SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60. - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
update it fast !!!!!!!😊 it ws jst awesum
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvsd3

res!!
**unres**
yeppieee...me first!!!

dost kya update tha...too much...three much...magarmuch yaar!!!
seriously yaar swarons feelings beautifully written...
swayums bond with sharons mother is just perfect...
nd the way kriya teased him ...gosh i remember the way me n my sis use to tease our gju!!!...
update soon dear so that we can know who is the person...i guess its rey!!!
luvd it dear update soon!!



Thank you soo much dostt!! 🤗
hahaha magarmuch??!! tera sense of humour awesome hi rahegaa!! 😆
just wait and watch wat happens! 😉
this tym i vil update soon! 😊


[quote= Nehal92]this is not fair... ek toh itn alte update karti ho..upar se itna chota...
but hamesha ki tarah perfect update 👍🏼[/quote]

Thank you nehal and sorry yaar!
par iss baar tujhe shikayat ka mauka nhi dungi..i vil update real soon this tym aur bada bhi update krungi! 👍🏼


[quote= dips098]hey surbhi...i was waiting for this post ...& i just loved it ...Awesome post ...i like the naughtiness in your writing...i loved the way swayam is trying to mend his mistake ... he is so cute ... my fav lines from this post ...😊

"Swayam She is super angry at me...swayam you are gone! But if I am not wrong..for just few seconds she stared at me..and that too in a pretty weird way..umm..dunno! maybe she is'she is missing me!!!
oh yeah baby..you are bloody missing me!!
"😎

why these two are so adorable ...WOW ... Swaron ke fingers bhi ek dusre ke saath romance karte he ...i loved the part she felt that his fingers proposed to hers ...loved the swayam-sharon-kriya convo ...jijaji wala part ...cute ...😃..& who is this new person ...i guess its Rey ...can't wait for next part... october se pehle update kar dena plz 😆
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Thank you so so much deeps di for this pretty long comment!! 😃
i am glad that you loved those lines...
and swaron toh har cheez mei romantic ho jaate hai..😳
haha i vil update soon this tym!! 😃


[quote=neetha]res
unres

kitna chotu tha surbhi😭..me waitin fr swaron romance.😳.jaldi jaldi update kar..but i love swayam n sharon ke mind voice,😆,they are beautiful..😳.aur woh naya entry rey hoga..😕.but mujhe jaldi se swaron romance de.☺️.jaldii😎[/quote]

Hahaha neethaa controll!!! 😆
dungi dungi swaron ka romance jald hi! 😳
thanx for the comment friend!! 🤗


[quote=coolsameera]AWWW SUCH A CUTE UPDATE. . LOVED IT KRIYAM ND KRISHA CONVO WAS UBER CUTE. . ND I GUESS TAT PERSON IS REY . . UPDATE SOON . . . THANX FR D PM [/quote]
Thank you for the comment!!
keep guessing! 😉


[quote=rutu]RES
Unres
Surbhi🤗
You know you have got a style of writing which has naughtiness bhar-bharke. And that is a treat to watch. Kria teasing Swayam😆
But I loved how inspite of being angry on Swayam, Sharon just couldn't stop thinking about him.😳
And Swayam ke saath kon tha?😳

PS: I really don't know when I will comment on next parts. I am gonna be away from IF for almost three weeks. So the comment will be super late😕

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Thank youuu rutu!! 🤗
i am so happy that you commented here! 😃
thanks a lot my friendd!! 😊

its okayy..take your tym and comment! 😎
i vil surely count you in!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...Luved SwaRon part...n even the bonding between sharon's mom n swayam...kria n swayams jija saali part was cute...continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man ! ur so gud at dis👏 ... keep posting. reading ur post really feels like a dream cum true... even i like making all dese stories... luvd it❤️ ... waiting for the next !!

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Posted: 13 years ago
surbhi 🤗..
you should have put up a note saying "Don't read in a room full of people" my smile grew wider and wider as i read the update. my smile grew to such an extent that my mother gave me what-happened-which-made-you-smile-like-a-idiot? expression. poor swayam i pity on him but sharon is too legitimate by her side how could he be sleeping on their first night. kriya played a oh-so-awesome sister-in-law and bestie she mocked swayam which made his condition poorer. and wait what we have ahead is a cliffhanger that too soo interesting i wanted to know how turned up which made the trio go numb. please update soon.

P.S:sorry for the extremely late comment i had my exams going on.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sur..i knw m more dan 1 mnth late..bt i read dis whole ss today itself..
N it is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...
Sharon all gussa wid swayam..bt he is such an idiot..loved how he tried to manofying sharon..
N his bonding wid shar's mom..n sharon-kria-swayam trio..awesome..
UPDATE ASAP..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Amazing update...Luved SwaRon part...n even the bonding between sharon's mom n swayam...kria n swayams jija saali part was cute...continue soon.



Thank you so very much shrutika..!

[quote=akanksha978]oh man ! ur so gud at dis👏 ... keep posting. reading ur post really feels like a dream cum true... even i like making all dese stories... luvd it❤️ ... waiting for the next !! [/quote]

Thank you soo much mahn!! this means a lott!!

[quote=Ananya.SwaRon] surbhi 🤗..
you should have put up a note saying "Don't read in a room full of people" my smile grew wider and wider as i read the update. my smile grew to such an extent that my mother gave me what-happened-which-made-you-smile-like-a-idiot? expression. poor swayam i pity on him but sharon is too legitimate by her side how could he be sleeping on their first night. kriya played a oh-so-awesome sister-in-law and bestie she mocked swayam which made his condition poorer. and wait what we have ahead is a cliffhanger that too soo interesting i wanted to know how turned up which made the trio go numb. please update soon.

P.S:sorry for the extremely late comment i had my exams going on. [/quote]

Ananya!! i am soo glad that you commented and liked it!
Thank you so much friend!
Your appreciation means a hell lot!
and dun be sorry..tum late ho toh mai maha-late hun!!


[quote=sadiyaswaron]
When will u update????

I still dun noe...as i have my tuitions back to back...so i dun get tym to update!
but..but...i vil not promise this tym..but i vil try to update asap now..!


[quote=SwaRonLuver]
hey sur..i knw m more dan 1 mnth late..bt i read dis whole ss today itself..
N it is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...
Sharon all gussa wid swayam..bt he is such an idiot..loved how he tried to manofying sharon..
N his bonding wid shar's mom..n sharon-kria-swayam trio..awesome..
UPDATE ASAP..
[/quote]

Thank youu so much monicaa!!
You commented...its more than enough for me!
thanks a lott!
Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys Finally i am updating..
I know i took one and a half month to update...but my bad..! 😡
I won't stretch it too far now...
So here is the update.

Btw Thankyou so very much for commenting here...
SS got in FF column!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Recap--

They both jerked and looked at the person with weird looks..accompanied with swayam!

Sharon-kria-swayam—"Oh no!"
---END--


Neha was standing there..in a orange saaree..her eyes full of tears..
Vicky entered after giving the car keys and hugged swayam…but was surprised when everybody was looking towards her wife..
kria—*irritated tone*neha dare you cry today!
when we fight you cry..when we smile you cry..
kindly tell us what we are supposed to do!

Swayam—shaant kriya…shaant!
nehaa..this saaree suits you a lot!
I love this colour!


Neha--*smiles a bit* sachchi?

swayam—muchchi..!! ab puchchi ke liye Vicky hai! *Winks*

Neha blushes and looks at Vicky..
The Hall goes Awww..!!!

Then they all get scattered in a fraction of second…
Swayam—shhh..shhh..!
Kria gets aware of a weird sound and turns her head to right and sees swayam doing that..
Kria—hahaha..yeh din aa gye tere?
Swayam—oh shutup! Lets go
Kria—arre..whre..?

Swayam got hold of her elbow and dragged her to the compound..and yes he dragged her amidst everyone..but they all didn't gave a damn..and Sharon was busy talking to rinni and simmi..!

In the compound.

Kria---arree leave me swayam!!
Swayam—shush!! Dun shout! Wait I have to tell you something!
Kria—wat? You bought me macbook?? Finally!!

Swayam leaves her and stands before her like a stressed bee.

Swayam *huh*--why you are asking me to buy this for you?
Kria—because you are my best friend Dumbo!
Swayam*starts laughing lyk a 5yr old kid..keeping hands on his stomach*
kria—waht?
Swayam—haha ohh..hahahaha…best friend macbook deta hai kya..!! hahaha yeh le…"mango bite" rakh aur khush ho ja!!
Kria*fuming with anger*--why did you brought me here???? Tell me!!! To infuriate me???

Swayam got confused at this reaction of hers..
"Oh ya! Wait…" he whistled with his hand in his mouth!
Kria confused..
Then a guy appeared…
"Watsup people!! "
Swayam went and hugged his best friend—I missed you here bro!
Rey—thank god you whistled fast..its so weird standing lyk a surprise somewhere in the corner!
Kria—ahem ahem…
Swayam broke the hug and stood aside…making a clear view to kria...
Standing in a black suit rey looked handsome enough…
they both were staring each other…
Swayam—time over..ab meri baat suno dono!!
Kria—mujhe rey se baat krni hai!
Swayam—toh kya itne saalo se khamoshi the musical khel rhe the??
Rey—hahahahahhahahaha
Kria*blank and weird expression on her face*—kaise fiance ho tum??
Swayam—jaisa bhi hai tera hai..!
Kria—chupp!!!
Swayam—mujhe mat seekha!!

Rey—silencee!!!
shutup you both freaking idiots!!
Swayam you say..you told me directly to cum here..wats the matter?
kria*calming down*--ohh yes..! kya hua swayam?
Swayam gives a sad look to both of them and speaks with his head bowed down—"I slept at my first night."

Kria and rey went numb.

Swayam slowly looked upwards..one eye on kria..then on rey…

Rey jumped in excitement and hooted…and stood before kria..who was now stomping her feet in disgust.
rey to kria—cash or cheque?
kria*anguished*--my foot!!

Swayam*perplexed*--what the hell is happening??

kria holds swayam's collar and speaks on her face—let me do the honous!!
You are a swayam freaking dumb idiot shekhawat!! You slept on your first night??? How could you?? Now i have to lose all my money!!! Just coz of you!!
Who the hell gets tipsy after gulping just a single sleeping pill?????

Swayam freed himself from her grip—Wha…tt?? Sleeping pill??
Ohh..now i got it..you guys mixed it in my milk!!
Bloody betrayers!!

Rey—Yeaa! But dude it was a single pill..!!!
I told Vicky and nilesh to add only one!
I swear..!

Swayam and kria looked towards each other…
kria dialed nilesh's no. and kept it on speaker…

Nilesh—ya kria say?
Kria—how many pills you dropped in swayam's milk last nyt?
Nilesh—I guess 3…
Kria—3 ???
nilesh—umm..no no..5…yes..5 it is!
and dude guess what you won't believe…Vicky got so mad that he queued up our bro-s favourite songs in his CD too! Hahahahahhaha!
Kria stares at swayam and gives her a you-are-so-strong types look..!
Swayam mutters under his breath—I am gonna kill them..!!
Kria—haha very funny..chal bye!
and cuts the phone..!

Swayam—Tum dono ko toh baad mei dkhunga..firstly I have to do something for Sharon now..she is not even talking to me mahn..
Now you both! Listen..! you just have to do a single thing!
Okay look…

Swayam explains to them their task..and they agreed!
Kria—yayy..cool!! lets goo!!
Rey and swayam gave her a weird look and moved out from there..


Hall again..

Swayam was searching for Sharon..
*where are you siren..i need to tell you the exact reason..*

At the same time..sharon was with some of her relatives…but ofcourse her soul wasn't..
*swayam shekhawat where the hell have you disappeared??*

That's it..swayam spotted her…
*Let the hunt begin..*
Then he signaled rey and kria..

And the lights went off..

Everybody panicked..but our swayam smartily moved inside the crowd and quickly grabbed Sharon by her hand and took her to a room..
They reached the room…it was dark..
Swayam held her left hand by his right and said—sharon listen me..please for a minute?
Then the reply came—huh? Swayam?
Swayam—wat huh? And yes ofcourse I am swayam..who else do you expect..?
Then the lights came…

Amar ofcourse…coz I am rinni!!

Swayam flew inches away and he saw rinni laughing..
swayam—there's nothing to laugh okay…
Rinni—it is..you too can't even live without fighting..goshh!!
Swayam—so..? it happens…acha okay..dun tell this to anyobody present outside..
and where is Sharon?
Rinni—means you will give your rolls Royce to me for a day
and Sharon is upstairs..!

Swayam ran towards the door and turned towards rinni and spoke—Only when you will let me drive it!!

Rinni shouted—what the..!!!!!

But Swayam had disappeared.

In Sharon's room--

Swayam finally reached the destined place..
The door was open..
Sharon was standing near the bed…staring at something..
Swayam tip-toed inside..and silently locked the door from inside..
He goes and stands behind her…leaving a proper gap between them..and just admires her…

Her beautiful brownish hair which craved for his touch…her neck which was all set to surrender herself to him…
then his eyes got lowered to her waist…which seemed so delicate..just like a mermaid..
who had also given up!

Precap--
Sharon slowly unbuttoned his shirt…
swayam—aur paas…
Sharon moves a bit closer..
Swayam—aur paas…
Sharon inched ahead..

Now they were half-inch away from each other…



Guys This time i am seriously in a mood to update fast..but it will obviously depend on your likes and comments!
So
😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!This was such an awesome update!!SwaRon looking out for each other!! 😊 The precap looks amazing!!Do update soon!!

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