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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hey!!!

Finally!!!

Phew!!!!!

And they lived happily ever after!!!!😃

Nice one!!!

Hope to see more of your work...

Will keep visiting the forum anyway...

~Wini😊

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

yoshi that was amazing !!!

truly beautiful !!!!

so pure...so much anger fury and pain and hatred !!!!

I love my Arshi hamesha !!!!

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Oh God... what an ending and that too in temple???????????

Well, nice ending.. loved it

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

U know i always want arnav redeem and cry for her

cry for her forgiveness

worship her

get to know her importance

now after reading it feel really painful

don't need to bring arnav on feet

but again i want this but its painful to see arnav like this

Such hot sorry ...

love the ending

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

loved this os, so intense love.

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IPKKND Fan 4rm Colombo

@Puddleduck

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Hey!!!!

The final part was mind blowing too, i really don't have words to express, so here goes the round of applause

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

(wish i could continue...!!!!)

I always thought that Khushi was too soft by nature and easily gave in for Arnav's words, though Arnav hurts her alot with words, actions etc, but then an eye lock or a SORRY would bring things on track, which i didn't like.

I always wanted Arnav to beg Khushi for forgiveness (at least after Arnav realized that Khushi was not at fault,in Shyam matter, but the recovery was so quick 😒 )

Your story was penned just to fulfill my wish, that made me love it all the more😃

A BIG THANK YOU for that 😆

Hope you continue to write more

Please do...

Edited by Puddleduck - 12 years ago

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Read the whole thing in one go , and I loved it! You portray their emotions so perfectly, it was beautiful. And I really love the way you ended it! Great work, you're definitely talented :)

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

loved the ending!

fantastic!

thnks for the PM

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

loved d update
thanx for pm😊😊😊
will mis this os

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Why does this always happen with me??? why do i get to read your works after you have written few of its parts?? this is so not fair...

Coming back to the update it was 👏

We never saw Arnav repenting, or redeeming himself ( I dont consider that 'I am sorry for everything' as repent, it lasted for only 2 mins) The way u projected ur thot was marvelous!!! I loved How Khushi held herself strong and stern and Arnav falling to her feet was just the icing on the cake... and did u make them kiss in the temple??? in front of Durga ma???? 😳