Drabble Central (collection of short OS's)Pg21 NEW - Page 2

Good Collection.! :-)

I love that you've done this.. I loved all the three os..but my favourite one is the first one.. I love it when Arnav gets all MY wife in front of everyone..

wow its soo cute os...

i loved it...

K, I love the idea!!!! love it. Now I know where to go, if I need a special dose of the K-effect, lol.

I liked how you kept the hand raising thing of that WOMAN intact. I don't mean to be wierd, but it would have been more dadi-like had she left the table. I loved the OS. Seriously loved it. No kidding. But I write myself, and I know how much one honest critique matters (not that the others are dishonest in their opinions). This is just what *I* felt, and may not be in sync with how you wanted it to end. I genuinely hope I am not out of line here. I apologise if that is the case.

The second OS- the suhaag raat thing. The day Khushi acted so funnily. It had me in splits. :D and the way you caught the essense of the characters, I so admire you for, was nothing short of splendid. I could see that happen you know. Great job!

And for the third OS- I could feel Arnav's rage creep up me. I could see him crushing the camera in his fist. I could see him muse on how Khushi bought khushiyan to the family. I could see it you know.

Congratulations on the soon to exist thread three of Arranged Marriage. You deserve it, that is all I can say.

Sorry, if any part seems out of line.

Love,
V

Ps- continued on page three, dont aim darts at my picture YET :P

A continuation to the previous comment...


I forgot to add, and a phone does wierd things if you want to edit. :P

An on-your-face-all-you-my wife-haters Arnav is always a treat to read, or watch. And can just say, The way you write, it paints a pretty picture for everybody. Like watching a movie. And I like movies.

Also- I love the way you write. But you already know that.

This is for all people who like to credit other people's hard work as their own aka- plagiarists. Again, out of line, but this time, I'm not sorry.

Please appreciate the time and effort a writer puts into writing, and give them due credit. Sounds wierd, but Karma is a nasty bitch, and it will catch up one day. Yeah, I know copying is a wierd form of appreciation, but thankyou, a writer can make do with your loving posts and kind words of encouragement. No need to show your appreciation by putting up the writings on another forum, without giving them credit.

To all you other readers- i sound quite the angry young teenager, Don't I? I'm not generally so; but plagiarism and me have a history. And this history, I don't want it to happen to ANY other writer. Sorry, if you realised that you just wasted five seconds of your life reading the rants of a verry pissed of teen.

K- sorry for making your drabble central my personal venting thing. But I love you, and I genuinely dont want you to go through all of that shit, if you haven't already.

Please dont hate me. *raises arms in surrender*

Love,
V

^^ i meant MY previous comment. =P

Loving this concept of yours!!!

Wonderful Krani. Loved all three. The best had to be the Abhi Abhi one. But all three made me so happy with your effortless writing. Looking forward to the Drabble Central :)