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Tara

@Hollagurl

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

I loved all three OS's but especially the first one because my heart literally melts every time Arnav stands up for Khushi in front of Dadi and you wrote it beautifully! I especially loved how he knew that Khushi was lying and told her to sit back down, that is SO in tune with his character. You know how much I love your work already, but still I have to say that all of them were amazing!

- Tara 😛

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Wow they all are awese!! Truly!! 😃

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

All 3 were amazing...i can't wait for Arnav to finally find the cameras, i'm sure he will react just as you have shown.

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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Wow awsome idea loved reading them for fun

Exellemt K

Pm me for more lots of love and remeber to sme a index for this thread just in case :)

Xxx

Hira

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

I loved all three of them, Krani. They are beautiful scenes and did leave a smile behind. A great idea😊

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

the first OS - awesome!!! lovvved how Arnav showed Dadi what Khushi is in his life :)

the second one...too cute! loved the song and Arnav's naughty smile 😊

the third one - I so hope Arnav finds the cam in the show too!!

looking forward to reading more of these 😊

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Oh i absolutely love this idea of yours...small small cute stories!!
I loved that Arnav sang that particular line😳 - suited their situation well and that he found the camera..
Loving them while i hope u update the other 2 major ones - Caught and Arranged Marriage 😃

Cheers,
Pestering fan Preeti 😆