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Posted: 12 years ago
What an ending!

Arnav asked for her forgiveness
He bend down on his knees
showered her with his kisses,worshiping her all the way!!

I really loved it!

thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Arnav needs to apologize
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Posted: 12 years ago
lvd d endng it ws awesmm
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya


:) Yes I did... is that bad? I am not sure about these things.. I thought it might have been sacred for them to re-unite in front of devi maiya... I am sorry if I offended.



If you ask me my POV no it was not... God watches us anyways and Love is sacred so why we should be ashamed to express something so pure and sacred in front of God??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: munam_13



If you ask me my POV no it was not... God watches us anyways and Love is sacred so why we should be ashamed to express something so pure and sacred in front of God??


Phew Good, I thought I totally messed that up LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god..that was mind numbing...epic end for the story..

every single word and every single emotion was just bang on..

i just loved the way she resisted him..
i didn't want her to give in right away...
that jerk needed some sense passed in through that thick skull...

the best part was when he kissed all the way from her feet to her face...😳
gosh that was breath taking...😳😳




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Posted: 12 years ago
SWEETIE,U MADE ME CRY...THIS'S NOT FAIR...I JUST LOVED IT !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it that you had him realize his mistake and he begged for forgiveness.

She is a goddess, and yes, she needed to be treated as such.

Thank you for the pm and the awesome update.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the concluding part, nothing more pure than professing your sins and proclaiming your love in front of God... glad to see Khushi was strong to the end and Arnav bowed down to her feet in the temple, to me he bowed to DM at the same time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
NCE UPDATE
every1 is vein same feelin a d sam tym wow
poor khushi always she suffer d worst

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