FF : Where Dreams Come True : Chapter 1 : pg 6 - Page 6

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsoomee...brilliant update...
Uday's char. complitly opposite from the show...
Manveer first meeting is dhamake dar...
Lolzzz...this J just hate her...
Agar uday aur J ki shdi hone wali hai toh manveer ki love story bahot complicatedd hone wali hai...
I think ye prince aur ciendrela ki story hone wali hai.
Ahhh...my king this word is sooo..irritating.even i dnt like toh bichare uday ko kaise achha lagega.
Lollzzz...uday ne manyata ko touch kiya itne me itna hugama...by the way agar me hoti toh me bhi aise hi beheave karti ...
Ek baar uday mujhe touch karle toh me bhi zindgi me nahaugi nahi...haila ye kuch jyada ho gaya...
Okkk...update soon...and thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: shana0127

Dear u just cracked me up ...yes u r right zindagi bhar nahi nahane wala idea is bit too much

Originally posted by: hemvb

awesome!!!! so well written...

love this update sooo much..love uday,manyata, heena, robin...everyone..cant wait for more..

do add me to your pm list plzzz

thxx

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

*reserved for queries* 😆

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hey a very gud chapter.. interesting start.. uday s so sweet.. he doesnt show any arrogance tht he is the king and she is a common girl.. ufffo this jay no idea how we r goin to tolerate her in the coming chapters... she was intolerable when uday fell for princess manyata.. now her ego is going to get hurt badly given that manyata s a common girl..
now wat will giriraj do.. when uday ends up falling for manyata😊

continue soon.. n pls update wheels of fortune too😃

Originally posted by: Jarin04

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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

WOww!! beautiful amazing and awesome update...

i loved it..really i loved it...❤️

ohhh...amazing..i mean brilliantly written..i am in love with this FF after the very first chapter...

i loved there first meeting and the concern heena and M have for there king and then yasir robinhood first of all i really like his name..yasir is a very nice name but yasir robinhood and robi bhai is epic..awesome...i like his character too i loved how u wrote his concern for udayveer i mean despite of the fact that he is a muslim he entered a mandir just to save uday's life...

and that scene is amazingly written...

then UDAY..omggg...

from start to end this chapter was a blockbuster..i loveddd it...

and thank u for coming up with this new concept and starting this beautiful wonderful FF...

Originally posted by: pia.raha

shana wat an update!!!!!! bang on strt!!!!!!!!! was scared for uday!!!!!! heena is soo sweeett and true frnd,she fake her health to gt into the hospital!!!!!!! m and uday's chemtsyr is mndblowingg!!!!!! dat anarakali dialogg was suprbb!!!!!!!! manayata and heena excitation for udayy wass lovelly!!!!!!!! cntinueee soon!!!!!!!!!😊