SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

amazing...perfectly put...this scene was an amazing turn for swaron...wish show mein ithna brief se dikhaaya hotha...i mean the emotions and their feelings...its beautiful...this is how swayam and sharon are...

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Okay i know i kept it hanging...i purposely did so cause i wanted you to think upon it. Come on guys we know how our Swayam and Sharon are, can they resist each other?...No they can't😳 so the point was they did share their feelings Sharon ne ek bar soch liya matlab woh karke hi dikhayegi. So i guess you know what would have happened next😊

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Very descriptively written Rutu. 👍🏼 I really like the way you handled the whole showdown. The original scene was a bit open ended. They didn't show how they to that place. We had to assume a lot. But you managed to fill in all the gaps very effectively. And the best part was you manage to stick to the original storyline as much as you could.Nice work. I actually wanted to read something on that showdown. Thanks a lot for writing such a beautiful OS. And yeah, thanks for the PM.

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

👏👏👏awsum...very well portrayed feelings...if possible, continue...thanks for d pm

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing os rutu !!

one of the brilliant os i have read on the historic swaron scene 😃

fantastically written and described 👏

i liked the changes u made to the whole scene 😃

i loved how u gave sharons pov and described what she was going through .

i actually cried while reading abt SwaRons pain , guilt and the undying love that they feel for each other .😭

keep up the good work .👍🏼

thanks for the pm.

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

One of the FINEST and REFINED work of yours..👏

Great OS..😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Beautifully described...I'm actually at a loss for words...You wrote it exceptionally well and if it's not too much to ask, could you please continue the OS and actually write about what happens the next morning ??

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome os rutu
I really loved the changes n it was beautifully written
Please if possible continue it
I really want swaron together after this

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

it was just amazing!!!!! u have chosen that swaron scene which has broke heart of all swaron fans!!!!! I always want to know sharon pov in that scene, becoz cv's never clearly clarify wat sharon think, it is always we fan have to assume & i must tell it was just perfect!!!!

hey plz continue want to know wat happen next

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

*Reserved*

Will get back to this in the evening.:)

*Edited*

Your BEST work,so far.I LOVED how you took one of SwaRon's landmark's scenes,and delved deeper into their psyche...defining every move with explanations.Beautifully worked.:)

You are a great writer,sweets.:)

Keep writing more on SwaRon.:)

Edited by -Sakina- - 13 years ago