SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60. - Page 15

OMG, I can't believe that the boys did this to Swayam !! Poor Swayam, Sharon is mad at him when it wasn't even his fault !! Chalo, at least he came with a plan to pacify her !! Now, let's hope that the plan works and that they get their first night back !!

surbhi even though i am hell busy now and not even commenting on anybody's work...

i have specialy read this one because it has come after ages...suddenly tumhe yad kaise aa gaya ke tumhe update karna hai...

and boy o boy ka characterisation kiye ek se ek namune ek sath khade kar diye...kya planning ki inhone apne dost ki first night barbad karne ki...aur Rey and Kriya were leading...and this one was perfect punch nilesh saying shayad 3 pills ya no no 5 yes 5 pills...man o man nicky bros and there wiered ways...bechare ko sudi chadva diya...

and rey aur kriya ki chamistry bhi la jawab thi...and khamoshi the musical khel rahe the kya was the dialogue of the update...and rinni ko swayam ki rols royals chai he he he she is so rinni yar...

anyways finally swaron are in privacy...lets see ab kya hota hai...eager to know...

loved the update...thanks for PM...and ya iss bar thoda jaldi update karna...because humien wait karna acha nahi lagta ha ha ha ha...

pratik

p.s. may be this is last update i am reading because 1-18 mere exams hai so i will be busy with them so fir exam ke bad padunga...

Hey surbhi...i know i am commenting like after 2 months of ur first update...u started this one on august n i am commenting now...silly me...so sorry dear...🥺😭

Well coming to the updates..

Part 1

🤣🤣 omg loved this update...specially the note by Sharon "Baby if you hadn't slept like a horse on our first night maybe I would have fixed something else too!!" poor swayam...great one surbhi... 👏

Part 2

🤣🤣 i just can't stop myself from laughing after listening to the song...god swayam to gaya...poor swayam... after all she is Sharon...awww he tried to manaofy her so much...pehle nasha...😳 loved it when Sharon remembered their college incident about pehle nasha n swayam was blushing...😃 just loved this update...awesome surbhi... 👏

Part 3

Awww loved swayam and sharon's mom's bonding...😊 swayam is so perfect... n at the end loved kria-sharon-swayam's scene...kria teasing swayam...lovely...😆 both krisha loves each other so much...so sweet...n thank god i have the next chapter ready...i didn't have to wait...u gave a cliff hanger...😳yipee...now running to read the next chappy...

Part 4

Awww "swayam'muchchi..!! ab puchchi ke liye Vicky hai! *Winks*"...😳 5 SLEEPING PILLS...😲this nilesh is such a big crack pot...😆 n swayam took rinni with him...poor swayam...😆 but wow wow wow finally he reached to the correct destination... n the precap says everything will be fine between them...😃 plz update soon...will be waiting for the next chapter...😊

Awesome!! cant wait for the next update😊

awesome update sur..KreyAm convo was hilarious..
Kria—mujhe rey se baat krni hai!
Swayam—toh kya itne saalo se khamoshi the musical khel rhe the?? 😆😆
n nil..he gives him 5 pills..😲 o boy..swayam is defo too strong😆..n kriya n rey both were also involved in dis prank...
hmm precap seems interesting...waitn for d next part..
update soon