OS:Don't Walk Away Last Part updated!

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Tanumon

@Tanumon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

hot,thanx for the PM

Edited by Tanumon - 12 years ago

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: munam_13
Why does this always happen with me??? why do i get to read your works after you have written few of its parts?? this is so not fair...

Coming back to the update it was 👏

We never saw Arnav repenting, or redeeming himself ( I dont consider that 'I am sorry for everything' as repent, it lasted for only 2 mins) The way u projected ur thot was marvelous!!! I loved How Khushi held herself strong and stern and Arnav falling to her feet was just the icing on the cake... and did u make them kiss in the temple??? in front of Durga ma???? 😳

:) Yes I did... is that bad? I am not sure about these things.. I thought it might have been sacred for them to re-unite in front of devi maiya... I am sorry if I offended.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Loved the end.. Alls well that ends well.. ❤️ Khushi is the best.. There can be no one like her...

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

it was dhamakedhaar awesome ride

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angel0747

@angel0747

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

You know when I read part I & II of your story, a haunted feel was always there in heart to reach to the end, be it happy or sad. Now that haunt got filled...

Thanks for the beautifully written last part.

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Midnight

@Midnightsorrow

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Nice update lol Arnav went down on his knees.

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Mind-blowing ending. Loved it Dal.

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glamourbird

@glamourbird

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

OMG!! Omg!!😆😆

What an ending!!👏

I personally loved this OS of yours!!😳

Loved how u protrayed the emotions of Khushi & Arnav!!😳

I loved how khushi didnt give up so easily n gave Arnav a piece of her mind, let him know her emotinal turmoil!!😭😭

But the best part was how arnav wroshipped khushi with her kisses, starting from her feet to all the way up!! & lkissing in the temple!! that according to me is the puriest thing... sealing ur love in front of god!!😳😳

wonderful OS!! 😃😃

waiting for ur next one!!😉😉

P.s: Thanks for the PM!!