SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60.

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Oke guys..i hav cum up with another one..
hope you all like it!

Swayam-hey beautiful!

wanna go on a long drive?

Can I make coffee for you my princess?

Oke lets go shopping!

This was the atmosphere of shekhawat mansion since morning...And it's been exactly a day after their marriage and Sharon was not talking to him! Swayam was trying hard to make her speak!

They were getting ready for the party which Sharon's parents have thrown for them!

Sharon was wearing black backless saari...and swayam was wearing a black suit! Hotness was incomparable! It looked as if they were on a oil-burning stove...if you add even a half-smile..it would kill many people!!

But swayam was thinking how to make Sharon speak!
He scratched his head like a kid and then'BANGG!!

He smirked at his idea and then gathered some courage'and spoke'"Sharon...Err'can you fix this? "
Pointing towards the tie! He made an innocent look! And it worked..!

It was strange..how a no-longer-eligible-bachelor of the country..making trillion pounds a month was getting panicky on how to make her princess speak??

But still'he succeeded in this plan of action too!

Sharon looked from the corner of her eye and marched towards him! She came and stood before him with a perfect distance of 5 meters' and advanced her hands towards him...
swayam smiled and locked his hands around her waist and pulled her closer!

Sharon was clueless'She struggled but swayam was sturdy enough!
Swayam'""now you have to speak" and smiled raising his left cheek up'with a glint in his eye'and winked with his right eye!
Basically it was a cause of death of many girls who were after him!

Sharon looked at him and blushed...Swayam flashed a victorious smile!

Sharon touched his shirt with both the hands and her finger nails were slowly moving onto the top of his shirt'Not breaking the gaze...She pierced her nails on his shirt and swayam was bowled over'Both were staring each other in the eye...His chest got some taste of her perfect nails'Swayam was awestruck by the beauty of her beautiful eyes! Slowly her hands reached to the top'She closed his eyes...Came near him'Swayam felt her touch on him'Her fragrance was making him go mad and he craved..Wanting for more!

After two minutes of no activity he opened his eyes and he was blank'

there was no Sharon!

He rubbed his eyes...and his mouth wide open...he became all sad!! All his expectations and desires got melted away!
Suddenly his eyes saw something'A piece of paper...

He grabbed it and it read'"Baby if you hadn't slept like a horse on our first night maybe I would have fixed something else too!!"

swayam sighed'"sharonnn!" :'( :'(

INDEX--

Part 1--page 1
Part 2--page 7
Part 3--page 14
Part 4--page 18
from--surbhi and sonal!

Past Works--

SwaRon OS--Just You And Me
SwaRon OS--Whole Life In A Moment
SwaRon OS--Cupboards

nyc👏👏

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Okay guys!
firstly a HUGE thank you to everybody for liking and commenting on my OS..🤗
now i am making it an SS...👍🏼
i am very bad at these intro speeches..so here u go! 😃

2nd part!

RECAP---
Suddenly his eyes saw something'A piece of paper...

He grabbed it and it read'"Baby if you hadn't slept like a horse on our first night maybe I would have fixed something else too!!"

are a tough competition to it!!

dun forget to leave ur precious likes and comments! 😳

Tum toh thehre pardesiii'😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

poor swayam👏

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Recap--
but he decided to keep his thoughts to himself and forcefully increased the speed of his car!
He just wanted to reach the venue as faster as he could!!
-End-

They reached the venue'the place was decorated with lily's and orchids..! the ambience was very appealing and the whiff travelling around the whole place was a perfect add to the whole thing!
Swayam stopped the car in front of the way in..they both were greeted by the attendant he took the car keys and went to park it in the backyard! Swayam turned around and saw Sharon going alone inside'he smartily walked fast to keep her pace..as they were the reason behind this celebration..everybody's retina were fixed on the beautiful couple..who were now seeming to be on a One on One with each other..! swayam and Sharon knew that they won't let their fight be public..so they smiled.. nah not towards each other! Towards the guests and relatives..!

Sharon My smile... am I acting over the top? Or is it balanced?
Swayam Your smile luks so perfect! But it looks beautiful when it comes from the heart! I know you are faking it!
Sharon He is so perfect at doing all this acting! I soo hate him at this moment! He is not even bothered about my fury and rage and annoyance and wildness and temptation and'and'ahh!!

Kria'and you know what..you were right from the start! Mom loves you more than me!
Sharon came closer and hugged her tight!!
Both were on the verge of crying but someone interrupted the family scene..
They both jerked and looked at the person with weird looks..accompanied with swayam!

