'Whole Life In A Moment' Swaron OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello guys! Dis is my first topic on dis forum..😊
And swaron rule my heart soo i really wanted to post dis..
here it is--

Shivam has already entered in d clg and Sharon has strtd feeling immense love for swayam..

Sharon is in her room and is thinking about d sudden incidents vich has left awkwardness in her and swayam's blooming relationship…
she thinks—wat does dis shivam want from us? Y can't he just disappear? Waise Uske aane
baad sab kuch change toh hone lga hai…uske aane baad swayam mjhe phle se b zyada protect krne lga h..fikar hai usse meri..aur mai bhi toh usse…usse…Den she blushes to herself..bt uss shivam ka koi bharosa nhi..kya pata kab kya problem create krde…mjhe swayam se baat krni hogi iss baare mei..i need to tell him wat I feel for him…

she picks up her phone..n calls swayam..

swayam sees Sharon's name and smiles—Hey..
Sharon--hey..um..listen I wanted to talk to you..
swayam—ya say..
Sharon—nae phone pe nae...meet in d atrium in 15min..
swayam—okee !
Sharon and swayam cut d call..

Swayam is too happy nd excited..coz he has guessed d growing feelings inside Sharon..soo without wasting any tym thinkin he went and got ready..
Sharon reaches atrium before swayam..nd she's waiting for him..meanwhile she's thinking of him and blushing continuously..who knew dat Sharon rai prakash who is now just Sharon..vil confess her feelings to swayam..
it was dark..no lights..and Sharon was pacing in nervousness…--swayam..kaha ho tum?

suddenly a hand reached out to her and took her to d classroom..sharon was surprised—swayamm!!
a husky voice answered—tum itni jaldi mera naam bhi bhul gyi Sharon?
Sharon was alarmed..as d face appeared in front of him was shivam!! Sharon—tum! Tum yaha kya..n hw dare u? mujhe haath lgaane ki himmat kaise hui tumhari?? Bloody creep! (turns to go..bt shivam grabs her and pins her to d wall) Sharon—wat d hell! Let me go shivam!
shivam—tumhe kya lga? Mjhe thappad maarne k baad itni easily bach jaogi tum mjhse? Nah..Nt dis tym babe!
Sharon is scared nw..her heart starts beating heavily..tears started rolling dwn her face…her voice trailed bt she managed to say—chodh..chodh do mujhe..jaane do..plz jaane do…

Meanwhile swayam enterd d atrium bt dre was nobody…only darkness! He thought Sharon must b on her way so he was waiting..
Shivam—sharon rai prakash! Kya hua? Darr gyi? I lyk it babe..infact I love dis begging attitude of urs..par kuch farak nhi padhne wala mjhe in sab baaton se…mai apna badla leke rahunga..kyunki..shivam jo chahta hai..wo paata hai..*smirks a laugh*
Sharon was trying damn hard to loosen d grip of shivam's hand on her bt failed miserably..den suddenly shivam grabbed her face..sharon got bloody scared..she ws crying badly..bt shivam had no heart! He was bringing his face close to hers..she was not in a state to shout or speak..soo she hit a table wid her stillettos! And it made a smash sound!

Swayam heard dis! He wondered whre it came frm..he walked towards d corner and soon he ws able to hear sum voice..he walked closer and saw a classroom's gate was open..he went dre and peeped in..
Shivam—ab mjhe tumse koi nhi bacha skta sharon..koi b nahi..
he came closer to sharon and brought her right in front of him..sharon closed her eyes and prayed for a miracle..
suddenly a hand grabbed shivam's neck..in a elbow lock! And threwed him onto d chairs and tables!!
Sharon opened her eyes in a start! she saw swayam standing dre and he ws furious! He tuk shivam by d collar and crashed him to d atrium..said in an aggressive tone—teri itni himmat ki Sharon ko haath lgayga?? Swayam punched his face! And at once shivam fell on d surface..unconscious..(shekhawat power ;)) Sharon ws seeing dis terrible sight and was only hoping dat swayam shud b safe..swayam stood before shivam and grabbed him and was about to bang his head on d railings wen Sharon stoppd him by shoutingg—swayam!! Swayam stoppd in between n lukd towards Sharon..whu nodded..and den he lukd towards shivam and released him and warned—agli baar Sharon k aas paas bhi dikha na toh zinda nae bachega! Nikal yaha se! Shivam was in a half dead mode so he ran fr his lyf..!

swayam sighed and lukd towards Sharon..during dis tym he didn't even noticed hw miserable her condition was..she was shivering wid fear..n swayam also had his eyes welled up wid tears by watching her..


