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@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

I missed this

HOW IN THE WORLD DID I MISS THIS ?!

I'm a duffer dammit !

Anyway ! Back to the topic -

Gayathri !! 🤗 Remember me na ? Ke bhool gayi ?

Khair jo bhi ho, I'm sure you know I luaave ur OSs

And as far as I know, I've read ALL of them 😎

And Risha ! I'm sure you don't know me ! 😆

But I've read many of your works as well !

Love them ! And so, I can conclude,

THIS IS GOING TO BE A DHAMAKA !!

Already rocking I see 😉

Rish, Amazing OS ! LOVED it !

That was soo KKG ! Bilkul pagal !

And the end, the anniversary..awesome !

Gayu, Fantastic OS !

See, this is why I hate you.

Aise gande tarah se end karti ho !

You'll kill me of curiosity one day !

But LOVED it !! It was amazing !

And soo damn cute !

Lovely !!

^^ Was to try and cover my goof-up (of not visiting this earlier somehow😡) To please tell me I was successful ! 😆

And a welcome for you two again !

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

First of all i want to appreciate you both for your this new venture.
You are one hell of a writer. The os was superb. Never imagined arnav to travel in a bus. And never ever imagined a marriage anniversary to be celebrated like they did.
Wish teri meri love story make a story with this concept.
Will wait for the next os.

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Route number 753

I loved how the whole story actually took place in a bus!!!😳 It's so different and unique!!! And the bumps that usually occur in public transports remind me of childhood memories, esp in the school bus😆 Aww, Khushi slept on Arnav's shoulder and the protective side of Arnav emerged, not wanting to leave her alone!!!😳 The part when Khushi wakes up and her series of "What, who, where" was hilarious🤣 And the best, they got married!!! Beautiful OS, Richa!!!

Flying, Finally

Gayu, that was an amazing OS!!! Khushi getting scared of travelling in the plane actually reminded me of Kajol in the movie Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha!!! And Arnav told her it was Gangajal🤣 Awesome!!! So, the mighty ASR finally melts down!!! Aww!!!😳

I loved it to bits 😃

Great OSs girls!!! Thumbs up!!!

Edited by tash10 - 13 years ago

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

yay, 2 awesome, lovely os's in 1 day

u guys rock

really enjoy reading ur work

looking forward to more

take care dears'

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

The ending looked like you left us on a cliffhanger DAMMIT but then this is the speciality of os.
Arnav playing prank on khushi- unique.
Dheeraj's thinking that arnav is talking to himself and then his confession of keeping the AC on and later realising that arnav was talking on his bluetooth was the part which cracked me up totally.

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

👏👏thanks.loved it...well done...👏👏

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Risha and Gayathri,

First of all thanks for a beautiful collection of OS's.The idea is superb.

Risha,

Sweet and cute update...Loved the way Arnav interacted with khushi...but the story made me nostalgic.It made me remember how I used to rush in the morning to reach my university during my college days from East of Kailash.

Gayathri,

Wonderful update.Loved the way Arnav is having fun compared to his real nature.I would really like the continuation of that Os because somehow or the other I felt you have stopped midway.Would you please continue with the story .But, the discretion of the author remains supreme as you would have visualised such an end for the story

Thanks once again and a big thanks for the PM

Edited by bhadraprasad - 13 years ago

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Gayatri seriously gangajal
That was real fun great work loved the OS
Rushing off to read risha's one now

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

For RISHA's Os : Awww dis sooo cute !!! Just awesome !! Dey came bak to route 753 for dier honeymoon *sigh* !!
After reading dis feel like der should be an SS on it bt I guess some stories are better kept short...sweet n simple is nice :)

For GAYATRI's Os - nice !! Loved the prank he played on her !! :P

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Risha that sleeping thing reminded me of my bus journey and all the sleeping uncles n aunties
Coming to the update it was real cute I esp loved the one year after thigy and then that song
Totally amazing
Great work guys just amazing