Sharon-kria-swayam'"Oh no!"

oh no nyc part👏

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

I am sorry i got so late..! 😕
But Tomorrow i will update...for sure! 😃

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Guys Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and likes.
Its only because of your encouragement that pushes me to write and express here on the forum.
This time i am really sorry but i won't be able to reply to each one of you individually but i have read every comment and it makes me happy that you guys loved the update.
For those who didn't receive pm..i am really really sorry..i wouldn't repeat it!

from--
Surbhi And Sonal

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Recap---
Her beautiful brownish hair which craved for his touch…her neck which was all set to surrender herself to him…
then his eyes got lowered to her waist…which seemed so delicate..just like a mermaid..
who had also given up!
-END-

Swayam forcefully came out of her awe and stepped ahead.
He kept his hand on her shoulders but to his surprise and shock Sharon literally shrieked out!
Swayam bounced back and shouted—"are you crazy??"
Sharon *still in shock and now angry so she shouted back*--"how dare you?? You are walking like a ghost in my room and you say I am crazyy???"
Swayam—"Ohh..ghost?? really? And what about you! You shrieked so loudly!! For once I thought I have touched a livewire!!"
Sharon's anger knew no bounds after hearing to this..she came closer to him and shouted on his mouth—"Then I wish you would have touched me yesterday night!!!"
Swayam*gets naughty*—"So the feeling is mutual…i always knew it!"
Sharon—"Don't try to change the topic!! You slept on our first night!! And you expect some mutual stuff here?? Haha swayam shekhawat you are Dumb!!"
Swayam—"Dumb?? You don't even know the truth okay!! So stop saying me words!!"
Sharon—"truth? Ohh...
so the truth must be..umm..let me guess..
oh yes…you wanted to give me a surprise right? by sleeping the whole night..awww…soo sweet!!!!"
Swayam—"Look! Nilesh and Vicky mixed 5 sleeping pills in my milk!!
Cause of which I slept!!! Got itt???"

Sharon*straight face*
*Nilesh and Vicky you guys suck!! And you are gonna be dead soon!!
just wait and watch..!!*

Swayam—"say something for godsake!"
Sharon—"You won't accept your fault right? But atleast stop making stories! It sounds kiddish!"
Swayam—"You don't believe me..don't you..? fine let me call them…then you will see!"

Sharon *I believe you but I am enjoying this..!!*

Swayam dials nilesh's number and puts it on speaker…
Nilesh—"haan swayam bol…"
Swayam—"haan nil! sun Sharon ko bta ki tune kal sleeping pills milaayi thi mere milk mei…"
Nilesh—"hain? Kya bol raha hai tu? Pills? Abe kuch bhi..!"
Swayam—"dekh zyada naatak mat kar tu! Sach sach bta sab!"
Nilesh—"Arre!!
Sharon yeh meri toh sun nahi raha..par mai sach bol raha hu..maine koi pills nhi milaayi...vicky ki kasam!"
Swayam—"Saale tu pita!!"
Sharon—"Thanks nil..bye!"
And cuts the phone..!

Nilesh—"Bye"
Hahahhaha swayam tu toh gyaa!!
He runs to find Vicky in order to tell him the awesome outcome of the awesome blunder done by them—the nicky bro's..!

Sharon crosses her hands across his chest and looks at swayam…making an stern expression!
*Damn you nilesh!! You spoiled my game!!
Game status---
Make out session delayed by few minutes*

Swayam*most cutest expression*—"I am sorry Sharon...but I swear..they did mix those pills!"

Sharon was floating in sea of love by now so she had to end this..!!
Finally she said while smiling…
"Okay okay..now stop it..i trust you and I knew that you were not lying..its just…you know..i was enjoying.."
And she made a cute face.

Swayam*his mouth flung open*—"enjoying?? Gosh Sharon!!"
And swayam got a bit upset! He folded his arms and stood there facing towards the window…
Sharon—"I am sorry swayam…please don't be upset…look it's all fine now…everything is cool"
Swayam—"Cool? You can't imagne I was feeling that guilty about yesterday and you are busy playing games here?? Huh!"
Sharon—"What guilty? You didn't even touch me…!"
And Sharon laughed!

It also made swayam smile a bit..
Swayam—"Uff! you are impossiblee!!"
Sharon came closer to swayam and whispered in his ears—"but only you can make it possible…"
Sharon said this and turned her back towards swayam…and reacted as if nothing happened…

Swayam *This is gonna be my 1001 reason to love her.*

He went closer…Sharon got aware of his presence and tried to hide her level of anxiety…

