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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

i am sure you would continue this... i was melted the moment he held her back seeing the amount of trust in her eyes..do update the next chapter soon...😃..& thanks a tonne for the pm darling...🤗

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Wowieee.. We are in for a double treat... *Does Salman Khan step* 😆 Im so looking forward to this.. 😎

Read Rish's one... Oh wow.. That was amazingly creative.. Bus mein bhi itna kuch ho sakta hai.. 😆 I loved how Arnav kept worrying about her.. I just wanna say "Mohabbat door jaane na de" Off to read Gayatri's.. 😎

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Two awesme Os's 👏
Hats off to the 2 fabulous writters👏
The os's were sooo beautiful

Thnx for the PM🤗

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

oho hope 4 ur great future updates

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Gayatri, that was very cleverly written but I wish you didn't stop where you did.

The first signs of change was showing in Arnav and you ended it :(

But it was a wonderful piece!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Read "Flying Finally" It was just wonderful.. Me loves it.. Mr Arnav singh Raizada accepted defeat for love.. Well, now thats something..😳

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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Huh ? Do I see an update ? ;D *Feels dizzy for a moment * 😳 AH ! Sorry , 2 updates 😆 *Regains consciousness* 😃

Telepathic connection ? Indeed ! but what if I suppose you two planned through the CC chat ? 🤣 *Throws her silly assumptions in the nearby trash bin because she fears the two exasperated souls might turn up at her home in the mid of the night and attempt to slain her 🤣 * 🤔 Zyada ho gaya ? 😆 K, I ESH-TOP with this nonsense 😊

@ The chauffeur of 'Route Number 753' -That was very creative of you to capture a beautiful tale witnessed in your hypothetical drive and weave it into an alluring story 👏 though I would still object the physical collisions were little than less to feed a hungry gutter-mind 😆 but inspite of that ; all that aroused gladness was the mere eccentric path of story telling which makes you travel through space and time with the lightning speed while you still manage to keep up with your senses. 🤗

I would give a silent salute to the writer who knows very well to calm the expecting furore and planned a smooth ending =)

@The Pilot of some 'XXX' Airplane- Are you on vocabulary enhancing spree ? 😆 It still forms a clear image of your First OS I read and this one manages to smudge it forming a plain-sharp figure of what exactly Gadhu is ❤️ 😳 .There were some of the dry humor punches I loved through out the read 😃 , the story telling is very catchy and to be frank its enthralling in some of the parts that the reader can almost feel lost amidst the mist you create 👏

'Jai Mata Di ' 🤣

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

res for risha :)

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Wow! This was so beautiful Rish! Hats off!

Loved the concept.

Route no. 753 is an awesome title! 😆

Lo0ved the beginning. All the things that you wrote about Delhi are so true. Though Delhi is not safe but still I love Delhi.

Arnav in a bus gave me a shock in the beginning but when I read the explanation I was pretty much convinced. And girls drooled over him in the bus too? Bechara! 😆

Awww he protected khushi. So sweet! Loved the way he tried to ignore her but still gave his full attention to her. And he joined her in the rain? Unbelievable!

Khushi Kumari Gupta is seriously one crazy girl! I mean she starts blabbering anywhere & everywhere. Her chilly powder threat was really funny. And the biggest shock was that they got married. Seriously? Cute I'd say.

They celebrated their anniversary in the bus 😆 I love TMLS's title track and it was perfect for their love story!

Brilliant work Rish! 🤗

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

res for Ri :)

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OMG! I reread it & guess what I enjoyed it much more than the first time.

Awesome OS Ri!

Khushi is so cute..adorable would be the right word. I felt like hugging her when she was chanting prayers. Awww! She's really scared. But the way you portrayed her emotions was fabulous. The way she clutched the seats & kept her eyes shut..I can totally imagine khushi like that. Perfect!

Arnav! Sigh! Can't he take a break from his uptight schedule & enjoy life? I loved the part when the driver thought that he's forgiven but alas! Mr.ASR remembers everything 😆 And Whoa! Was that ASR? He tried to pull a prank on khushi? Unbelievable! But the prank was definitely funny. I'm still laughing. Gangajal? What The! That is why you were asking about gangajal that day, now I get it. But the last lines were perfect! Finally the great ASR failed!

I can't ask you to continue but I really wanted to know what happened to Varun, and why was he mentioned in the story *looks around for Rish & runs away* 😆

Off to read Risha's OS!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago