'STAR STRUCK'--AN ARHI FF (CHAP 10 UPDTD)

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Omg chapter 8 is mind blowing outstading

what the 😲 Aakash and Payal are together 😲 😲 😲 and here I was pairing her with Karan, sorry Aakash for thinking to give away your love to some else 😳, don't worry keep going, I won't became a kabab me haddi 😆

Loved the way Arnav is remembering about Khushi. Khushi's gift was awesome, she give him what he loved the most, his dad and his dreams, and at his birthday party he fall in love with her 😳 it sound like DM was giving him an unique and presious gift but I wander what happened that she left him, what he did, don't tell me that he betryed her.

Now he really miss her, and I think he just need one chance to meet her, to found her and I'm damn sure that he will woo her, and it seems like DM once again has hear his prayes because she is giving him another chance hope he didn't waist it.

Anjali is really smart, she organized his meeting with Khushi without his knowledge, I think the plan was Kryas, what a smart family he have.

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Chapter 9

omg finally the meet and what a meeting they was hell shocked to see each other in this way with out worning.

I can understand that for a moment they was to shocked and emotionally overwhelmed that they didn't find the words.

Khushi's reactions was expected, she can't forget her past so easyly and run into his arms, but I also think tha he deserve a second chance. I can feel Khushi's pain, it's not easy to forget the pain and especially that wounds that we received from over loved ones.

The falshback was really cute, he was really behaving like a kid, just because he wanted her to see him playing.

Wow Khushi is such a sweetheart beacuse even if he hurt her a lot she still watch his matches because she doesn't want to break the promise that she made to him.

This was mind blowing loved it too too much

I really loved the way you described their emotions when they saw each other, it seemed that you can feel their pain, really a great job.

LOVED IT TOO TOO MUCH 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

wow I don't when I reached here 😲 I was so immerse that I didn't know how the time flew away.

I new that something like this maigh happened and I was right, he slept with some else and it's not his fault, I think it was all planned by the bloody Shyamu 😡 😡😡 he made him drunk or maybe he drug him and after that he made him sleep with a girl, and you know I even think that he didn't did anything with that girls, he was too drunk, he fainted right!

Omg Kate has hear everything and I hope she is gona hel them to solve ther MU and come together.

Till know the story is really, really superb, mind blowing outstaniding

p.s. sorry for being so so late 😭

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

jus came across ths story and read all parts in one go:)
jus eagerly waiting to know wat was in d video and who was d other voice which questioned arnav abt d video?
eagerly waiting for d next part, plz pm me:)

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Jia

@TinkJia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Very nice story! This story reminded me of Julie James book "The Sexist Man Alive", I read this book in senior year of high school, good old days.

I would love to read the next chapters...

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

I love your ff! read it all in one go, please do pm when u continue. update soon, the suspense is killing me.

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arshiifever

@arshiifever

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

plss update d next part sooonnn...plsss

jus loved it

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Hey again...what happened dear...waiting for u to update since long...pls update yar...

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Amazin dear...jus loved it...plz plz plz pm me weneva u updt and plz update super soon...will be waiting for your update...

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princess_avani

@princess_avani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Hey...i know its been super long since i updated but i am really caught up with my engineering entrance exams and i am super busy...i will try an update asap...its just when i read or write any of the IF stories i get so totally addicted that everything else takes a backseat...and that is not something i can afford right now...atleast that's what i keep telling myself...but i know one of these days, the urge is just gonna overcome sense and i will write the next chapter any day now!!!! Thanks for being patient!!!

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