Sharon rushed towards swayam and hugged him tightly..holdin his tee frm d bak wid her fingers! She cried loudly! She said—"sswa..swaay..amm thank thank god tum..wrna.." her words trailed and strted crying lyk hell! Swayam was holding Sharon and he was letting her to cry her heart out..as she was feeling terrible! He himself was crying..wat if he didn't reachd dre on tym? A split-second difference and….Swayam washed dese horrifying thoughts away and slowly tuk her face in his palms and removed d tears dat wre dripping frm her eyes and said (wid a sniff)—"plz dun cry Sharon..mai tumhe iss haalat mei nae dkh skta..everythin vil b f9.." Sharon was facing him bt she again withdrew hrself in his arms and strtd crying more! She slowly fell down on her knees bt swayam had a firm hold on her and den dey both wre on d surface kneeled dwn..hugging each other! Dey both had dre eyes closed…sharon's head buried in swayam's chest and den aftr a min..slowly slowly..sharon went frm crying to sobbing n den to sniffing..den dey both opened dre eyes n slowly broke d hug bt dey didn't let go dre hold on each other..den sharon said in a soft n angelic tone—"
swayam
"
swayam replied in his as usual *oh-i-so-love-you* tone—"bahut achcha lagta hai..jab tum mera naam leti ho"

*Pehla Nasha BG*

Sharon came out of d trance and lukd right den left n den she got up nd was leaving..coz she was feeling shy and she didn't wanted swayam to see her smiling and blushing…she took a step forward bt she was late…he grabbed her hand n pulled her against him..sharon was facing swayam nw..swayam said—"mai jaanta hun ki tum kya kehna chahti ho..par mai wo tumhare muh se sunna chahta hun"
Sharon stared in his deep black eyes and a cute smile and a sweet blush flashed on her face! she said in a sweet tone—"your wish is my command" swayam's eyes brightened..he blushed a little and replied--"den say it sharon"
Sharon slowly puts her palm on his eyes..comes closer..closer enough dat she cud feel dre heartbeat striking d same chord..she cud feel d essence of his adorable hair! She brought her lips close to his ears n slowly whispered—
"I"
"LOVE"
"YOU"

It was lyk heaven…heaven for swayam to hear dese 3 beautiful words..from d only person he loved more dan anything else in dis whole world! She was his princess..his lyf..nd nw..his Sharon <3

he removed her hand over frm his face..held her face gently in his hands nd said—"I Love You Too Sharon"

tears started rolling dwn sharon's eyes..
swayam wiped dem off..n said—"tum soch bhi nahi sakti aaj mei kitna khush hu Sharon..jis insaan ko maine tabse pyaar kiya jabse mjhe pyaar ka matlab bhi nahi pta tha..aj wo mere saath h.."
nd he strts crying..wid his head bent…sharon says—"swayam..plz dun cry..plz"
swayam—"yeh khushi k aansoon hai Sharon..i can't explain ki tumne ek pal mei mjhe kitni khushiyaan ek saath dedi.."
sharon—"mai kab tak khud se bhaagti rehti swayam..sachchai toh yeh h ki tum hi mera pyaar ho aur rahoge.."

