Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Lost Sharon and Swayam..what could have been better!and Swayam playing the guitar and hallucinating about sharon!!so adorable...now waiting eagerly for the next update!😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

himaniii🤗 Sweetest yaar, so beautifully you have written it. Awwieee swayam the sweet majnu loving his sharon full on. The song and the vm is def lovely, yaar himani thoda bada kardo na yaar the update., I loved my bestie, YOU ARE THE BEST. thanks re

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Sameera Dhanraj

@coolsameera

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

AWESUME UPDATE SWARON R DAM CVE IN UR SS . . .😛SWAYAM IS SUCH A CUTIE PIE😳

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Lol, that was a really sweet update to see both Sharon and Swayam lost in each other's thoughts and Swayam singing Pehla Nasha was perfect !!!

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Beautiful

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

awsum update himu!!!
swaron feelinh after first kiss is beatifully written!!!
loved the promotion in relationship😳 & eagerly waiting for swaron in village!!!
vm is nice, loved all the pictures!!! remind me of our beautiful swaron , which r missing in the show right now!!!
thanks for pm!!!

sorry for being late very busy with college works

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

sab se pehle sry late hone k liye...:(
naya update kya badhiya likha he & swayam ka feeling & sharon ka apne se bat karna & accept kar lena dat wo bhi swayam se pyar karti he & den expression all mind blowing & ye jo bhilikha wo sab jese ek picture k jese imagine kar sku itna clear he.. so thank u very much for creating suchh a beautiful update & PM me..😃

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: marauder
<font color="#003333">This was serene. This update has a picturesque quality to it. Loved how you have described the state of heart and mind of both Swayam and Sharon. The guitar, the sleepless night, the dream, the smile, the confusion. This update has almost everything. One of the most the most satisfying an pleasing update I have read. Waiting for the next update.</font>

thanks a lot dear...i luv to read every comment of urs...i guess i hv achieved wat i was trying to convey...thanks again.

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Beautiful update Himani.
The emotions that came rushing in both Swayam and Sharon beautifully written. The feeling of first love and the first kiss is sure dreamy and not easy to brush off. The guitar part with Swayam closing his eyes and then thinking of Sharon was nice. Looking forward to the next update.

yeah true dear the feeling of first love and first kiss is been always remain so pure and devine...m sure all of us who has been in love..still lose themselves in that magical moment...thanks for apriciation dear.

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: sreya19roy
Finally u updated himu...uff tere update k intezaar mein hum sab buddhe hi ho jayenge 😳

Hayee kya update tha...SwaRon lost in each others thoughts n their 1st kiss 😳

I loved how u have described the whole atmosphere...n the way u have penned down their emotions just adds to the beauty of the whole situation 😊

I loved that guitar part n the way u connected the lyrics with her emotions was superb 😊

I'm desperately waiting for the next update, don't take much time posting it...its a request plzzz *puppy face*

hey sondesh sry yaar for.being late everytime but kya karu main bht alsi hu na...thanks for luv n support...i hope sharon ka pehla nasha connection pasand aya hoga!!!
thanks again dear.