Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated - Page 20

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
Their emotions were beautifully described
Loved it
Update it soon

thank u sadiya...hope i lived up ur e pectations!!!

Originally posted by: Swayamonly

It's awesome Himu...:* you portrayed both Swayam n Sharon's emotions very well...^_^

thank you poonam...stay tune dear!!

Originally posted by: Nirju99

awesm update

thanks dear...btw wats ur name??

Originally posted by: kaba3003

beautiful one

thank you dear...

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

amazing both lost!

hahaha...yeah both lost strange naaa!!!
thank you dear...

Originally posted by: nature2

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thanks neeraj...
always luv ur different style...!!!

Originally posted by: Nehal92

I loved the way u described there feelings , ah the music the sleepless nights.. well written.. :))

thanks a lot nehal...
i guess nothing is better than music in sleepless nights...

Originally posted by: shaani2209

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">LOVELY update himi...</font>

</div><div><font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">loved the way you got out the feelings of sawron in your writing.</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">beautiful way to describe what they both were going through, loved the music and sleepless night that you wrote about..</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">thanks for the pm..</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">waiting for the next update...update soon...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">PS: this is not an OS anymore..you should say it to be a SS...</font>

thank you roshni...m glad u liked it...i so wanted to describe sharons feelings with pehla nasha...n got a chance in this os...oops!! i mean ss..as u said...thanks for ur luv n support

Originally posted by: sw1234

It was very good.swayam majnu lost in sharon's thought is not new but sharon think about swayam was interesting.your tune was awesome.well done

m haapy u liked it ..thank you...:-)

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

<font color="#cc00ff">Awesome update himani !!</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">beautifully written🤗</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">the effect of first kiss on both sharon and swayam has been fantastically described.😃</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">loved the guitar part of swayam .</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">will be waiting for the next part , update soon...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">thanks for the pm.</font>

thanks tanu...glad u liked it...will be updating soon!!!