Sharon in order to hide her blush pushed swayam aside and ran a few steps ahead…took support of the bed…and gasped a little bit..
Swayam smiled cutely at her antics…and followed her to the bed..
He went and stood right behind her..
Swayam tossed her hair aside and slowly placed them towards the right shoulder..
He went down and kissed her back..! Sharon's breath was hard to find…she tightened her grip on the bed..to gain some sense..but she was losing it…totally!!
swayam has already lost it…he held her shoulders tightly and his hands were on the sleeves of her blouse..he removed them from her shoulder and started planting kissed there…
Sharon struggled for breath..her eyes were closed and they demanded more..!
she quickly twirled and hugged him hard…
she directly hitted into his chest and her hands travelled on his back..
he strengthened his grip which made Sharon go mad again…
his hands on her naked back..with just a strip left!
Then they both after few mins gained some sense and slowly broke apart..sharon's hands still on his chest..and swayam was holding her from her bare waist..!
Sharon looked around and got a bit embarrassed from the situation…they were at a party..hosted for them only!
swayam understood and smiled…he loosened his grip on her waist..
Sharon without looking into his eyes…preventing herself for falling in the trap again…got out of the grip..and turned around..
she was about to go when a pair of robust hands touched her hands and got a hold on them!
she stopped in her tracks..helpless..!!
then he said in the most huskiest voice ever—"aur paas"
how on earth she could ignore that…she lowered her head sideways and took a step back..
"aur paas"
step back.
"aur paas"
step back…
The distance was sealed now..
her back was now again facing him..
this time swayam's breath was being unkind to Sharon…! It was shamelessly challenging her patience..!

Sharon forgot everything and turned around…
she directly looked into his eye..and his eyes were captured!
she directioned her hands and they took the command..! they slowly and slowly travelled inside his jacket..letting it drop on the floor..!
she started unbuttoning his shirt…
he was in her gaze…fully and completely!

They both were in their own world now..
suddenly a voice came
"Kya kar sakte ho tum mere liye?"
Swayam looked puzzled at Sharon…
Sharon—"yes..you heard it right..kya kar skte ho tum mere liye swayam?"
Swayam—"what..? come on Sharon..! you know everything about me..! I can do anything for you..!"
Sharon—"Soch lo mr. shekhawat"
Swayam—"Jiss faisle par sochna pade wo faisla hi kya!"

Sharon gave him an impressed look…
"Okay then…Get ready for the three tasks!!!"
Swayam—"3 tasks??"
Sharon—"Yeahh..!!"
Swayam—"kindly explain..?"
Sharon—"Okay here you go…"

Precap--

The three tasks!!!

Hope you all liked the update 😊
This time we will surely reply to each one of you..!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Res for Suku
*edited*

SUR🤗 That too a very sweet one😳 kudos to you and sonal yaar, mast kaam kiya hai, well meri dosth hai to sab kuch bindass hote hai😃 Sur and Sonal the way sharon pulled swayams leg was just superb and outright funny. I could imagine them fighting and swayam cute sa face and sharon ki masti😆 poor swayam first of all he is guilty that he slept off on their first nite and upar se sharon pulling his leg. Ye nil aur vicky be na 5 pills 😲 agar swayam ko kuch hua to😡😆 but dono masti karo hai he.

Sur and Sonal you both have done a wonderful job. Everything is subtle but with giving us readers a lot to imagine😳 I was totally engrossed in it yaar and when it came to an end i was totally having a goofy grin on my face. YOU ARE JUST AWESOME MY DEAR FRNDS. I am totally fida on your writing.⭐️

Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago

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Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

RES😃

UNRES

Surbhi 🤗

Another mind-blowing update. Firstly I thought that Sharon might just stretch the anger in every way possible, but the moment I read Then I wish you would have touched me yesterday night I had this stupid sheepish smile on my face. They both can't just get enough of each other, Awww☺️

And she had to believe Swayam, firstly because she was already in pool of love as you said, and secondly she knows Nilesh and Vicky are capable of mixing sleeping pills in the milk🤣 Its gonna be the doomsday for both very soon. Sharon and Swayam dono nahi chodenge inko😆

This part---> He runs to find Vicky in order to tell him the awesome outcome of the awesome blunder done by them—the nicky bro's..!

I could imagine Nil running to Vicky🤣

And then the SwaRon part, so romantic Surbhi, really. I had a blush on my face reading it. Awesome😳

I wanna read the next update soon!! Kya hai woh 3 task? Me excited already😃

Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago

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Madhura

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

I need to catch a lot basically.

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

RES 😃

unres...

Hey girls...

Kill me now...wat was that...AWESOME update...u left swaron romance halfway...never mind..loved loved loved it...funny,romantic ahaa...it was such a pleasant read...l loved it...poor swayaM...nicky guys r going to it get back...WOW swaron romance was magical...teasing each other...awww...so cute...my fav line...

*Damn you nilesh!! You spoiled my game!!
Game status---
Make out session delayed by few minutes*😆😆😆

Swayam *This is gonna be my 1001 reason to love her.*majnu boyyy😳

ROFL...hehe...loved seeing them loosing control...awesome...umm..three tasks...can't wait reallyy...plz update soon dear...

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago