SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60.

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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

are plz cont..karo..u've done fabls job😊
&plz PM me..

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: beeny
are plz cont..karo..u've done fabls job😊
&plz PM me..

Hey thanx a lot!! 😃
yes u vil get the pm 😳

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Okay guys!
firstly a HUGE thank you to everybody for liking and commenting on my OS..🤗
now i am making it an SS...👍🏼
i am very bad at these intro speeches..so here u go! 😃

2nd part!

RECAP---
Suddenly his eyes saw something'A piece of paper...

He grabbed it and it read'"Baby if you hadn't slept like a horse on our first night maybe I would have fixed something else too!!"

swayam sighed'"sharonnn!" :'( :'(

sharon was already seated in the rolls royce when swayam rushed towards the driver seat...trying to gulp inside what had happened few mins ago'
both were seated now..sharon looking outside the window..as if there was no nobody around her'swayam was stealing a glance at her'then finally out of sadness he strtd the car'

5 mins passed'swayam was getting impatient because of sharon's ignorance'
so he thought to put his hand on her palm...just to calm her down a bit..her hand was sweetly resting on her lap..
so he took a short deep breath..and advanced his hand towards hers..he had a sudden urge of playing with her beautiful fingers..after their marriage he for the first time was getting nervous like hell..
generally these things ppl experience at first nyt...on vich..I...stupid arse of a shekhawat slepttt!!! howw?? how could i????
swayam mentally strangles himself for doing this!

he brushes off all these thoughts and started to concentrate on his hand..which was on the verge of meeting hers...
almost!!

but then...
SNAP!

she removed her hands quickly from her lap without even noticing his hands or his face...!

swayam's face fell...he wanted this to end desperately soon!
But this time..soon also seemed to be soo far!

After 5 mins of the heartbroken not-so-meeting of the two palms'he searched for another idea..
scratched his head in his mind...and
Gotcha!

he smiled and switched on the stereo..nd then clicked on CD option!
Soft music started playing..the beats were perfect..the tempo was absolutely magical'and the two folks who were hearing this now'have always believed that it is their Patent song!

Pehla nasha started'

Swayam ogled at Sharon I am sure after listening to our song you will definitely look at me!

Sharon Why on earth he has to play dis songg??? I still remember in college I had put this as my ringtone'Especially for him..aww..beautiful memories!!

but now'!! Ughgh!!
Swayam She must be thinking of our college times..wen we were together!
I dun noe of today...but those were the times I used to blush like an idiot!!
Swayam unknowingly blushed at his thought!
Sharon notices this Some people never change..my husband still blushes!!
btw he looks real cute in that! No wonder why I fell for'Ughhh'easy Sharon easy..just stop thinking and for god sake stop gawking at him!!
Swayam takes a glance at her lady..and woahh! She's looking at him! I think my plan has worked!! She's staring at me..
Swayam didn't wanted to lose this chance so he avoided the road and preferred to concentrate on his wife..he intensed his gaze at her'for not even once he blinked his eyes and just stared at her like the high school swayam..!
She smiled slightly...and he got relaxed and instantly smiled back'Until!

She yawned and turned her head sideways..thinking something mischievious'

Sharon Its not easy mr. shekhawat! And being mrs. Sharon rai prakash shekhawat I would make it
darn tough for you!

Sharon leaned forward and changed the song..it was like she wanted to play some specific song so she just skipped few songs!
Swayam was blankly staring at Sharon
Wat she's upto?? Why she changed that song?? Does she wanna
play some of her personal favourites?? But I am sure she wants me to hear it! She's so sweet!!

Song started'tune started..melody of the song went into swayam's ears'

Swayam perplexed'his hands were loosing its grip..!
he looked up'prayed and thanked god that this car can surely save them if anything bad happens! Helpless was swayam..unable to do something or the other..unable to change the song..unable to change a song!!! Well yes...
He never dared to do anything against her wish wen she was upset and dat too from him..and in dis situation wen the mistake was his! how could he just do anything unknowingly wrong!!

He wanted to pluck out his hair for playing pehla nasha..
he stared blankly at Sharon This music player had a switch off button too!!!!!!!! There was no need to play this songgg :'(((

but he decided to keep his thoughts to himself and forcefully increased the speed of his car!
He just wanted to reach the venue as faster as he could!!

oh ya'the song Sharon played was----

Tum toh thehre pardesiii'
saath kya nibhaogee..!!
Tum toh thehre pardesiii'
saath kya nibhaogee..!!
subah pehli' ti-ding ti-ding
subah pehli.. ti-ding ti-ding
subah pehli gaadi se'ghar ko laut jaoge!!!
Tum toh thehre pardesiii'saath kya nibhaogee..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kGf18U6e11Q

If you can control yourself from hysteric laughter after hearing dis song..then I must say you are a tough competition to it!!

dun forget to leave ur precious likes and comments! 😳

Edited by surbhimathur - 13 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

awesome update.. 👏 swayam trying to pacify Sharon and sharon giving him a tough time... the song selection was hillarious..😆 swayam nervous and blushing..awiee..😳 loved it..😃 muje kehna to nh padega na ki muje nxt update ka bhi pm chahiye..😆 lolz..maine 1 sep ko res kia tha..😆 sory for dis,bt i ve already told u the reason..😳

Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago

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Tanishtha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

awww! swayam 2 cute! haath pakdna chahta tha par sharon ne nahi dekha...
pehla nasha! haye...
🤣🤣🤣 tum toh thehre pardesi...
brilliant sharon!!!👏

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Deepika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

hehehe ...awesome post ...tum toh thehre pardesi ...🤣🤣... angry sharon ...swayam manaofying sharon ...too cute ... 👏👏👏

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

🤣>>> This was for the last song. Hilarious to the core🤣

Coming to the update, so Sharon is not going to be a easy wife, that was known knowing how difficult it is to pataofy her. But Swayam being Swayam not only he dared to sleep on their first night of marriage but now is in a hope that she will forgive him that easily. Nah😈

Loved it when Swayam blushed😆 Sounds funny but adorable too😳 That's like our Majnu boy gushing on hearing pehela nasha.

I am eager to know what is gonna happen next.

Loved it Surbhi ,update real soon

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honeyangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Dude !!! You were bang on to the post 👏 😆 I cant stop my laughter on the song.. "Tum to thaireh pardesi... saath kya nibhaoge" Hehehehehehe 🤣 Loved the post totally and really Thanxx a ton for this.. Love ya for this.. and hope sharon maan jaye yaar poor swayam 😆 And thanx for the P.M 😛 Waiting for the next part 😛

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

🤣 🤣 Tum tho thehra pardesi - Really 🤣 🤣

Poor Swayam 😆

Coming to the update, loved it Surbhi 😃 Loved the insights to their minds your gave. Sharon still angry and Swayam trying his best to convince her is always a fun read. Loved how they could reminisce about their college days when the pehla nasha song played. And yeah Swayam blushing 😳 while Sharon is busy Staring at her cute husband 😳 was nicely done. Looking forward to read how Swayam manages to pacify Sharon. It was a fun read Surbhi, loved it.