Pehla Nasha Starts..❤️


dey both fell in each other's arms..in a long hug..a hug wich was hard to let go off..! tears of joy strtd rolling down frm dre eyes..one year..whole year aftr d rdx party..today ws d day wen Sharon was in swayam's arms..bt d difference was of a lifetime..dis was d moment swayam had desperately waited for…and today his happiness had no match..slowly swayam tuk her face in his hands..planted a kiss on both of her eyes..kissed her cheeks..den he put a pck on her neck..sharon's hand in swayam's hair..she was feeling blessed..blessed to hav a prince charming lyk swayam in her lyf..swayam brought his face closer to hers..he cud feel her fast breath..she had her eyes closed..he stared at d amazing beauty whu was ready to surrender herself..she was lukin lyk an innocent painting..whu was ready to give in…
he cud feel her fast breath..den he slowly moved his face away..in a backward manner…sharon opened her eyes..he saw swayam dre..in front of her..soo close..yet so far! She bit by bit..laid both d hands behind his neck and softly kissed him on his lips! Swayam strtd responding and slowly bt surely it turned into a long adorable kiss ❤️ it was dere first special kiss..! dat kiss vich swayam had always dreamt of and somewhere..deep within..Sharon had always wished for! Den dey slowly parted away..swayam kissed her forehead..sharon cutely hugged him..swayam embraced her and kissed her hair n allowed her head to rest on his chest forever!
Time flew! Dey both suddenly realizd dat its too late…dey slowly got up n walkd out of d atrium bt Sharon ws still filled wid fear dat her feets wre trembling..she saw swayam n within split second he took her into his arms..she was luking lyk an angel! Sharon's head rested on his shoulder..he opened d passenger seat door of his shiny Volvo! Nd drove Sharon to her house! Dey reached in 5 mins..swayam jumped out n opend sharon's door n tuk her into d house..he laid her gently on d bed..tuk out her stilettos..covered her wid d blanket..meanwhile Sharon was staring at him lyk an awe-struck manner! He switched off d lamp..n said—"gud nyt Sharon..tak cre…bye.." he turned nd was about to go wen she held his fingers n signaled him to cum bak..he came bak n sat on her bed n said—"u shud sleep Sharon..u need rest!"
Sharon smiled n said—"I need u..!" swayam smiled adorably at dis!

Sharon tuk swayam's face in her hands..brought him closer to her..made his head bend towards her n softly kissed on his forehead..swayam lukd in her eyes wid a tear nd pulled her into his arms n said—"you r d best thing ever happened to me Sharon..!"
Sharon smiled n closed her eyes..

the moonlight beaming on dre face through d window made it a perfect scene <3




Hope u guys lyk it :)
ur likes nd comments vil be lovedd!! 😃




p.s.--i want to thank my friendd "surbhi mathur" fr helping me out wd dis..
luv ya brow ❤️

So Guys u can call it as a joint effortt!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Browww!!! 👍🏼

Yayy!
Finally we did itt!!
*fingers crossedd*

luv you too ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!!!
Sonal and Surbhi, this is Magical!!!! I loved every bit of it... Not too much, not too less, just perfect... Just how I could imagine SwaRon... You'll are great writers... Such an awesome demonstration of the right kind of emotion! Im speechless! Hats off!!

You'll should write more!!! And please, whenever you do so, do PM me!!!! :)


P.S.Im the first one to comment!!! EEE!!!!
Edited by rachita_1994 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..guys dis is amazing sweet OS!!thankx surbhi fr d PM!!!do write more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww this was such an adorable OS...I wish dere confession happens same way..beautifully expressed...cute and romantic. filmy dialogues of Swayam hehe and vulnerable Sharon who was awestruck by Swayam' care and Swayam who was so happy when he heard dose three words from Sharon. I love that he picked her in his arms and took care of princess and Swayam is Sharon's prince charming. I wish this happens soon on d3...can't wait to see dere confession now. Thank you for making me smile and thnx fr the PM.
Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shivam gets beaten up . Again. And again. AND again. 😆


Ahhh ... life is good. 😎

And Sharon is ... a lucky gurl :)))

And this FF was so sweet .. and I love how they are kinda shy and all ! ☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awesome.. The way u explaind der emotions was gr8.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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surbhi and sonal... awesome os... just kinda perfect blend of everything required... and i swear vo shivam ka dialogue sunke aisa laga kuch tod phod du... aacha hua swayam ne uski pitai karri... and you both are such fab writers... keep up the good work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Surbhi & Sonal it was ecstasy to read th confession part itwas dramatic par zaruri tha that they express themselves in words & reasure each other - that was touching & hope we get to c that soon... write more & pls pm next time 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was a beautiful OS Sonal and Surbhi...loved it..do write more...
Do PM me if you write more...
Thanks for the PM surbhi...

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