FF : Where Dreams Come True : Chapter 1 : pg 6 - Page 9

Originally posted by: minizz

Shana🤗what an explosive start.I enjoyed reading the action sequences.You made them come alive.very well written.I loved all the four characters.Each character has their own unique charm especially Robin...awww I think UV is going to face a tough competition.You have managed to pull off an equally powerful male character yet one who is so different from UV.I am really loving the guy.The hospital scene was fab.The interaction between both the couples was enjoyable.The first chapter was awesome Shana...now I am eager how the love stories are going to proceed😳but bhool math jaana I am still waiting for Manya to face the challenge😆

Originally posted by: andy.a

So shana there is a new villian coming to this story. If you are the writer then we can surely expect a super duper roller coaster ride type storyline. Waiting eagerly for the next update .and please update WOF today if possible

Originally posted by: shana0127

<font color="#000066">He wont be villian andy...he will be Manyata's so called first love...now how much she loves him would be a big question to Mnayata herself when she has to answer it with proof😉</font>

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

awww.this was vry sweet n big.waiting for d nxt desperately. Pm me as u update.luv u n ur stories, all of dem.

Originally posted by: Tasnee

👏 Yayy.. thanks for the pm... as always your amazing, Loving all the characters especially Yuvraj Udayveer 😳.. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: andy.a

is he going to be similar to akash.i always prefer manveer.cant see any one other than uv with manyatha.i know its sound stupid but my mind only tuned to manveer frequency. But dont make that person good plz...

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

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i lovvved this part..was too good!

loved the uday-manyata part..and the heena-manyata scenes too!

waiting for more asap..continue soon

thanks for the pm