FF : Where Dreams Come True : Chapter 1 : pg 6

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

i simply loved this update .manveer's meeting was so amazing .manyatha was so bold and daring .heena is also so friendly and loving. thanks for the pm.update asap

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: shana0127

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

like button not working for some reason..

i lovvved this part..was too good!

loved the uday-manyata part..and the heena-manyata scenes too!

waiting for more asap..continue soon

thanks for the pm

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow awesum blossom gr8...😃
luved it luved it loads...😛
update next soon plz...😆
and plz do pm me...😳
awesum update...😉
mahi...😊

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Loved it to bits!!! What a story! UV and Robinhood are well written characters, just as Manyata and Heena. And from the looks of it, seems like J will stay true to herself and be the meanest of mean. Also glad to see that Pakash is not present in your FF. Yeah! I can rejoice now!

Thanks for the pm.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Shana🤗what an explosive start.I enjoyed reading the action sequences.You made them come alive.very well written.I loved all the four characters.Each character has their own unique charm especially Robin...awww I think UV is going to face a tough competition.You have managed to pull off an equally powerful male character yet one who is so different from UV.I am really loving the guy.The hospital scene was fab.The interaction between both the couples was enjoyable.The first chapter was awesome Shana...now I am eager how the love stories are going to proceed😳but bhool math jaana I am still waiting for Manya to face the challenge😆

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Niha

@-Niha-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

wow shana dii that was amazing

beautifully written

hahaha manyata and uday scene was hilarious

man that would have been very awkward in real life

uday still being his usual self even though he had been shot

thanks for the pm

do update soon

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Awesome update Shana!!!!

loved de character of Yaseer Robinhood Saleem

u hav written very beautifully

Manyata and Heena frndship is nyc

loved Manveer meeting

such a lovely update 👏

thanks for de PM

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Awsome shana its fab jst loved it i dont have words yaar wat to say about ur FF'S u always leave me stunned wid ur writing skills 👏

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: pmpm1
Loved it to bits!!! What a story! UV and Robinhood are well written characters, just as Manyata and Heena. And from the looks of it, seems like J will stay true to herself and be the meanest of mean. Also glad to see that Pakash is not present in your FF. Yeah! I can rejoice now!

Thanks for the pm.

Dont worry [pakash is not here but then I have something like Pakash in store 😆.

Laga na jhatka arey yaar M falling directly for UV will be so boring ...so thought why not let her fall for Mr.XZY and then have twists and turns to bring UV and M together ...read dear read ...I have got lot in store😊

And one thing is sure

UV wont be Manyata first love but well may be second 😕and even M wont be anywhere in UVs mind as a lady love...but then me shana hun na...will make them come together anyhow😳