Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

I loved the way u described there feelings , ah the music the sleepless nights.. well written.. :))

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

LOVELY update himi...

loved the way you got out the feelings of sawron in your writing.

beautiful way to describe what they both were going through, loved the music and sleepless night that you wrote about..

thanks for the pm..

waiting for the next update...update soon...

PS: this is not an OS anymore..you should say it to be a SS...

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

It was very good.swayam majnu lost in sharon's thought is not new but sharon think about swayam was interesting.your tune was awesome.well done

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Awesome update himani !!

beautifully written 🤗

the effect of first kiss on both sharon and swayam has been fantastically described.😃

loved the guitar part of swayam .

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

I recieved the pm just few mins back!! 😡
chl never mind wapas se chodh diya tjhe himani! 😃

cuming to the update!
himani awesome! 👏
swaron scenes ko kya depth se explain kiya hai..i lovedd it! 😳
your writing is getting awesome by each update my friend! ⭐️
and specially this update..! just took my heart away!
swayam playing the guitar...
sharon feeling that tune and interlinking her feelings to it! 😊

and your hindi mei request!
haha..i always say..tera sense of humour amazingg hai! 😆

waiting for the next one!
update soon! 😊

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Awesome update Himi

Loved the way you described their feelings after the accidental kiss.

Swayam hallucinating about Sharon is known, but Sharon ke dimaag bhi pehela nasha...now thats nice.😳

Waiting for next update

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

good one..himani di!

loved the way you portrayed the emotional dilemma of both sharon and swayam. i liked the fact that you kept in mind the importance of pehla nasha in both of their lives in a way or another..in totality it was an ardent update.looking forward to the next update..!

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@silver6strings

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Awesome update...

update soon...

thanks for the pm...

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

HOW DARE U...

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I MEAN ITNA CHOTA UPDATE...😉

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

hello my behna,bhavnao ko acche se samaj gayi aur like button bhi hit kar diyaaa...loved this update...hayeee..my cuchie-muchie swayam...love yaa pyari behna;)