to get on something.

~{!.~}What about you, you also punish criminals?~{!/~} he asked

~{!.~}I don~{!/~}t let my way of working in lime light~{!/~}

~{!.~}I won~{!/~}t give it to public!~{!/~}

~{!.~}You never know, beside why should I tell you, who are you to me?~{!/~}

Yeah who I am to you, he thought sadly. ~{!.~}You asked me!~{!/~} he replied

~{!.~}Well it~{!/~}s not my fault~{!/~}

~{!.~}You haven~{!/~}t told me yet what you do really and who do you work for?~{!/~}

~{!.~}Do I look like that I work for criminals!~{!/~} She replied rudely

~{!.~}I didn~{!/~}t meant it that way~{!/~}

Then what did you meant Mr.Khanna?~{!/~} Angad was amused by her behaviour and he really appreciated her confident. He could see that most of the woman isn~{!/~}t that independent as her. He loved every bit of it.

~{!.~}It~{!/~}s not important!~{!/~}

They reached the hotel and were surprised to see it was under construction. He looked at Kripa who looked glad. Angad was confused.

~{!.~}You said that you know the hotel, I am sure you had another plans~{!/~} he replied with a grin on his face.

~{!.~}Well how would I know it was supposed to be under construction~{!/~} she snapped at him rudely, ~{!.~}Besides I haven~{!/~}t been here for long and don~{!/~}t expect apology from me, understood~{!/~} she pointed the finger at him.

He smiled and looked at her with warmth eyes, he leaned in closer, and ~{!.~}I don~{!/~}t expect anything that especially from you?~{!/~} he walked away leaving Kripa under his affect. Kripa shook out her thoughts.

If Angad wanted, he could make Kripa his now but he did not want that. He wanted her to accept him in her own times whether it~{!/~}ll take a year or a life time. He~{!/~}ll always wait for her because she was worth it. She was his.

O.K Guys I have typed the part here. More fun scenes to come. Please do comment. Do you think this part is actually short according to what we~{!/~}d had about ~{!.~}Deal or No Deal~{!/~} poll! Do tell me.

Love

Sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that part was perect not too short not too long 😛 .....and awesum part!!!!!i can see kripa falling for angad 😆 😆 😆 cont soon
himani 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy...i like this story!! its great...just like all ur other stories...i cant wait to read the next part. y do i have the feeling that kripa doesnt know about the true colours of ejaz? (y else would soldiers want him??😕)

Edited by baby_princess - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon 👏 👏

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